Happy New Year to the author. I would like to ask if the two locked chapters can still be opened. If it is because of the problem in Jinjiang, can you give me another channel to read the article... The writing style is so attractive. I followed half of it and saw the highlights. I don't know what happened in the middle. It's really uncomfortable. QAQ, I can reward w
One word, good!
Our martial arts needs such articles and authors!
It's impossible not to leave a paw print. The name Wuming has always had the same weight in my heart as XX and OO, but now I realize that such a name also has such profound content.
I just finished chasing Jinxiu Wushuang and found another good article.
Good article. . . . . . . . . . .
Very good, but in america, it's not that easy to see a doctor other than emergency visit...
Good looking, the power of idols
Really well written! ! ! It's heart-wrenching, so shocking! Even a diver like me can't resist getting out of the water! !
The nameless people who appeared at the end were "me" and Xifeng?
Is this wrong? ? Just gone? ? That's too much! ! ~
The female protagonist is too bad. She is so easy to forgive the male pig. She likes to be abused.
Not even male pigs. He is still a general. He is provoked so easily.
Big... Please... Update...
Simple text tells simple truths with profound meaning.
This is a good article. It doesn't need any gorgeous words or exquisite plot, but it can still make people feel soul-stirring! ! !
It's okay, especially the one who killed Gao Qiu was just scolding Song Jiang too much.
I used it to write my review
No matter how you describe it, it all pales in comparison
Oh my God, after reading the comments, it turns out that "I" am King Asura, I thought I was the King of Heaven.
Twists and turns, good story. In just a few thousand words, it contains a huge amount of information, a lot of contrasts and reversals, the center is clear, and the details are very impressive. I originally thought that this story would end with the tragedy of unknown being beheaded, but it turned out unexpectedly. This is after seeing the dark side of human nature and society, but still believing in the beauty of the world. It is both sad and burning, which is very powerful.
"Unnamed" is an article in Yang Bei's "Simple Martial Arts" series. Since I haven't read the other articles yet, this review is limited to my views on this article.
"Wu Ming" tells the story of a young man named "Wu Ming" who came to seek justice for a weak woman who was insulted by the young master of the Hua family on the fiftieth birthday of the famous "Iron Man" Hua Ruyun. The young man is very low-key, but he also firmly defends his beliefs. The wisdom and threats of the senior forces have no effect on him. In the end, Hua Ruyun fought against Wu Ming for the sake of his son. After two evenly matched moves, Wu Ming was finally defeated by Wu Ming's third move and paid the price of his life for the justice he pursued. From then on, "Wu Ming" became a legend...
The story is very short, about 10,000 words. Judging from the structure of the article, it is a relatively unique "double memory" perspective. From a superficial perspective, it appears to be the old pigeon farmer's narration of unknown deeds; in fact, it is "my" recollection of this past event. The old man's memories triggered the memories of "I", and "I" completed the narration of the entire story from the perspective of a bystander.
This architecture is unique and brings wonderful results. From the beginning to the end, a question about "Who am I?" Has been fascinating to read; from reality to memory and back to reality, the whole story is drawn in a complete circle; the roles of the two "reminiscers"-me and the old pigeon farmer were appropriately assigned, and I completed the narration of the entire story. At the end, the old man explained the ending of the nameless story and the influence of the nameless deeds. The "pigeon text" shape that appears several times in the article is exquisitely conceived, with the beginning and end corresponding. Such writing is smooth and natural, the skill of a master.
The theme of the story is quite profound - a story of an unknown hero challenging powerful forces. It must be said that the article's portrayal of Wuming is successful: his bowed posture, superb skills, fearless personality, determination to sacrifice one's life for justice, and sharp mind all contribute to his connotation as a hero. The mutual protection, hypocrisy, cunning, and bullying of the forces he faced were also revealed to be quite real. What is rare is that after writing the ending of the nameless tragedy, the author did not stay in the darkness of "justice is dead and people's hearts are cold", but gave a bright ending of "one nameless fell, thousands of nameless people stood up" and "starting from 'me'", which makes people still have hope in their hearts after reading it. This is the realm of masters.
