Has the Fragile Mountain God Died Today?

First of all, congratulations on the completion, and then let me talk about my opinion. It may not sound good, but it is really not a curse but a total denial. If I have to say it, it is probably because people have different ideas. Okay, let's start the text. I think your friend, the author, is right. With the proliferation of rebirth and time travel systems, I was surprised to see this worldview at first, but I was a little disappointed after reading it. Because the writing was not long and the worldview was not spread out, I felt that the world presented to me in the end was narrow, and the finale felt like a light touch. Is it a retrograde step in technology to eliminate pollution sources with one click and even resurrect everyone? Let's not talk about other issues, but the resurrection in this context is still too unrealistic. It feels like a child's play of life and death. If it is a satire on Cthulhu's alien body, the strange cycle of infinite flow, etc., It would be easy to say, because it is a play, and it is foreshadowed from the beginning. Humans escaped this death, but this one is passive, resurrected out of the will of the gods. Although he has experienced this world in person, at least there is a hook that humans can be resurrected, otherwise the look and feel will be the same as deus ex machina. There is also the development of science and technology. In the past, it looked like today's society. After hundreds of years of restoration and reconstruction, it still looks like today's society. Although the technology tree was crooked during the period and relied on spiritual power, over the past few years and hundreds of years, they gradually developed into what they are now. In addition, over-exploitation means the utilization of resources. After pollution, cultural loss is serious, but there was definitely a period of rapid technological development (technological issues are not important to the plot of this article, but they can increase the sense of reality and identity. Making good use of technology settings may also lead to another direction) Although taking away the blood of the demon clan is a punishment, the problem is that blood is obtained by human beings intermarrying with strangers in order to survive. It is considered a legitimate way and is the result of hundreds of years of evolution and development. As a result, once you return to the past, it will look like hundreds of years of struggle have been negated. Li Jin has a bunch of high-level problems. In order to save the New Era, he implemented the god-building plan. The good ones are not firm, and the bad ones are not firm. To be honest, it is not flattering. Moreover, there are several such people and there is a lot of space. Even the final reconstruction was made by them. I understand their decision to save themselves and they have high status and cannot be easily changed. However, there is still no explanation for this result. It is just that the gods don't care. But the author needs to give readers a suitable explanation, not that the gods don't care, and Xie's unforgiveness Human beings have to give an explanation to the gods. Even if the gods don't need it, humans must give their own explanations. It's a pity that no one is suitable to stand up and give this explanation. This involves the entire plot. In my humble opinion, the older generation of Lijin Baiyun Mountain continues the god-making plan, and the younger generation unknowingly becomes a potential god with the help of the older generation. He was an accomplice and had a good relationship with Qing Yan, but later the incident came to light and the junior resisted and was imprisoned and escaped to help. The point is that there are a bunch of people in the camp who are pure and good and are in high positions of power. After the incident, they can kick Li Jin and others down and give a suitable explanation. Throughout Qingyan, I have good friends, but their status is average, and the top management is screwed. In fact, the New Era can write more about the corruption at the top and the injustice at the bottom, the contempt for the lives of the bottom, the hierarchy, overthrow and change, etc. In other words, this background is such that it is easy for such things to happen, but the people at the bottom are not well displayed. The people with the deepest connection with the gods should be ordinary people, the people at the bottom, and the people at the bottom have not received a good education, so Due to ignorance, they will pursue faith and regard gratitude as a god. They are the easiest firewood to consume and the largest main force of resistance. To write a long story, Qing Yan can come to the ground floor to stay for a period of time. After the incident, the whole floor is sealed off. During the arrest, he lurks on the ground floor, and then subtly changes some people around him and changes their minds. These people are the sparks and hope. It was good to write about small characters, but it didn't become a breakthrough point, and it still lacked good people. In short, the human side can't be ruined, and it can't be without some highlights. The gods sense the good intentions in the dangers of the world and provide help, but humans still need to make the decision as to the outcome. It feels like Yu Old Man moved the mountain. The point is that Yu Old Man moved the mountain first, and God was moved to help. The point is still human. Even if there is no God, even if there is no result in his life, he still does it without hesitation. Humanity has not put an end to the disasters it has caused. However, what I said is quite messy and contains a lot of subjective opinions. Don't take it too seriously and accept rebuttals. Anyway, it's good to finish it! People will also make progress.

