Blurb: (My next novel will be [Iris, Do Not Part].)
A cunning, fox-like top who seems sweet and innocent x a beautiful, strong, tragic bottom who is aloof and untouchable
Xia Yi has been a "top 1" for years, but during summer break in his junior year, Bai Jinlan successfully tops him.
Bai Jinlan is refined and domestic, wild and sweet. He's at the top in both looks and wealth. There's only one thing: at night, he's simply too intense.
The two burn like kindling, and their time together is wild.
Xia Yi thinks their future is bright. They'll defy the rules of the gay community and find happiness together, until--
"Bai Jinlan, you won this bet, but you sure kept this going for a long time. Don't tell me you caught real feelings?"
Then comes a familiar, lazy voice. "Real feelings? Ha! He looks so proper, but in bed he's a shameless tease. Someone this amazing is impossible to find, even with a lantern. I'll think about it once I'm bored of him."
In an instant, Xia Yi feels as though he's plunged into an icy abyss.
**
The day they officially break up, Bai Jinlan's eyes are red. He looks at Xia Yi with hurt, reluctance, and helplessness. "Can I hold you one last time?"
Xia Yi's heart softens for a moment, and Bai Jinlan wraps his arms around his waist.
He thinks it's a farewell hug, but then his neck hurts. The bite mark Bai Jinlan leaves becomes a permanent brand.
"Xia Yi, no one's ever dared to treat me like this. Remember, this isn't over."
**
Later, they lose contact. Seven years pass, and on the eve of Xia Yi's engagement, he goes on a business trip to Brooklyn.
When he wakes, the man is standing beside his hotel bed, leisurely taking off his belt. He shrugs with a smile, his voice low and gentle as he approaches like a snake.
"Yi Yi, how could you do this to me, hmm? Even if it wasn't me, it couldn't be someone else. I really don't want to lose my temper with you, and I don't want you to know just how awful I can be, but my heart hurts so much. It's all because of you... Break up? When did we ever break up? We were just giving each other the silent treatment for seven years, three months, and six days. It's time to make up, isn't it, baby?"
Warning: This has a very strong old-school melodramatic feel!! Very strong!! The whole thing is a minefield. It's a story born from a minefield.
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Note: The story underwent a major revision in early May 2025, with some plot points and characterizations changed.
1. The top is a virgin; the bottom is not. (The novel won't go into detail, and this is mentioned only in passing. It happened long before the main story begins.)
2. Both leads have psychological issues and aren't very mature. They need to grow.
3. This won't be abandoned, and it will have a happy ending. I guarantee completion.
4. Look up the specific content warnings yourself. Personal attacks of any kind are not welcome.
5. If you really want to attack me, there's nothing I can do. I'll just lie under the covers and cry quietly in the middle of the night.
Theme: Love is sincere and cannot abide deception.
Gong's sister is outrageous. Why did she drug Shou? Just for the sake of attacking Shou. She doesn't respect Shou at all. Unbelievable
This mother really feels a little tired of standing and talking... The plot advancement relies entirely on the supporting characters to create difficulties.
This mom is really hard to describe
This is the first time I hate an attack so much. Let Shou be beautiful and don't harm others.
The early stage is still very interesting. Two serious people depend on each other, are frivolous and indifferent. They think that they will never meet in this life. As a result, a bet, a companionship, every dependence, and every moment of sharing difficulties have made each other the most indelible presence in each other's lives. Until this relationship collapsed, full of violence, sadness, blood and betrayal, but like this. Feelings and barriers. They are all indelible. But the plot after they had conflicts and betrayal, I felt that it was not as good as it was before the changes were completed. The first was the emotional entanglement, I remember. Shou went to the United States after he became famous, and then met Gong, and then the forced plot happened later. The logic here is clear and reasonable, Shou's mother's concept, and the change of thinking are also normal and smooth. Moreover, although Gong and Shou have no contact during this period, they are not engaged or have new relationships. I think the sudden addition of a character who wants to be engaged to Shou and then get together with Gong feels like a betrayal to that person, and it also makes Gong and Shou's love less special and less entangled and entangled. What if Shou comes back to meet Gong, and then Shou says that he really doesn't love the person he was with? Isn't this too unfair to that person, and is it too irresponsible to this relationship? Moreover, the ending is too hasty. It ended in just a few chapters, and there was a gap of 7 years. If you haven't seen someone for 7 years, even if you have a deep relationship, you can't rekindle the relationship all of a sudden. This kind of logic is very strange. In fact, I feel that the original version is really good, including emotional entanglements, logical lines, and completeness. After changing to this version, I feel that the smoothness has been reduced a lot, and there are not as many entanglements and pulls as before. I used to like the early stage attack and reception the most. The description of the love between the two, as well as the betrayal in the later period, I still prefer the plot where they return to the United States and are forced to return to the United States after not seeing each other for a long time. This will make the love more complicated and the relationship more progressive. However, the version after this change does not have such a feeling. It's about constant entanglement and entanglement, without the more complicated feelings that I haven't seen in many years. And I found that the plot of Shou breaking up with his first love interest in college has also been changed. I feel that after the modification, it is still not as good as the original version, because from the perspective of the boy, this description makes him actually a scumbag, and he is a scumbag, and he has such feelings for Shou. Such complex emotions, admiration mixed with unwillingness, so entanglements are definitely inevitable, but there are very few entanglements in the current version. He has no obsession with Shou, so his love for Shou is not very real, and the portrayal of the opponent's characters is also less three-dimensional. The plot of Yao Shenzhi later made me feel a bit baffled. The finale is coming soon, so why not clarify the emotional lines of the characters clearly? In just a few hundred words, the relationship between Shou and her current boyfriend was broken up, and then Gong and Shou were together again. This was too fast, and the change in relationship and the establishment of love were too sudden. In fact, I really wanted to give this couple a better ending. Whether it was in terms of characters or plot, the author's writing in the early stage was really excellent, especially before major changes were made. I was very excited and moved when I read it. I can sympathize with the characters' life emotions and the love between them, but after the modification, many eye-catching parts are missing, as well as the ending. I didn't finish it before, but now this ending makes me feel more uncomfortable. So I implore the author to change it back to the original version, or change the plot again, because this new plot is really not as smooth and smooth as the original, not as logically clear as the original, and not as fascinating as the original love.
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The next book opens "Psychics must also abide by labor laws" Copywriting: High school student Yaozi watched an unknown videotape with her classmates. Seven days later, she and her classmates died in strange circumstances. When Yaozi's family was sorting out their belongings, they accidentally discovered this videotape and died mysteriously one after another. Qin Dubai, a fledgling genius psychic, was entrusted by the police station to investigate this matter. On the first day of the investigation, he leisurely watched the "curse tape" while eating popcorn. In the image, a man sat in front of the piano and played the piano gracefully. His face was pale, as if he had just climbed out of cold water, and he did not look like a living person. Just when Qin Dubai raised his eyebrows to admire the good looks of this buddy, suddenly, the man in the image slowly turned his head, looked straight at Qin Dubai outside the screen, curled his lips and smiled, saying silently: "You are next." Seeing this, Qin Dubai took a sip of Coke with disdain and said mockingly: "You idiot, you don't know how to keep pace with the times. How many people are still watching the video tape now? Come on, come out and I will teach you how to use your mobile phone. Next time you directly link to the video, there will always be curious fools who click in. You have to be diligent in your business even if you are a ghost, do you understand?"
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Yao Shenzhi is really nothing
Don't use the family knife to kill me 55555