Next, it's the filming moment.
1. Characters. The plump image of Wuming cannot cover up the contradictions and weaknesses of other characters. Hua Ruyun, the author initially tried to portray a fair image of a person in the world. For example, he forced his son to take off his clothes to examine his injuries, but later he took action to fight Wu Ming. This fairness, or image, seemed to be no longer important to him, which seemed too naked and unscrupulous in a "reputation-oriented" world. Fang Zhiyuan was famous for his intelligence, but he was vilified a lot in the article, making him seem superficial. For example, ""The third move! Hua Daxia wins! "There was a hint of unconcealable ecstasy in Fang Zhiyuan's voice." When the unknown death moved everyone, Fang Zhiyuan's unabashed "ecstasy" not only showed that he was different and contrary to the mainstream, but it was really hard to tell where his "wisdom" lay. Regarding the villain, the author handled it a bit hastily and superficially.
2. Plot. Pick a few nitpicks. In the memory part, "There, hundreds of pigeons were still "cooing", anxiously waiting for the master's order." In the ending part, "The children cheered and rushed towards the pigeons. The pigeons were frightened and flew up one after another, flying over my head and flying towards the distance." I remember that the first place Wuming and Jin Jihu had already fought "magnificently", but the pigeons were still calm. I admire how those pigeons are so involved in the drama and know when to gather and when to disperse. In addition, it is also surprising that Hua Ruyun knows the tenant's daughter.
3. Text. Beautiful writing is not the only thing, simple words can also write a good story. However, there are quite a lot of typos in the text, and some individual points are worthy of scrutiny. For example, "to enlighten people with reason, to move people with emotion, to threaten people with threats", should it be "to threaten people with threats", right? As for the feeling of the text, everyone has different opinions. Just speaking from my personal reading experience, I feel that this article will be more readable if the author makes slight modifications.
What a joke!
Happy New Year to the author. I would like to ask if the two locked chapters can still be opened. If it is because of the problem in Jinjiang, can you give me another channel to read the article... The writing style is so attractive. I followed half of it and saw the highlights. I don't know what happened in the middle. It's really uncomfortable. QAQ, I can reward w
One word, good! Our martial arts needs such articles and authors!
It's impossible not to leave a paw print. The name Wuming has always had the same weight in my heart as XX and OO, but now I realize that such a name also has such profound content.
I just finished chasing Jinxiu Wushuang and found another good article.
Good article. . . . . . . . . . .
Very good, but in america, it's not that easy to see a doctor other than emergency visit...
Good looking, the power of idols
Really well written! ! ! It's heart-wrenching, so shocking! Even a diver like me can't resist getting out of the water! !
The nameless people who appeared at the end were "me" and Xifeng?
Is this wrong? ? Just gone? ? That's too much! ! ~
The female protagonist is too bad. She is so easy to forgive the male pig. She likes to be abused. Not even male pigs. He is still a general. He is provoked so easily.
Big... Please... Update...
Simple text tells simple truths with profound meaning.
This is a good article. It doesn't need any gorgeous words or exquisite plot, but it can still make people feel soul-stirring! ! !
It's okay, especially the one who killed Gao Qiu was just scolding Song Jiang too much.
I used it to write my review No matter how you describe it, it all pales in comparison
Oh my God, after reading the comments, it turns out that "I" am King Asura, I thought I was the King of Heaven.
Twists and turns, good story. In just a few thousand words, it contains a huge amount of information, a lot of contrasts and reversals, the center is clear, and the details are very impressive. I originally thought that this story would end with the tragedy of unknown being beheaded, but it turned out unexpectedly. This is after seeing the dark side of human nature and society, but still believing in the beauty of the world. It is both sad and burning, which is very powerful.