How should I put it? It feels very strange that Xie suffered so much, being deceived and concealed by others. In the end, the punishment for many of the initiators was just to take back the ability of their bloodline. But depending on the situation, most people had their abilities taken back. What kind of punishment is this? And even though Xie had suffered such a big sin and said he would not forgive, the result was a happy ending???? Why is that fox teaching near the mountain? Why didn't the initiators receive any punishment at all? Is it just because Qing is a mountain god? Looking at the ending, I think Qing's reasons for forgiveness are acceptable, but as for Xie, the hurt and grievances he suffered are just over? I don't understand. The injuries suffered by Xie and the punishment of those who caused the instigation make me feel a little disgusted. They played Xie on applause and the final punishment was to make them as powerless as ordinary people. Isn't this punishment too insignificant? Even their endings are relatively good in comparison. Those who retired after their achievements and Bai's research will be carried forward in the future. The name must be the same, that fox me I don't understand even more. She is teaching, and I don't understand. Maybe Xie's heart is very generous. As a bystander, I felt like vomiting blood when I saw them. Isn't this ending a bit too light-hearted?

Although but... It is the fault of this era and the system. It is also difficult to be a teacher. The protagonist gave me the feeling that because he stands tall, he will use his own height to look down on the new era humans. He obviously has a very good attitude towards Dienu. The protagonist understands the feudal thoughts of Dienu and Oriole and knows that this is not their own problem. However, his attitude towards other priests is not as good as Dienu and the others. The same goes for the old man who planted peaches before. The protagonist himself He said that he wanted to help the monkey grow good peaches, but he was directly outsourced to the old man. It would have been nice if someone else planted them for him. As a result, he felt like a boss squeezing his subordinates 😩 and had to send back the plan if it was not good and redo it. The sense of deja vu was too strong, and he was not even willing to draw a pie. I understand the protagonist's confidence and height brought by the culture and heritage behind him, but is this also a kind of arrogance? It's like comparing modern people with people from two thousand years ago to see whose country's cultural heritage is richer. If he were an ordinary person, I wouldn't have such high moral requirements for him, but he is both a protagonist and a god...

I still want to say that the ending feels anticlimactic.

Also, can you update some of their extras when you feel inspired in daily life🥰? I'm really looking forward to seeing their daily life in the future😘😘😘

[Gotou] My writing will become better in the future, can I write longer? This subject matter is quite interesting, but I feel it's a pity that it's so short.

It's so good. I've reached the reading block. I haven't read a complete novel in three months. I actually finished it in one sitting tonight. The subject matter is very novel, and the portrayal of Qing Yan and Xie Qi is really good. This article makes me feel like a soft feather falling slowly from the sky and finally resting on a warm land. This story of a long drought really warmed me up.

Finished watching it on 26.03.07, It's great!

So they are the butchers?

An article about my feelings at the beginning of the new year. It's so well written. Teacher, I really think it's so well written ❤️ I always thought that the final outcome would be God's various punishments for people, but you gave me a different ending. I didn't understand it at first. I thought I would always be angry, but then I felt relieved. We have different identities. We always struggle with them because we are not Qingyan, so we can't understand. But maybe it's like what Qingyan said, you are not God, so you can choose not to forgive, and you are not him, so you can not understand. Wow wow wow the teacher is great!!!!! The divinity of Qingyan written by the teacher is really too strong [Good Luck Lotus] Finally, I really like the various interpretations of the teacher's words. I really like it very much and feel very touched [Cat's Claw] I like the teacher, please keep writing! 🎆💪