Ice Butterfly

Liuli, take the exam well~ Don't forget to update the article. The male protagonist is really great. The character creation was successful. I fell in love with it as soon as I saw it. But I have a little suggestion. The heroine can speak in long paragraphs, but the male protagonist needs to be disconnected. Otherwise, it will be the same as the heroine, and they will be inseparable. In addition, it would be nice if Jingyuan calls Lang He "Brother He". . The extra word feels a bit like it comes from a girl. However, it is still very well written. Come on!