
[Blue Lock] Huh? You Want Me to Take Noah Out? (See the Blurb)
[蓝锁】哈?让我去干掉诺亚?(请看文案)
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 350k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Sports Anime Fanfiction
I prefer stories with competitions, where I can get involved in the characters' everyday sports lives. I avoid the usual landmines, including Mao Xia Gui. I don't care if a story has drama, but tell me if a person does.
Free Reads of All Kinds, Part 1
These are good reads. You could say this list is just for me, since I have no idea how to review books. I just recommend them.
Great Reads
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Fanfic Girls Never Surrender
Fanfic fans, come on in! I’m into fanfiction from all kinds of anime, movies, TV shows, and games. I prefer BL or romance, and I don’t have many squicks~
Derivative Works and Fanfiction
Any genre
Sports Stories (Original and Fanfiction)
Five stars: must-read; four stars: highly recommended;
Blue Lock: Highly Recommended
The number of saves is completely unrelated to how good they are!!!
Pure Love, Bottom, Harem Magnet
I like stories with a bottom-focused protagonist, pure love, crossover anime, shonen manga, devoted fans, and a beloved-by-all protagonist, among other things. I'll label the types that suit my preferences.
Astonishingly Delicious Derivative Fiction
Crossovers, mainly Bungo Stray Dogs, Jujutsu Kaisen, Detective Conan, plus a few sports anime
Free Derivative Fiction
Stories I think are good, though most are abandoned. Enter at your own risk. They don't have five stars because Jinjiang wouldn't let me review them.
Derivative Works
All fanfiction written purely out of love.
Blue Lock Recommendations
Recommendations for Blue Lock stories and crossover stories featuring Blue Lock that I've read and enjoyed. Most protagonists take part in matches and play soccer. For details, check each book's description.
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It's great to watch Xiaoxing. I continue to follow the teacher. I really want to see Xiaoxing's follow-up. It's really hard to eat super delicious food in Lansuo (so teachers are rare and valuable, they are driven by love, and they can write such good food when they have little emotional value). It's a miracle to see Xiaoxing. When I found this book, it seemed that it was the first 10 chapters. I found it after the chapter about the massage by Ling Wang was released. When I found it, I used a computer to swipe it. It's funny to say that a lot of it was because Xiaoxing registered in Jinjiang, so I wanted to write a review for the teacher. (I really regret it, because at that time, all the comments in the comment area were long sentences, and I was not very good at identifying AI at the time, so I was scared and didn't write later). Then, because the frequency of the teacher's updates was very low, I basically just saved it and watched it slowly, which made me regretful that I didn't find out that the teacher stopped updating until a long time after the teacher stopped producing. (Well, to put it shamefully, my teacher is my spiritual food. I want to cut off my head and put the teacher in it.) Then my bad habit came back. During the chapters when Noah came, I started reading slowly again. I don't know how I persisted without finding new chapters. I could only read the previous chapters over and over again (thinking about it now, it's so stupid), until I couldn't bear it these two weeks. I started to look for new ones to read (I even thought about changing my mobile phone and I wanted to give the teacher a review) and slowly started to browse through it from the beginning, and then I found a lot of locked ones, including ones that I hadn't read yet, so I came to the group, and then I was shocked to find out that I had moved. That's pretty much my understanding of this article. (When I wrote this, I went back and read the whole article, and found that what I wrote was really a running account of my troubles. I just wrote whatever came to my mind.) And there are obviously so many moments where I can support the teacher, but I avoided them because of laziness. So I really hope that the teacher will let me continue to accompany Xiaoxing. In addition to these events, I also remembered the old star timeline that I have reviewed in the past two days. This is not a post-viewing review. I have also seen many other timelines and Chinese translations posted by teachers before (oh, oh, there are also many songs shared by teachers). Maybe I was not so... Um now? (How do you say it - I am me, but every moment I am different from before...), At that time I only felt pity and admiration for the teacher, so I was not that excited. I watched it again and found out that Xiaoxing is a succubus. This part is really amazing. It has its own clear purpose, but it is not too romantic. In other words, the character is not broken at all, just like the guilt of Ma Lang after the crime, and feeling the heartbeat with Caesar. Also, the teacher is so awesome. Obviously when reading other articles like this, if there are very buttery scenes, you will feel that the character creation will be very bad, but the teacher is not just for these scenes. I also like the posts of the duo of Xiaoxing and Baibao. The first two or three chapters are also very warm and wonderful, and Xiaoxing is really three-dimensional. But the part about bringing the stars home was also super... Exciting! Rin felt resentful in her heart that she was about to turn into a male ghost, but she also had to wash up obediently first, and then Xiaoxing was directly caught in the middle. Rin felt Xiaoxing's tears in the middle of the night and kissed them away... I was really overwhelmed.
