Self-reliant Taoist temple heiress x arrogant, cunning demon hunter
When you've worked hard to make your Taoist temple thrive and are finally seeing results, a System finds you. What would you choose?
Xie Xinghuan, heir to the Xuan Zhen Temple, is a passionate young socialist of the modern era.
Before she even had a chance to make a difference and build up the temple, she was tragically transported into the book "Descent," where demons and monsters exist alongside humans, and had to begin surviving in the wilderness.
Thanks, but she'd rather lie flat.
[Host, you can't! You still need to help the male and female leads complete the plot.]
Whatever. She'd refuse.
[Host, you can't! You can still summon the Divine Dragon and return to the modern world!]
From then on, she diligently played her part in advancing the story and, along the way, became a summoner: the kind who can summon a Divine Dragon.
Xie Xinghuan: Wait, is this even reasonable??? Where would a Divine Dragon come from in a socialist society!!! I want to go back to my Taoist temple!
The first time Lu Yifu met Xie Xinghuan, she was curled up inside a coffin, asking everyone she met, "Have you ever seen a dragon?"
? This person's brain must not be working properly.
Little scene:
Xie Xinghuan cradled the fish that had hatched from an egg, gripped by deep self-doubt.
Lu Yifu's whole body was trembling. After laughing for a long while, he finally said, "So this is the dragon you were looking for? I should've just caught you one. Then you wouldn't have to ask everyone you meet."
One-on-one romance. Both leads are sexually inexperienced!
The male lead is the original novel's villain! The original male and female leads won't be vilified!
Theme: Promote excellent traditional culture.
I haven't read it yet, but I feel suffocated when I read the comments. They are all about teaching the author how to write. There are no other comments from readers at all.
When will it be updated? If you want to gain weight, check it out [question mark]
It's really tiring to read some books, and I have to try to understand what he means. 💔
Push away the dark clouds and finally see the bright moon. Have a good rise.
It would be better to change "since" to "so".
Would it be better to change "The baby can regenerate" to "This willow branch can regenerate" [Spread flowers]
"Mo Jingchun is the heroine of the original book, and she will never die for no reason." In addition, I found that what I said before seems wrong. Regarding whether the personal pronoun after the comma is omitted, it still needs to be analyzed in detail. It is not strange to add it in some places, but it is a bit strange in others.
Is it better to delete "she" here? [Three Flower Cat Head]
"The monk in white holds a Buddhist bead and slowly walks out from behind the big tree." The subject is the same. Is it better to omit the personal pronoun after the first comma?
"Lu Yifu's eyes suddenly changed, blocking Xie Xing's return" 🤗 (Do you think it would be better without the demonstrative pronoun?)