[One Piece] The Goal: One Piece!

This is really a Pirates fan classic in my heart. The combination of complaining style and adventure story is very interesting. Although there are not many emotional lines, the interaction between Nina and Kidd is very cute. It still looks so good when I revisit it after so many years

It's over. I really saw this in 2023, oh, I really feel so sad. Kidd's dream of being a pirate has come to an end.

Nice! It's really beautiful!

I read it again, ahhhhhhhh, author I love you, I was so moved, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo According. Very well written

Damn, the heroine is so cute, okay?

All in all, I really like my wife's writing. I think it's one of the few good-looking writings among Jinjiang Pirates writings (of course, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables, and it's just for anti-collision purposes.

After a long gap, I finally wrote to comment. This is my favorite OP fanfic, none of them, I like it very much. Maybe the author won't be able to see it if you don't log in to this account, but thank you for writing this article.

Really really beautiful I haven't seen such a satisfying fanfic in a long time. I collected all my dear ones in one go Novice readers don't have the writing skills to write long reviews, so throwing thunder or other comments doesn't seem to be of much help. It's like saying, please don't lock the article. Such a good article should be seen by more people!

Come and write a comment~ First of all, I would like to express my gratitude to the author for writing such a good article. Hmm, where do I start with my thoughts... Please forgive me for my poor expression skills and mental ability. Let's start with Nilu first. I really like this girl's character, and she also likes her because she can spit so well. She has all the characteristics of ordinary people, and she also has extraordinary qualities. She is afraid of death and confused, but she has the courage to stand up at critical moments. Sometimes it's quite admirable. Then there's Kidd. To be honest, my impression of this character is as shallow as paper. I was probably distracted by Luffy when I was watching One Piece.) At the beginning of the article, everything he did and the character traits he expressed made me think that he was a arrogant, conceited, cruel and indifferent person. But when did the impression begin to change? As I watched it, I gradually felt that Captain Kidd had a lot of cute features. He has a straightforward personality and exudes cold air whenever he disagrees with me. When he was in trouble, he said so many times that he was not qualified to follow me. In the end, he failed and left everyone behind. Nelu and I gradually got to know him during our joint adventure journey. The figure that once made people feel scared when they looked at it has become the most solid support in my heart. No matter how dangerous the plot is, as long as Kidd appears, he will be calm and stress-free. He never runs away from anything, and the image of Captain Kidd as strong and reliable has taken root in my heart. Then there are Nolilo, Dovi, Kira, Moz, Bella and others. Because I am stupid, I will not analyze my thoughts one by one. They are all characters with their own distinct personalities, and I think they are portrayed quite well. The charms and cuteness of each of them that I gradually discovered during the trip made me fall in love with them. I was very moved by Nolilo's careful and gentle attitude during Nelu's menstrual period. Also, the other pirate members (most of whom were obviously rough guys) who were always joking around and taking care of Nelu with some care made me feel that they were really good and gentle people. Yes. After reading the whole article, the thing I want to sigh the most is this sentence, no matter who it is. I like them so much... I like everyone in Kidd Pirates like this. The atmosphere of having fun and getting along in normal times, the helping hand in times of crisis... Etc. This is probably the charm of companionship. If all the pirates were like this, I would probably be tempted to go out to sea (laughs) ←bushi The author wrote a living Kidd Pirates and a living Nero. They are all flesh and blood. Maybe this article is not me My favorite pirate fanfic, but it will be one of the pirate fanfics I feel most comfortable watching. Although there are some flaws, they don't affect my good impression. Then on the emotional line, to be honest, I was a little surprised when I saw the drunken chaos [beep] and Kidd's confession. Although the article describes Kidd's increasingly tolerant attitude toward Nilu, I personally felt that the emotional line was a bit unclear in the early stage, but by the end, I felt that it was no longer important. In one chapter, the author said that he knew that Kidd had collapsed. I also saw someone in the comments saying, "What I want to say is that it doesn't actually matter." Regarding the level of OOC, I think it's fine as long as it's not an original character that seems to be wearing a character's skin like "Zoron smiled shyly/Zoron cried like a child after being cheated". It is impossible for the characters in fan fiction to be 100% faithful to the original works, and everyone's understanding of the characters is different. Perhaps Oda is the only one who can truly point to a character and say that his character is broken. He would never be like this. In some fanfics, even if the OOC character does something that is not part of his character, it sometimes makes him or her in the story more attractive. I actually find it quite interesting that the character descriptions in the original novel and the fanfic are different. Fan fiction authors allow us to see many identical but similar characters. This is the charm of fan fiction. What I saw was that the author wrote about Kidd as she understood it. This is Kidd that belongs only to her. What's more, there is no Nilu in the original work, so it's hard to say how Kidd reacted when he found someone he liked. But the author's Kidd would do it. This understanding is enough. Ah, I've been verbose for a long time. It would be great if I could express my thoughts properly. I also know that what I said is messy. In fact, I still have a lot to say, but I'll leave it at that for now. I originally didn't plan to come, but after reading the article, I suddenly felt the urge to post this comment, and to praise the article and the author. I also hope you can see my most honest thoughts. The article is good, and I will always look forward to reading other articles written by the author. I hope you can continue to write articles.

It's good-looking, and every character in it has great personality traits. I like the large writing style, and I also like Kidd.