Jiajia

I was just deeply attracted by this story. When I wanted to say something, I didn't know where to start. It was broken and regretful, but it was also the BE aesthetics that deeply attracted me. No one would not sigh when the glass shattered and the new snow melted.

This is really a very good article. No one can avoid the words fate and redemption. The delicate brushstrokes, cinematic shots, and mastery of color and emotion are all rare. Jiajia, I want to see you finish the movie.

Very good. I seem to have seen the author talk about his inner struggles during the writing process in the comment area at some time, so I will reply with a general comment more seriously. The author writes very gently, creating picturesque scenes and characters, thoroughly describing the setting of illness and the Wilde-style aesthetic protagonist, and developing Fu's character arc. The structure is relatively well-organized, and it can be seen that many psychological undertones are consciously fulfilled at the end. At present, the author is good at writing atmosphere, psychology, and character. He is well prepared in character biographies and is very sophisticated in narrative. However, his imagination of plot and background is slightly inferior - but his fluent narrative and beautiful writing make up for this. To put it bluntly, it even makes some descriptions or settings that are a bit awkward written by others seem very reasonable. There is nothing wrong with a ruler being longer and an inch being shorter. I have been following this article since the serialization period and made two small suggestions that may be more practical. The first is that in terms of writing style, each chapter has a bit too much lyrical and psychological description, because the rhetoric and lyricism are too full, and the serialization period somewhat affects the reading experience. It feels better to watch it in a coherent manner after it is finished. Just kidding, is the author watching and favoring Jiajia like other male protagonists? Second, on this basis, the plot is a bit old-fashioned. If you do not rely on rapid advancement of the plot, it will be difficult to retain readers of the serialization period simply by relying on writing, ideas, and scenes, especially at the speed of updating only one chapter every day. I clearly remember two points that made me feel a bit cliched and scratching my head: how come the existential problems are solved through filming again (I definitely don't blame this, after reading the whole article), and why someone has a secret identity. (Other readers may think differently). However, I know that writing is the externalization of one's own personality, and creativity and innovation are also difficult processes that cannot be easily modified. The author will also have his own aesthetic preferences and expressions, and I have no intention of influencing them. This review is not a criticism, it just means that I am willing to devote time to this novel and keep watching you (wow that sounds chilling). I hope you have a pleasant day regardless of whether you can write something that satisfies you or not.

Compared to the moon itself, Jiajia may be more like moonlight, soft but also clear 🙏

Wow, the smell is so right. [Sunglasses] This is what I want. Old Cheng has finally appeared. Why is he also ill? Is it because of his family, or... I'm actually a little curious about what happened to Cheng during the time he disappeared 🤩 I feel like I need to take back what I said in the copywriting. "I was surprised that many people loved him." In the next chapter, is Fu Wenyu (not sure if I want to call him this, it feels like it's not only blood and name that trap Wenye, but also his heart that took a long time to figure out because he was young) is going to appear [Cat Head] Maybe a visit to the flowing water table will be staged later? Mei Director Mi Yue, Miss Meng Song Jianshuang... I am a little curious about Ji Yinhong's reaction, but there is not enough space, and he himself is a very restrained careerist, so he will probably restrain himself and be polite and distant.

OMG, what a smooth ending. But will the movie Jiajia filmed still be released?

I cried so much that I have no more recruits. Please make a sequel 😭

I fainted from crying. I really have no choice.

The sequelae of chasing the article, I don't dare to read it until it's finished, I'm most afraid of An Heng, and it's too uncomfortable to catch up halfway [Joker]

Jiajia, beautiful, gentle and dazzling Jiajia, everything is the worst, but everything is the best. In the absence of any pain or disease, your parents and love will be with you forever.