After Entering My Own Novel, I Turned Myself In [Quick Transmigration]

After reading this chapter, I really can't stand it anymore. I really like the author's imaginative setting, but the heroine sister in this chapter is a bit morally kidnapped, right? The heroine can ask for it herself, or she can be discovered by Guo Jia, or there can be thousands of other reasons, but why does it have to be the heroine's sister who proposes it? In other words, this is very important to Guo Jia, but this is also very important to the heroine? It was clearly stated from the beginning that the heroine's growth can only rely on the elf stone. If the heroine is asked to take out the elf stone without knowing when she will get the elf stone again, this is not only using the heroine, but also hurting the heroine without knowing what will happen next. Can't the heroine's sister go back and tell the heroine after discovering this matter, and then ask the heroine what she thinks? Does it have to be this kind of moral kidnapping that takes away oppression? Also, I didn't understand the heroine's brother. He asked his sister to take a stone with an unknown path to a public laboratory for examination. The data inside will be recorded and detected. If a substance that does not belong to the earth appears, everything will explode. Or maybe it is because the data inside is not completely shattered and it is discovered and then it is easier to find the heroine than the heroine's sister. Moral kidnapping of a sister who has just been recovered and suffered countless hardships. She also inexplicably traveled to the novel she wrote. I don't know what happened and whether there was a life threat in the later period. From God's perspective, we know that nothing will happen, but the people in the book probably don't know. I posted the comment on the previous chapter, but my comment disappeared.

It looks a bit awkward. The heroine was given up for adoption by her relatives, and was finally taken back by her sister. She has been an orphan for so many years, which means that her parents and relatives have not fulfilled their obligations. She has always been raised under the welfare of the country. Of course, it is understandable to serve the motherland. Once she finally found a golden finger, she could live a good life. As a result, her sister did not consider the negative impact of the heroine's information being exposed at all, and it was quite a bit of moral kidnapping. I feel that there is no big difference between having such relatives and not having them.

This chapter was a little uncomfortable to read. Although it seemed correct, the sister shouldn't have brought it up first, and the wording was a bit... She did it for Guo Jia, but at the cost of "sister". Although we all know that nothing will happen, we are from a God's perspective. Moreover, after something happened to the younger sister, the older sister went to work as usual for the experiment the next day, and did not learn more about the younger sister's condition... Etc. A series of descriptions made it seem that the characters of the older brother and older sister were relatively weak. Furthermore, the protagonist should understand and think about it himself, and it would be more natural for him to propose it himself, otherwise it would always feel like a bit of moral kidnapping. Oops, I don't know how to express it, but this chapter is a bit awkward to read.

What a social death. Even if the dark history comes true, we have to leave it to professionals to find the traitors [covering face, laughing and crying] just thinking about it makes me dig my toes into the ground.

Haha, and this is only the extent to which we can know 🐶

I really like the protagonist who has a good outlook on life. When I saw this chapter, I knew that I would like this one. I also saw the news about that professor, but I didn't expect that an author would write it. I was really surprised when I saw it. I hope that there will be a latecomer like the heroine's sister in the real world.

Just one point, forget about handing it over, can you give the heroine a little privacy? Can you just bring someone over while you are sleeping and let the heroine prepare in advance?

After thinking about it carefully, everyone accepted it too quickly after the heroine came back. We didn't even have too many worries (worried about whether the heroine would be in danger, and now she is a doll-sized existence without the power to resist). Too much fear (fear that the heroine would leak information casually and attract bad people. No matter what the world view is, we have to admit that bad people exist in this society). There was also the heroine sister. The author set up a scientific researcher, but she was "not rigorous". When the Elf Stone was taken for testing by her, did she ever think about whether there would be harmful substances in reality? She just cut it casually and used it directly on the plants in the laboratory without testing and analyzing anything. She didn't even test it with other plants outside, so she used it on soybeans, which are of great significance to the laboratory (after all, does she have God's perspective)? When it was useful later, she went directly to the heroine and asked if she could get more. Hahaha, I laughed. Not to mention that the heroine hadn't figured out how to travel between the two worlds, but she was already thinking about getting more and returning it. She said it was not a use, but a use 🥺

Only leaving two rations for the heroine without knowing when she will travel again? She brought back thirteen! Enmmmm This is difficult to comment on

Haha, the first funny point in this picture is that the queen coaxes the children and says that the fallen elves can't hurt them. As a result, the heroine says that the mother tree is not dead [spreading flowers], and immediately says that she can't defeat the fallen elves 😏🐶😏