Good article. Especially the choice of words and sentences, there is really nothing to say. For example, "fill" in "every once in a while, make something delicious to fill his mouth",
"Pull" means "until I felt my buttocks were cold from being pulled out from the bluestone", "Pull" means "just peeking through the crack of the door", etc. It seems like I need to learn more from the author.
Also, please don't mind if I mention some typos in the article, it's just that I feel a little uncomfortable.
"In the end, when I was squatting in the woods crying alone, I met the second girl." The "" in it should be "of";
"When I opened my eyes, I saw a pair of embroidered shoes dangling in front of my face." Same as above;
The "string" in "the sour gas skewered straight up the bridge of the nose" should be "jump" and so on.
I didn't expect there to be such a small side story. I have always liked Xiangdie's Feimen series!
Good article. Especially the choice of words and sentences, there is really nothing to say. For example, "fill" in "every once in a while, make something delicious to fill his mouth", "Pull" means "until I felt my buttocks were cold from being pulled out from the bluestone", "Pull" means "just peeking through the crack of the door", etc. It seems like I need to learn more from the author. Also, please don't mind if I mention some typos in the article, it's just that I feel a little uncomfortable. "In the end, when I was squatting in the woods crying alone, I met the second girl." The "" in it should be "of"; "When I opened my eyes, I saw a pair of embroidered shoes dangling in front of my face." Same as above; The "string" in "the sour gas skewered straight up the bridge of the nose" should be "jump" and so on.
I didn't expect there to be such a small side story. I have always liked Xiangdie's Feimen series!