The Bright Moon Shines on Green Pines

Here it comes! Very relaxed and clean writing style. I often think about what I will do after I become rich and free overnight. I think I will manage my life well! This article fulfilled my little wish owo. The writing style is plain and delicate, as comfortable as boiled water. The character shown by the heroine in life is particularly gentle and loving, like the kind of little girl who is full of energy and living a good life. The ambiguous mental journey of the interaction with the hero is too cute, right? (Marmot screams) Is this the happiness of others? I want to turn into a dark mouse and peek at their happiness...

Hi, it's me~ I collected it before, so I'm going to read it slowly today. I've read Chapter 5 first. This story is quite heart-warming, and it's also the first book signed by the author! Congratulations! Seeing that I have favorite parts now, I also have some suggestions. If there is any misunderstanding in the plot, the author please ignore it and just accept my praise! The author is the best! ▼The part I like: 1. The heroine Gu Yueming is a very typical urban migrant worker. I think this system is very interesting hahahahaha! Healthy living system right? (Luxury for modern people, hahahahaha), this setting is very realistic and interesting. She is now resigning and moving. As a sub-healthy person, she is bound by the system and forced to live a healthy life. This process is actually the same as after I resigned (I am not kidding)... It is a healthy urban migrant worker's transformation process, and every detail is very resonant. The male protagonist Qiao Qingsong impressed me very much when he first appeared on the scene. The setting of the senior who has been secretly in love for ten years + the neighbor has a sense of destiny. He is mature and stable and talks little, but he is silently observant. The interaction with Gu Yueming is very natural and comfortable, and there is no nonsense. It is quite good. 2. The overall reading is very smooth and refreshing, and it also has a sense of life. The details of daily life are very rich, and it feels like I am living with the protagonists. Just like the one who serves rice in a bone china bowl and is too tired to be lazy after exercise. The system is not just a tool, but more like a cute virtual partner, which is very relaxing. 3. The story in the first five chapters mainly focuses on Gu Yueming's life, which gave me a sense of immediacy. Although the rhythm is steady, the narrative logic is clear. Qiao Qingsong's scenes in the early stage are not many, but he has a sense of presence every time he appears. Whether it is a small gesture of carrying a sushi box or the words "I like you" in the elevator, I feel like I am being poked haha. ▼The following is a small suggestion: the author can consider it carefully. 1. At present, Qiao Qingsong's long-term secret love for Gu Yueming is directly stated through lines. Although I can roughly get it, if there are some small foreshadowings laid in advance at the beginning, such as Gu Yueming having a vague impression of him, I think it will be more sensible. After all, a stronger sense of fate can also increase the sense of CP. 2. Gu Yueming accepted the system task smoothly. Although she complained a little, there was not much inner drama. I thought it would be a bit bland (I felt she accepted it too quickly). I think I could add a few words about her emotional fluctuations when facing life changes. For example, she felt disappointed when she resigned, and was uneasy about future changes, etc., Which would make her character image more distinct. 3. The rhythm mentioned above is stable, which actually means that the plot has slowed down, so the plot density in Chapters 4 and 5 will be a bit loose. Although I like to read daily stories, after all, the story still needs to bury a little ups and downs to stimulate the interest in reading. I think if the author has time to revise the article in the future, he can make up for some small conflicts in life, maybe a sudden power outage when moving or neighbors gossiping about their relationship. It will be more gripping to give some ups and downs in time. 4. The setting of system tasks is mainly based on daily diet. Although it is very real, it feels like you can also add some challenging or contrasting small tasks. This is a tool that can naturally create laughter or advance the plot. After all, the system is really easy to use, and any plot added will not feel too weird, such as giving a little to participate in a party! Or inviting neighbors to work out and have dinner together will enrich your daily life. (Of course, this is because I have only read Chapter 5. If there is any plot later, you can ignore it) ▼Final remarks: The style of this novel is a gentle, healing and slow-paced light romance. The setting is very cute and comfortable, and the language is very life-like. The characters all have clear personalities and life goals. I think it is a very steady novel. I have read many stories with very suspended settings, but this one is not like that. At least the beginning of the first five chapters is very stable. The author already has very good writing skills and story lines. If he can slightly enhance the details of the characters and the ups and downs of the plot, it should be able to attract more people to continue watching. I hope that the author can always write happily and be full of ideas! 💪 💪 💪

Treasure author, come on! Good-looking 😍 😍

A self-disciplined life starts with the heroine, hahaha

Punch in and clock out (???????)

"Gu Yueming is 1□□" This is a big bug for the author~ Why is there a number 1?