
The Sword-Bearing Servant, Part Two
捧剑仆 第二部
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- Completed
- Length
- 109k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 14y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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The layout of the main plot is a bit small, and I feel like something is missing as I look at it.
Why is the ending so sad?
In fact, I think Kong Yan's character shouldn't betray the master…
This ending... My anger soared to the sky!
In fact, not only Xu Kongyan, I was also waiting. But when I saw Xiao Mengyuan touched Xu Kongyan in anger, I was really disappointed. It was a disappointment from deep in my heart. Did Xu Kongyan do something wrong? Maybe, but no matter what the reason, Xiao Mengyuan's behavior is unforgivable! It turns out it's just that. It gave me this feeling. His love is not enough. It's really not enough.
I used my mobile phone to leave you word by word.
Continuing from the previous comment: Prince Yu's love for Liuli is unconditional. He doesn't ask Liuli to do anything for him, but he can give up the world at his fingertips for Liuli without hesitation. What about Xiao Mengyuan? What can he do for empty words, and what can he give up for him? So in fact, your article is very well written, but when I read it, I always feel that something is missing, that is, the characters' emotions are not shocking enough! You must know that forbearing love can also be very moving. But in Xiao Mengyuan and Kong Yan, I only saw the naturalness that came naturally, but I couldn't see the strong emotions that moved me to the point of sadness like the way Prince Yu treated Liuli. I really hope that the author can write a more touching work. You won't let me down, right? I'm waiting to see,
This is Xiao Mengyuan. I'm not talking about him. It's really... Oh, if you are interested in the author, go and read "Legend of Liuli". I forgot the author's name is Han Zhi, but these two characters in the title of the book are enough to find out. It's not that Xiao Mengyuan doesn't like empty words. It's just that the difference between this person and others is obvious. The love of the young prince Liang Chenyu for Prince Liuli makes me sad and moves me. He said something for Liuli. It's been so long that I can't remember it carefully. But it should probably be: "There are ten steps between you and me. I don't ask you and I will take five steps each. As long as you have the slightest feeling for me, I will walk in front of you in these ten steps even with blood and tears." I will be shocked by his love, because his love is strong enough and desperate enough. As the emperor's most valued successor, he would rather stand up to the world for Liuli! Let's look at Xiao Mengyuan again
This is Xiao Mengyuan. I'm not talking about him. It's really... Oh, if you are interested in the author, go and read "Legend of Liuli". I forgot the author's name is Han Zhi, but these two characters in the title of the book are enough to find out. It's not that Xiao Mengyuan doesn't like empty words. It's just that the difference between this person and others is obvious. The love of the young prince Liang Chenyu for Prince Liuli makes me sad and moves me. He said something for Liuli. It's been so long that I can't remember it carefully. But it should probably be: "There are ten steps between you and me. I don't ask you and I will take five steps each. As long as you have the slightest feeling for me, I will walk in front of you in these ten steps even with blood and tears." I will be shocked by his love, because his love is strong enough and desperate enough. As the emperor's most valued successor, he would rather stand up to the world for Liuli! Let's look at Xiao Mengyuan again
The writing is quite good. It's a bit reluctant for me to open a comment section, but I will try my best to persuade them to read JJ in the recommendation.