"Unnamed" is an article in Yang Bei's "Simple Martial Arts" series. Since I haven't read the other articles yet, this review is limited to my views on this article. "Wu Ming" tells the story of a young man named "Wu Ming" who came to seek justice for a weak woman who was insulted by the young master of the Hua family on the fiftieth birthday of the famous "Iron Man" Hua Ruyun. The young man is very low-key, but he also firmly defends his beliefs. The wisdom and threats of the senior forces have no effect on him. In the end, Hua Ruyun fought against Wu Ming for the sake of his son. After two evenly matched moves, Wu Ming was finally defeated by Wu Ming's third move and paid the price of his life for the justice he pursued. From then on, "Wu Ming" became a legend... The story is very short, about 10,000 words. Judging from the structure of the article, it is a relatively unique "double memory" perspective. From a superficial perspective, it appears to be the old pigeon farmer's narration of unknown deeds; in fact, it is "my" recollection of this past event. The old man's memories triggered the memories of "I", and "I" completed the narration of the entire story from the perspective of a bystander. This architecture is unique and brings wonderful results. From the beginning to the end, a question about "Who am I?" Has been fascinating to read; from reality to memory and back to reality, the whole story is drawn in a complete circle; the roles of the two "reminiscers"-me and the old pigeon farmer were appropriately assigned, and I completed the narration of the entire story. At the end, the old man explained the ending of the nameless story and the influence of the nameless deeds. The "pigeon text" shape that appears several times in the article is exquisitely conceived, with the beginning and end corresponding. Such writing is smooth and natural, the skill of a master. The theme of the story is quite profound - a story of an unknown hero challenging powerful forces. It must be said that the article's portrayal of Wuming is successful: his bowed posture, superb skills, fearless personality, determination to sacrifice one's life for justice, and sharp mind all contribute to his connotation as a hero. The mutual protection, hypocrisy, cunning, and bullying of the forces he faced were also revealed to be quite real. What is rare is that after writing the ending of the nameless tragedy, the author did not stay in the darkness of "justice is dead and people's hearts are cold", but gave a bright ending of "one nameless fell, thousands of nameless people stood up" and "starting from 'me'", which makes people still have hope in their hearts after reading it. This is the realm of masters. Next, it's the filming moment. 1. Characters. The plump image of Wuming cannot cover up the contradictions and weaknesses of other characters. Hua Ruyun, the author initially tried to portray a fair image of a person in the world. For example, he forced his son to take off his clothes to examine his injuries, but later he took action to fight Wu Ming. This fairness, or image, seemed to be no longer important to him, which seemed too naked and unscrupulous in a "reputation-oriented" world. Fang Zhiyuan was famous for his intelligence, but he was vilified a lot in the article, making him seem superficial. For example, ""The third move! Hua Daxia wins! "There was a hint of unconcealable ecstasy in Fang Zhiyuan's voice." When the unknown death moved everyone, Fang Zhiyuan's unabashed "ecstasy" not only showed that he was different and contrary to the mainstream, but it was really hard to tell where his "wisdom" lay. Regarding the villain, the author handled it a bit hastily and superficially. 2. Plot. Pick a few nitpicks. In the memory part, "There, hundreds of pigeons were still "cooing", anxiously waiting for the master's order." In the ending part, "The children cheered and rushed towards the pigeons. The pigeons were frightened and flew up one after another, flying over my head and flying towards the distance." I remember that the first place Wuming and Jin Jihu had already fought "magnificently", but the pigeons were still calm. I admire how those pigeons are so involved in the drama and know when to gather and when to disperse. In addition, it is also surprising that Hua Ruyun knows the tenant's daughter. 3. Text. Beautiful writing is not the only thing, simple words can also write a good story. However, there are quite a lot of typos in the text, and some individual points are worthy of scrutiny. For example, "to enlighten people with reason, to move people with emotion, to threaten people with threats", should it be "to threaten people with threats", right? As for the feeling of the text, everyone has different opinions. Just speaking from my personal reading experience, I feel that this article will be more readable if the author makes slight modifications. What a joke!