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*Love-rival story / college campus / aloof girl x scheming puppy
After she starts dating her boyfriend, Lin Zhen meets his roommate at the place where she works.
She assumes he is just a stranger she happened to meet once, but he keeps showing up in her line of sight.
When her boyfriend is there, he's there. When her boyfriend isn't, he's there too.
Lin Zhen thinks something is a little strange, but that's all.
She treats anyone who can boost her sales with the utmost courtesy. ^^
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After breaking up, Lin Zhen catches Xu Zhuo following her the whole way home.
She repays him for everything with a cup of milk tea, thinking she can put an end to the bond that had accidentally formed between them over the past two weeks.
But he sees hope in that cup of milk tea.
Later, her useless boyfriend is gone, but Xu Zhuo is still there.
A little troublemaking scene:
Xu Zhuo keeps appearing in front of Lin Zhen, leaving obvious clues everywhere, but Lin Zhen still doesn't break up with her boyfriend.
In the midst of his despair, a friend casually says,
After reading the last book "Hitchhiking Monthly Plan", I really wanted to write a long review, but I was beaten to death by the social work. The process of fattening up the new book "Look at Me" made me feel unbearable because I found that my PhD classmates were a little afraid that their writing was not good enough. Closer to home, the growth story of handsome boys and beautiful girls, destined love, and mutual nourishment is a realistic fairy tale. The writing is good, and the dreamy color is charming enough; but the overly good arrangement makes people feel too boring. Both books by Doctoral Students have a great advantage - they first describe the true, fragile, and inadequate parts of the protagonist as a human being, starting from the ordinary, and then slowly unfolding the flashes of tenderness and irritability and anguish in real life situations. So those mutual aids, predestined connections, chance encounters, and chance encounters that everyone writes about are like the crispy butter in a cake, just the right embellishment. You see, Lin Zhen, Xu Zhuo, and Jin Yue all have dark colors and selfish ways, and that's okay. Life is not black and white, no matter how bad a person is, he has self-consistent logic. Therefore, many articles write the protagonist who is too good and too cheerful, which is not good. He is like a fool. Whether it is a giving personality or a little sun, it also needs energy. As for Xu Zhuo, I don't think he is so selfless and unrepentant, or so intoxicated, but it is true that his charm is not as great as that of Lin Zhen. This book is called "Look at Me", but the ink is a little lacking when it comes to Lin Zhen in Xu Zhuo's eyes. When a person looks at another person, curiosity is the first step of love, but the more curious he is, the more sides he sees, and the more sides he has, the more he discovers the various colors and habits of the whole person. Even if there is a conflict with himself, he still wants to be together and do something for her. I think this part is something that PhD students can think about again? That is, these two people have not shown much about each other and the world. This is by no means a criticism, I think it can be better and better, because the protagonists of "Hitchhiking" are working adults, their scenes are diverse, their concepts conflict greatly, and the two people communicate with each other a lot. The situation of these two innocent teenagers in college is also much more embarrassing, hard to say. Lin Zhen's image is richer than that of Ge Han. She still maintains healthy interpersonal relationships with the outside world after being traumatized, which is particularly good! Injury, recovery, scars, and continuing to live are normal. Even if it weren't for Xu Zhuo, Lin Zhen would have new boyfriends, good friends, annoying greasy men and friendly strangers filling her world. Compared with the previous book, the character language, life scenes and detail processing in this book are much more natural. If you want to add some plot richness and character thinking, I think you can discuss the teacher's class content? There are also group assignments and campus singing competitions. It's also good to be a volunteer or audience member. It's also good to watch other people's activities and chat. Introducing some teachers or social adult characters will make it richer~ I feel a little bit, a little bit regretful that the relationship between Lin Zhen and Xu Zhuo was too accidental, but I know that this may be an important part of the plot that the PhD classmates worked hard to design from the beginning. Her mother's love nourished Zhenzhen through her friends, and Xu Zhuo took the risk to warm another cold person. Mainly, the setting of roommate and girlfriend is relatively new and recent. Adding the son of an old friend to the game, I personally feel, dilutes the sense of reality. Because what we seem to be focusing on is not a sweet fairy tale, but a realistic, ordinary but never the same love. In addition, the group portraits in this article are very good. Each character is not a flat NPC or balance. They have their own different handling methods and speaking habits, and they have a sense of being alive who does not agree with each other but allows differences to exist. The interpersonal relationships in the boys' dormitory are very real, haha, and the girls' dormitory is very sweet and supportive of each other. I wonder if it would be too offensive to recommend other novels to the Doctor? But I have recently read a few novels that are very good at writing from the male protagonist's perspective. If you think it's OK and it won't cause any trouble, I'll leave a message later~ It's been many years since I wrote a review on the web version. It seems like I've gone back to when I wrote my first long review in 2009... It was still the same account. I was still in high school at that time, hahaha. I talked nonsense for a while, but because of my professional relationship, it seemed a bit preachy. I hope that the doctor can write as much as he can while he still has enthusiasm. Whether words fail to convey the meaning or whether it is like divine help, perhaps this is a way of our existence.
After reading Love and Reason, I discovered Dr. Egg, and then read this book again. It was really shocking! Tasty! Please keep creating! The disadvantage is that it is too short and not enough to see...
It's really striking that the male protagonist can think of this detail.
A belated happy birthday to Zhen Zhen
I'm actually quite worried about the heroine's confession. After all, the ex-boyfriend can tell her that she's having an affair with someone else without any reason, so he may use this to attack the heroine in the future. Maybe the author won't write this, but I always feel inexplicably worried.
Teacher, I personally don't think it's as interesting as the first half now, but the previous part (that is, when I haven't broken up with my ex-boyfriend) is very interesting 🐶
Wow, wow, it's so beautiful. The doctor is so happy that I want to cry. Zhen Zhen wants to be happy forever!!!
?? Lovely Zhenzhen: Happy birthday, may you always be happy and bright!
This guy is not very good at giving gifts. I originally wanted to give them to him in the previous comment.
Let's all take a look at this sweet love story. Stories with the heroine as the main character are good stories [Spreading Flowers]