[Reborn!] By Your Side for Life

I can't write a long review, so I'll just change it to a few suggestions, which I hope the author will accept. First of all, regarding the setting of the heroine, I can only say Su, GIOTTO's sister or something. Secondly, Hibari Kyouya is a bit idealistic and would be broken if you look at it in ordinary terms. The author should be careful. Then, the writing style is a bit tender, which is what is commonly called LULI. Finally, considering that the author is more serious, I gave it two points.

A long review written for Xiaohan It was an extremely sunny morning. I didn't know if I could finish my homework yet, so I started writing a long review again. The male protagonist, Skylark, is ranked first among the men I want to marry most in the year. It is understandable that he attracted my attention. In fact, I prefer Li Baoen. But I also love Skylark~ As a comic that is loved by rotten girls, there are actually more BL novels about Tutor than BG. In this era where Mary Sue and Xiao Baijun are all over the world, it is not easy to find a more normal tutor romance. So Xiaohan, I love you. Although I have never been short of books, I still love people who can contribute good novels to me. I love the setting of this book, which is that Song of Songs will never grow old. But it seems that Mr. Skylark will still grow old~ Even if Mr. Skylark is still as handsome as ever in his forties or fifties, wouldn't it still be incompatible with Yage, who looks only about 20 years old? I also helped you catch bugs, but I just left a message below where I found the typo. I won't leave it in a long review, mainly because I'm afraid of forgetting while I'm reading it. The name "Huahuishuo Ge'er" really doesn't sound very nice. Do you want to consider changing it to another one? In terms of character creation, it is still good, at least I didn't feel that it was out of shape. (I burst into tears.) Life is really lonely. I couldn't find anyone to do my essays early in the morning, so I lost my motivation. I admit that after I wrote the problem, I started to make up the word count again. By the way, I don't seem to have seen anyone from the Amp family show up. Could it be that the most powerful little princess in their family was kidnapped like this and they didn't even have any sympathy? What's more, Song of Songs finally lost his ability. Ya Ge was a girl who was raised by them at the expense of countless family lives. Wouldn't it be strange if she was let go so easily? I can't figure it out! Can Xiaohan write a side story to explain~ It drifted by silently, and then drifted by silently. I really don't know what I want to write anymore. In fact, since many people say that I am a cheater, I have recently tried hard to make my long comments less of a cheater. But I found out how to make up the word count without cheating. In fact, in most tutoring novels, Skylark's falling in love with each other is always a sudden accident. Xiaohan, you can appropriately reduce the number of times you appear in the article, because that can improve the reader's sense of involvement! Where the author has something to say, you can feel free to say it without restraint. This is my suggestion! In fact, I have always been very interested in the skylark, because I also want to know how a bird that is definitely not a myna or a parrot can speak so fluently and can even sing. This is the golden finger in the original work~ But considering that Tutoring is a magical and almost fantasy comic, don't worry about this little golden finger. When I think of Goldfinger, I think of Fan Lihua who was shown on TV recently. I really can't help but complain, is this a fantasy world? There are still 70 words left, I have to work hard to get them together. Bai Huahua always plays a tragic villain in novels like this. In fact, sometimes I wonder when he will succeed in taking power~ It would be best to fight against Liu Daogui, because I lack love for that one! Okay, 1,000 words is enough, I won't talk nonsense~ I wish your new book performance will continue to improve~ The background is a bit flowery? Have you considered changing to another one?

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Very well written, spread flowers~

I read it in one go and left a message. In fact, I was looking for it and wanted to leave a message in front of it, but I couldn't wait to read it below, so I didn't leave a message. Now it's made up. Zihan's articles are very good. I look forward to your new articles.

Look at this It suddenly occurred to me that there is also an episode of InuYasha that is a stage play. They are all made up from the outside.

Awesome last sentence Well~ What a hateful prince, he actually has a concubine, there is nothing I can do, I'd better find another prince! Too funny Hahaha~

The Maldives honeymoon incident mentioned in the previous ten years finally happened in this time and space...

= =! Very good drama

Big~~The cover has been changed Very cool!