I am guiding you, as fate’s flowers quietly come into bloom
I am serving you, faithfully writing these words for you
A guileless gaze from youth, meeting you as you blossomed into beauty
A fleeting splendor, a sudden understanding of the confusion that lingered all day
You say I’m nervous, that I care just like everyone else
You say I’m adrift, with an imagination no one can restrain
This slender, ordinary body bears the weight it was born with
Trusting the words of those who came before, dreaming of fulfilling life’s purpose
There’s no need to regret what’s lost, so don’t deliberately cling to what you gain
What is taken away is forgotten, or else what remains becomes a memory
... A typo... ... Is the "text"...= =||| Come on, adults~~~Spread flowers
How do you plan to edit your essay as an adult?
555 It's time to collect essays
The author is probably not talking about you. I always find it a bit wordy, especially the words in parentheses. . . . . If you can save it, save it. There's a lot of nonsense = =
You haven't noticed anything wrong yet? You're too nervous
I'm not saying, can you write it longer?
Each article has very few words. I don't know how the article will develop in the future, but the introduction is still good, so I will give you a rating and encourage it. I hope it will get better and better in the future:)
I can't help it anymore, I really can't help it anymore, my eyelids are fighting. Haha~~~~~~Don't let the dark circles under your eyes get darker, or you'll get caught. I'm going to sleep now! I'll come back next time to fill in the text. Everyone, please go to bed early
Stop talking nonsense and write it quickly