What is love? It must be a rather powerful ability.
From the moment they are born, humans use crying to express sadness and laughter to express joy.
It's an advanced language that everyone speaks without having to learn it.
But Lula, an elf, found it difficult to master.
The instant a baby's soft little hand closed around his finger, he felt the power of life for the first time.
It was also the first time he smiled from the heart.
Though this son had been forced upon him,
he was willing to give everything for this life, so fragile and yet so strong.
1. Readers with strong feelings about fidelity, beware. The uke is drugged and thinks he slept with a woman, which later leads to the misunderstanding that the child is his son. [The drug didn't work. The elf's innate magic resisted it, and the uke wasn't assaulted. He is afraid of being misunderstood, so this hasn't come up in the story yet, but to be clear about it.]
2. Devoted seme x emotionally oblivious uke
3. Faux incest. The uke thinks the child is his son, but he isn't.
4. A slice-of-life story. The setting is Western fantasy, but there isn't much fighting.
5. Not important: I'll add character pictures based on the author's preferences. They may not be characters readers like.
6. Also not important: If I can add illustrations, I'll draw some. I'll choose which chapters to illustrate based on the number of in-chapter comments and reviews, to gauge readers' preferences.
Theme: A heartwarming little story about a long-lived race and a short-lived race, and the clash between those who feel nothing and those overflowing with emotion.
The big cover and the accompanying pictures of the two protagonists are also nice.
I've finished reading! The writing is very good. Each character is very vivid. I can easily imagine how they live in a place where readers can't see. It's really good. I really like this story brought by the author.
I am very happy to finish reading this article. I have been stuck for a long time. I haven't read a whole novel in a long time. The protagonist always felt that he would go down the road of white and black, but he didn't. I really loved it. It can be seen that 1 must be a very courageous person, right? Moreover, when he was a child, he would feel that he was the smartest. People with this kind of personality behaved cautiously with Lula. I think Lula's psychological description is very delicate in a short story. I can really feel his emotional changes from never accepting to being moved. In fact, I couldn't keep up with his brain circuit several times, but after I figured it out, I thought it was so cute, hahaha. I just didn't get it all. I felt that the story of Brad and Erin would be very interesting. Anyway, I really like the character creation. If nothing else, I will remember this article for a long time. Thank you to the author for writing this article.
Go home~ Go home~ Don't be afraid if you have literature~ It's a holiday!!! [Spread flowers]
Dear readers, I am so glad that this short story that I expected to have 100,000 words but ended up writing 170,000 words is finally finished. (Eye movement) As the first completed article, I don't know how you will read it. In short, I wrote it with the hope that it will never become a black history and I will not regret it whenever I look back and read it again. I will not feel that this is a novice article. Here I would like to recommend the article next door, "Traveling to Another World and Still Becoming a Fan". It has a Western fantasy story with a similar worldview to this article. (By the way, this is actually the first article, but it's too long, I'm coughing up blood) One-sentence synopsis of "Still a Heartthrob after Traveling to Another World": A heartthrob's journey of self-rescue in another world. In the 22nd century, Leng Ning traveled to a different world and found that he was worshiped as a god here. However, things were not as simple as he expected. He needed to work hard to protect himself in the competition between the powerful, religious countries and others. Because I believe everyone went there because they thought it was good after reading this article, and there are many subtle similarities between the two articles, so I will use comparison to describe the differences. The protagonist suffers Lula: It is difficult to conquer the grass and trees, but after all, it can grow and explore emotions on its own, and can turn around when it is angered. Leng Ning: It is difficult to overcome the iron and stone lumps. No matter how you touch it, it is an iron wall. After being sentenced to emotional death, you will only refuse in a fancy way. The protagonist attacks Derek: A sentimental person who thinks he is smart will not give up even if he hits a wall. Eden: A naive, hot-blooded golden retriever who trusts people easily. The characters in "Cover" will advance emotionally independently, while in "Time Travel" all depends on the plot, and the characters' emotions will advance very slowly. At the same time, "Time Travel" is a novel that focuses on the perspective of the protagonist. When the visuals of many important supporting characters are missing, it will be easier for everyone to bring in the protagonist's perspective. Many contents may not become clear until a long, long time later. Above! Thank you everyone for seeing this! If you like the author's brief thoughts on writing this article, I will post it after the extra chapter!
I came from Old Ford, don't give up, madam, it's very well written 😚
I was absorbed by the copywriting, and some of the sentences struck a chord with me. After reading it, I found that the text was also very good. Although some of the sentences were not smooth, they had little impact on me.
I like Lula, and my insensitivity touches my heart.
I like it, the writing is great
I really like my mother's character