Whoever dares to block the author's chapters again will be cursed with hemorrhoids.
It has been a month since I saw this article by the teacher. There was a time in the middle when I wanted to leave a comment, but after thinking about it, I gave up temporarily (because my reading habits are very bad. I read the article without thinking, and I will worry that the comments I posted are meaningless, although I feel that I am not good at it now [please]). I wanted to give the boss a serious reply, and because I like Xiaoxing very much, I read it many times, (I will continue to review it again and again in the future!) After deleting and deleting, I finally typed this comment [poor] Xiaoxing is a very good child in my opinion. He is talented, hard-working, has clear goals, is responsible, and is a little careless. He is an extremely cute child. The more I read this article, the more I confirm this. Therefore, when more and more people focus on Xiaoxing's own shining points, I will feel happy and very happy (this is a mom fan [laughing loudly] I am convinced): Ah! Yes, Xiaoxing is such an outstanding child, and he deserves everyone's attention and love. About Nagiboshi: I saw the life of Nagi and Xiaoxing in the early stage. Yes, this is the daily life of our little couple (it is really full of details, I eat a lot [makes me healthy]). They will help push carts in the supermarket and check the production dates, call and ask for help buying kitchen supplies that have been used up at home, and assign their own tasks when guests come: one will accompany the guests and the other will cook, etc. Really, this is a happy daily life. Nagi already regards himself as a husband, and complains to his friends that his wife has no such nerves (is this just showing off, right? Hey). As for Xiaoxing, she still regards Nagi as her landlord at first. Seeing Nagi's bad habits, she still hesitates and worries about whether she has no sense of boundaries. However, with the silent connivance of a giant Miffy rabbit, they are already family members [Star Eyes]. When I saw the first-class star being called by King Rei, I was still a little hesitant and saw Nagi walking over without hesitation. Every time I see this, I feel that Nagistar is so sweet (me after seeing the teacher's latest chapter: I understand! Everyone keeps the corners of their mouths upward [sunglasses]) After entering the prison, Nagi's presence has decreased, but every time he interacts with Xiaoxing after appearing, I feel: a young couple reunited after a long separation! As Xiaoxing's certified family member, Nagi must be happy with Xiaoxing forever [Spread Flowers] About Ling Xing: This is the script of a friend's wife, right, it must be! It's very touching [Shy] At first, my first impression was that I was just a good friend's roommate. When I first met, I felt awkward and abrupt that Xiaoxing was a very shy child. After seeing Xiao Xing eating a cherry tomato with Nagi's hand, I felt sour when I bit it. Admit it, King Ling, you are really fascinated (our Xiao Xing is charming). After realizing our brave Xiao Xing's football talent, we fell into [red heart] in our daily interactions (pressing the legs is really astringent [poor]). Because we know that Xiao Xing does not have those nerves, so the declaration of sovereignty is all in secret. Not to mention daily care and maintenance, I would carve my name on some inconspicuous items, draw some so-called art paintings in private, locate watches and so on. Especially in the review chapter, I laughed hard at the little episode about Ling Xing's post-marriage episode written by the boss [Answer] King Ling, I am very optimistic about you, and I have to work hard to win the favor of our little star. About Rin Hoshi and Sae Hoshi: When I first saw the confession part, I didn't quite understand what the parentheses of "I am your partner (Hoshimi)" mean. Maybe I lack love experience. I was just confused. I even thought for a moment that the teacher was hitting me too much [please please] but it turned out to be teacher! I really need your Chinese translation. Wuwuwuwuwu, this is an immortal product, where can I find such a powerful teacher. Go back and study it carefully after you understand the meaning. Linxing, let me see who dares to disobey you. The teacher's portrayal of Rin is not OOC at all. In the relationship between Rin and Xiaoxing, pinching the back of the neck is really good and full of control. They will be jealous of Nagi and King Ling who are close to Xiaoxing, and they will uncontrollably criticize Xiaoxing in public. They know that it will make Xiaoxing angry but they will still do it, and they will consciously coax Xiaoxing afterwards. But then again, is that really coaxing? When I see Xiaoxing blushing, shy and confused because of her own face, I feel so happy in my heart. As for Itoshi Dalang, he is at the level of a complete master. Sacrifice, little lamb, master, it's really [Huang Xin]. It was obviously just the first time they met, but they decided the future in one fell swoop. (Our little star is very charming.) Whether it's the temple lottery or going home together, a certain Ito master is so young that he is more than enough. My favorite is the part where we go shopping for clothes together: pleasing me is also a value (Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, it feels so good). In fact, I am a fan, you are really up to it, just marry Xiaoxing home in one go (Rin:?) About Long Xing: emmm In fact, when