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"(Woman Transmigrates into a Man) Mom Abandons Dad and Remarries, and I Become the White Moonlight"
"Struggling to Survive Between Rival Hu Regimes"
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Blurb:
What is an ordinary student supposed to do after transmigrating into an ancient society?
Wang Lezhi stayed up all night studying for her final exams, suffered sudden cardiac death, and unexpectedly transmigrated to ancient times.
Her parents were far away in the countryside of Liangzhou, living in a thatched hut while observing mourning rites. They entrusted their delicate, frail daughter to her paternal aunt to raise.
Under the guidance of her aunt and uncle, Wang Lezhi continued her arduous journey of studying and growing up.
Perhaps Heaven took pity on Wang Lezhi, a newcomer to this world, and gave her a golden finger: every time she recited the Huangting Scripture, she could concentrate and think clearly, but her body also became more fragile.
In other words, she grew smarter, but her constitution grew more delicate.
Fortunately, this body also came with her family's inherited beauty. (They say her father used his looks to win her mother's heart.)
And so Wang Lezhi quietly lived in ancient society, becoming famous throughout the surrounding villages for her intelligence, despite her delicate constitution.
Who could have expected the realm to suddenly descend into chaos? The emperor was deposed, the capital was burned, and an age of turmoil began.
Oh, Heaven! Wang Lezhi was on the verge of tears. How am I supposed to survive in chaotic times with a constitution like this?
Dear readers, please don't scrutinize too closely whether this story is historically accurate. It is a reimagining set against a historical backdrop, and some parts may not conform to historical fact!
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Theme: Even in chaotic times, you have to keep studying hard.
So fast, although I know that we are very close to troubled times. The foreign invasion of the young queen mother is imminent, and collapse is just a matter of straw. Our heroine has not prepared anything yet. Now she is like a sweet potato. Her grandfather is a world-famous scholar, so she is a natural political bargaining chip.
The relationship between the characters is so confusing that I don't even know who I'm talking about. Let's start a paragraph and comment directly. There are too many character relationships that need to be sorted out. For example, the sentence about the brother-in-law is famous for his quick wit in the countryside. What are the temperaments of the two siblings? Who is the sibling here? It's so confusing. The first chapter can even put people off. It's all in simplified Chinese, but it's like classical Chinese that you have to break up the sentences and figure out the meaning of the sentences.
My wife's writing style is really good, and the setting of this article is really good. The foreshadowing of the court part is really okay, but there are too many sketches. From the beginning, the background is laid out in pieces, which makes it difficult to see clearly, and the perspective switches too frequently. It was really tiring to read. The heroine has not yet stood up, and Xue has stood up faster than the heroine. My wife may feel that she has explained everything, but for those of us reading the book, many things have not been explained clearly. Come on! Still looking forward to it.
In this chapter, Mrs. Wang was just asking normally, asking if she wanted to go back to Liangzhou and did she have her own opinions? She was said to be a "woman's opinion". It has been stated before that Mrs. Wang does not understand politics. Isn't this man able to marry her just because of Mrs. Wang's innocence? He's still poor even though he doesn't know a lot of Chinese characters. If Mr. Wang had the brains, would he be able to fall in love with him? Even if he throws the cup, he will get angry at his wife if he doesn't have the ability. And in Chapter 3, can't the heroine push away a man when he approaches? He was still frozen there. He must have lost his wits. It was not that his life was in danger and he was too scared to move. I was scolded all over my face later, but I was so angry that I didn't even refute. Do I have no mouth? After reading Huang Ting Jing for so many years, your brain has not improved at all? And I was not offended by the man's behavior throughout the whole process. Is that behavior normal?
The writing feels a bit sloppy, and the narrative is not very clear.
Oh my God, I didn't understand until I read one chapter. This long dialogue at the beginning "Asu, this time you return to Liangzhou to observe mourning, you have to watch Zizhen carefully..." It was not said by the heroine's father, but by her aunt Wang. Oh my God, I feel mixed. I don't know what to say. At first I saw the article and said that the man in white clothes and a white jade hairpin urged me. I thought this was said by a man. Good guy. After reading this chapter, I realized that Wang Chun, the heroine's father, Maybe his name is Wang Chun, but he also has a nickname called Zizhen. . . . . [Covering face, laughing and crying]
Which one is Zizhen? There are so many names. They are both words and names. Ahhhh.
He looked down upon Lanzhu and his concubines. Why was there still a concubine at home?
At the beginning of the first chapter, I read it back and forth three or four times before I could make sense of the part about the sister who had a concubine. This short paragraph of the relationship between the characters was really clear and I could read it and put it into the character's imagination [covering my face and crying] [covering my face and laughing and crying] [covering my face and laughing and crying]
To be honest, the first chapter is a bit messy, and the characters are not sorted out and explained clearly, but the writing is so attractive, let's read it again.