
Conquering the Journey to the West, Part Two
铲平西游路(下)
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 80k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
8Chapters
114Favorites
35Nutrient gifts
68Clicks per chapter
23Comments
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Reader comments 6
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Very good, as long as it is updated [Hands together]
Damn, you finally remembered your account password and came back to update it 😭 😭
I haven't read this book for a long time and I didn't even notice it. The original male protagonist, the cp great sage, is willing to be a favorite. The character in this book is also the most satisfying one I have read (the main interaction is very delicate and the great sage's character is well grasped, not a stereotype. He is like a grumpy, brash man with a bad temper, and his cuteness is just right. Although the male protagonist's character is not conspicuous, it fits well with the overall style. He is tolerant, angular, and slightly delicate without knowing it. The setting and shaping make people feel comfortable. In terms of emotion, he is well balanced between sensitivity and dullness. It's very good. It seems that both parties are really ignorant rather than pretending to be stupid or self-deceiving. The readers can pick up the candy themselves. Although the main content is not a particularly attractive type (or does it seem to be no longer popular?), It is very interesting and it can be seen that the author has thought very seriously. There is also a problem that it is a little too comprehensive and a little loose. The fineness of the long flow is very good, but it lacks a certain backbone as support. In fact, it already has some of this problem in the first chapter, but I remember that the main line was spreading the industry and looking for the great sage, and the interaction after the encounter The line of becoming stronger also seems to be supported, but it does not seem to involve too much (and it is not clear whether the author is still willing to involve it). Although I feel that I really want to write about food infrastructure and the situation of some modern concepts in ancient times, the lack of integration with the main line will be somewhat weakened. The sense of story that attracts readers (the difference between miscellanies and novels). Although it does seem to be consistent with the current situation that the protagonist does not have much desire and just wants to be with the Monkey King, it may lack the sense of urgency of "what is happening" or the sense of plot advancement. Of course, I am not a professional, so I can't say much. It's good, but I'm actually looking forward to the emotional line of this style. The male protagonist's identity and so on can also be explored. Mysteries and contradictions actually seem to have several aspects that can be unfolded. Journey to the West itself also has many stories that can be reconstructed, but the contradiction between leaving far away (road story) and establishing a career is indeed at the scene. It's difficult to balance the background. Maybe it's because the relatively perfect status quo (whether it's character status or career) is really difficult to start with, but it doesn't seem impossible. I don't know what the author has planned, but I'm willing to wait a little longer for this cp, even though I'm just an ordinary reader.
Oh my gosh! The pearl fisher actually had to pierce her eardrums and deafen herself
[Cat's Claw] There are so many words in each chapter of this book, it's great👍
? How come you have opened 2, but haven't you finished writing one? The previous book was updated so slowly that I didn't even bother to follow it. Let's see what's going on with this one?