I first saw the harm Long Sheng did to Xiao Xing, I felt very unhappy because I knew what a good child Xiao Xing was. How could you do this to him? Even if it is a misunderstanding. When I saw Xiao Xing's counterattack later, I was a little relieved, but it was not enough (I was thinking that it was obviously you who did something wrong first, but two people were punished in the end, why should I punish my Xiao Xing? [ Burst into tears ]) Every time I see Long Xing get along with each other, I feel uncomfortable at first because I am biased, but after I brushed it two times and three times, my opinion of Long Sheng is not that big anymore. Maybe it is because I see a change in his attitude, or a change in behavior? Anyway, hey, he's quite discerning, a big evil pink cockroach. I have written so much without realizing it. If there are any, I have deleted, deleted, or changed them. In short, I hope that the teacher can be happy when writing. I will always support the teacher for the characters and wonderful stories he writes! I hope the teacher can be seen by more people [biting handkerchief]
After reading this, I have always felt that Xiaoxing is a strong child who persisted in surviving the torture of illness in his previous life. In reality, many people may not have a strong will to survive in long-term pain. At the same time, I also feel that he is a bit passive or slow in terms of emotions, especially love. Maybe the relationship with his parents in the previous life has created a bad impression. It may also be that his father's values make him feel that there is no one in the world who will love you for no reason, so he is instinctively and unknowingly escaping. Although he is taking the initiative to find Shido, it actually has nothing to do with love. All of the above are my very one-sided and superficial understanding. I am also very good at communication in language and writing, so the wording may not be very accurate.
This chapter is about the content of the fine wine, and it also explains some issues that Nagi and Suzu have not made explicit before. If you forget, you can check the table of contents. You still need to make up the comments. The process of making up is to review the previous foreshadowing [pink heart]
On January 22nd, I finished reading this fanfic that was very helpful to me. It lasted three days. Because this novel was so delicious, I read it in school, so I couldn't give any feedback to the teacher. I was very worried when the teacher was tired. Every time I read the Chinese translation, I would think about how stupid I am and I didn't notice anything. Now, here are some of my thoughts. Xiaoxing and Rin: Rin's strong feeling of being a man who wants to control me is a big deal for me. Xiaoxing is very fond of him because of his admiration for strong men. Just spoil him. He was also very naive when he asked Rin to be a partner (boyfriend). He also agreed because of his confused thoughts in his past life. Later Xiaoxing said that he was lying to him and completely turned into a black man. I was actually a little sad because I really like this. Fortunately, I opened up later (actually, what I wanted to eat was a brother sandwich) Xiaoxing and Sae: cccccccc I feel really good about Itoshi Rin, Shido Ryusei, and Nagi. Just keep teasing Xiaoxing. I find it very satisfying to see that both brothers love to pinch the back of their necks. The part of taking it home was also very exciting. The scene where the three of them slept together in the end made me laugh to death. In fact, I really want to see Xiaoxing wake up later than the two of them (imagine...) And then I won't read any more content about Zhen, hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm TT Xiaoxing and Nagi: Couple 99! Nagi is very detailed. Although it gives people a very lazy feeling, but as the teacher said, this is mainly from Xiaoxing's perspective. So there are some things nagi does that we can't see. There is a feeling of long flowing water, warm and gentle. And then it's also very cute and warm—— Xiaoxing and Shidou Ryuusei: Okay, you can continue to play the game of puppy and master. It's great for me to go to such a naughty person. This one is also very delicious. You two are also 99, right? Xiaoxing and Jie: Well, this is my personal question. When I was watching Blue Lock's anime and comics, I didn't really like Xiaocao. It can be considered a kind of indifference, so I basically skipped watching the two of them. Xiaoxing and King Ling: The second one to meet their parents! Just continue to like married women. I have no interest in the scenes between him and Xiao Xing alone, but if there is a threesome together, I will go crazy ehhhhhhh! Xiaoxing and Caesar: Okay, Xiaoxing has been squeezed out (forget it?) In fact, I am still looking forward to the two of them, because I really, really like Caesar, and I think it will be very fun to get along with them after they get to know each other! Starlet and Nass: Two little cakes, right? I would be very happy if there was no love line and a simple cb direction. It seems like that right now? Xiaoxing and Noah: Are you fake father and son rising? Fake father and son, are you rising? Fake father and son, are you rising? Although they are not very high on the list in my heart? Finally, I really, really, really like Sae Hoshi, followed by Rin Hoshi, Nagi Hoshi, Shido Ryuusei Hoshi! There is no Caesar because I haven't had the ease of Itoshi Sae yet. I thought he would at least keep in touch with the stars a little bit, but the teacher said it was mainly from the perspective of the stars. I didn't see it, so I cried a lot, but I kind of understood it. Just like the meaning of the marriage sign, just let nature take its course. He would not force Xiaoxing... That would be better! I didn't have time to see many small details because I liked this article so much that I scrolled through it very quickly, so I'll review it two times and three times... Teachers are happy every day! [Orange Candy] Got it
