If a family provides a comfortable life, does that mean it can casually sacrifice a child without their knowledge?
Being ordinary was never a fault. But being born into a family of top-tier superpowered individuals
made those two words Lin Chu's original sin.
As a precious object, carefully honed by her family,
Lin Chu's purpose was to serve as proof of a politically correct idea: superpowered people and ordinary people are no different!
After an accident, the merit spirit Huanming appeared, and a brand-new path opened up before her.
Huanming: Cultivating merit requires doing good deeds.
Lin Chu draws her gun: How about getting rid of evil instead?
Huanming: That works, but what if your opponent is a Golden Core cultivator?
Lin Chu takes out a laser cannon and turns the power up to maximum.
Huanming: Sure, that's a great and powerful weapon, but what will you do if your opponent has Nascent Soul cultivation?
Lin Chu takes a stellar-energy cannon in hand and gestures for her nuclear weapons to be shown to the other party.
Huanming: Are you a demon or something? Do you even know what a merit cultivator is?!
The heroine is born an ordinary person. The early chapters are somewhat bleak, but she never waits until the next day to get even!
Once she grows stronger, the story will become more upbeat.
This is the growth story of a powerful heroine, cyberpunk meets cultivation!
P.S. The heroine never waits until the next day to deal with her enemies. She kills them without hesitation, and she doesn't forgive a single one of her relatives either!
Premise: Break through life's constraints and struggle to survive in adversity
The plot is not arranged well... We have to ensure the assassination, and we have to save the life of little girl Fang, but we also need to use this opportunity as a practice? Why do you want both? If you are strong enough and there is no weak third party, it can certainly be used as training. However, in the first few chapters and the sequel to "Killing Wang Niannian", it is written that very high-level superpowers are difficult to kill, and during the fight, little girl Fang was stabbed and covered in blood. Aren't you worried that the heroine and the little girl are both dead? In the end, I was even more speechless due to the awakening of the bad seed. I felt that the heroine was more powerful, and I relied on luck without thinking. To be honest, in the previous article, I always felt that the heroine was so passionate that she stepped on the rind of a watermelon, and she didn't care where she slipped. A decisive killing character requires precise planning and execution, and occasionally a little luck. It's okay to write a reckless character, and it's fine to have a rough and a soft touch, but the heroine's character is sometimes strong, sometimes weak, sometimes shrewd, and sometimes she doesn't think about anything. Finally, the writing style needs to be refined, and it feels a bit streamlined. The setting and context of the article are quite good.
The future with supernatural powers is already a fantasy, but there is actually a surrogate mother?
Lao Deng's speech is very powerful.
Wow! Very well written, an imperfect three-dimensional protagonist, paving the way for him to change himself next.
The author's writing is a bit contradictory and verbose, for example: 1. When encountering the weapon spirit in the previous chapter, he first said that the heroine can control the sight, that the heroine has received professional training, etc., Then he said that the heroine was discovered by the weapon spirit, and finally he explained the lack of training. Although the reader can understand it, it is a bit verbose. 2. On page 2 of this chapter, it is said that the heroine usually pays attention to her appearance and is very decent. Later on page 8, it is said that the heroine is usually "such a dead look... Arrogant". Can the character be unified? 3. In such a big family situation, how can a few brothers and sisters fight so shamelessly? On the surface, the parents are strong but still love the heroine. Don't the younger siblings look down on the coaxing father? Aren't there some flattering henchmen who came over to lighten the mood? The subject matter is pretty good, but the writing needs to be straightened out a little more.
Why do some VIP chapters have duplicate content, such as 146 and 147?
I feel that the text is not smooth enough to read, and the text is a bit wordy, but the setting of the text is actually pretty good.
The cp-less heroine written by my wife is so good, please write more 😚
The plot advances too slowly, weakening the sense of battle of wits.
The character design at the beginning was high-end... But it really didn't fit the character...