I read this novel yesterday because my phone was disabled and I read more than 20 chapters. I rushed to Alipay and clicked on the AI search just to read this novel. I can only say that Xiaoxing's character is completely from a succubus. I'm not kidding. I really like this character. It's a bit straight, a bit married, and a bit natural. The author is completely It was written on my In terms of character analysis, I feel that his analysis is very accurate and the most considerate thing is that he can write Chinese translation. I feel that this is really good. Very few authors can do it to this extent. This should be regarded as my first time writing a long review in Jinjiang. In fact, I rarely write reviews. Most of these things are silent, but I thought this novel is really good, so I wrote it. Now, back to the character analysis, I feel that the author's analysis of Rin-chan is particularly good, especially the control and twisted black mud. In fact, I think the author can be more black mud, but I held back when I thought that this novel is not a black mud theme, and I feel that there are so many scenes between Rin-chan and Xiaocheng that I can feel that the author particularly likes Rin-chan. There is also Bee Music. I feel that the author has opened up a new idea, which is the feeling of mother-chan. After all, for me, petting is usually childish and optimistic. But when I saw the picture of Xiao Xiao being coaxed to sleep, I felt particularly touched because it gave Bee Music a sense of character creation, that is, flesh and blood? There is also Shiyi, Although the author has only written a little bit of his psychological description at the moment, I believe that he will definitely make more money in the future. After all, he wants to be the number one man in the world. Although I am not very cute, the author's psychological description of the world made me happy. Finally, it is Shido. I feel that I can grasp the speed very well because Shido feels that it is particularly difficult to write. The wider the scope of the writing, the smaller the writing will be very gangster, and the writing will be smaller and it feels very contained, so the author has a special grasp of the speed. Okay, I'm actually very curious about how Ni-chan interacts with Xiaoxing. Now seeing the two of them hugging and sleeping on the bed has saved my life. I especially want to know the Shura field where Ni-chan, Rin-chan and Xiaoxing met. I believe the author will specifically describe Rin-chan's description of betrayal. Then I'm looking forward to the subsequent characters. I want to see the author describe the interaction between Hyorines, Caesar and Xiaoxing. Finally, I still want to see the locked content. . .
I went to see if the follow-up babies can stop skipping chapters. Xueli cried after looking at it. It is very convenient to find a recharge agency. You can even buy an account directly. It is also very cheap. If it weren't for the fact that other bosses asked Xueli according to the price of 1,000 words, Xueli would not have set up to pay PO currency. The exchange rate is completely different from that of Jinjiang currency! What looks like a few zeros to you is actually just a few cents! Really don't skip the chapter! Every chapter has important things. Sherry is not a fool. Every time she sees many skipped chapters or even jumps directly to the car chapter, Sherry keeps crying, because the name does not mean whether there is a car or not, and the car is not a selling point at all! If it is disconnected in the middle, it will be incoherent! It was obvious that I had finally crawled over and found the follow-up, but why did I jump to a chapter? Honey... Sherry cried all night because there were very few follow-ups that could be seen, but in the end, she couldn't watch the complete one! I announce that if there are five people who can climb over this month without skipping a chapter, Xueli will be here to provide after-sales service for King Ling after finishing his work!
Support Rin and Nagi, but Shido is delicious too
Teacher, as expected, I still like Nagi and Xiaoxing the most [Let me be healthy] When I saw the comment before, "Xiao Xing didn't realize that it had been a long time since he took the initiative to ask Seishiro for help, because the other party had already prepared it in advance, and it was all done without saying anything." I really felt a sense of relaxation of being firmly caught and not being restrained [please]. (And his reaction when facing King Ling is really like a royal palace [sunglasses]) I know Xiaoxing's habits and personality, and I always remember what Xiaoxing said (the phone number is there) When I look at it, I feel warm, lazy and comfortable [Star Eyes] The chapter summary of Saesei 50-54 ranges from statements to questions, from a controller to an intimate yet domineering lover. There's a sense of attitude going from one-dimensional to seeking interaction, and it's also good quality [please]