Coming soon: My Accidental Captive Love from the Female Lead. The blurb is below. Add it to your favorites if you're interested.
Wen Zhixu was bound to a quick transmigration conquest System.
The System's original mission was to conquer the male leads in various small worlds, but
The girl waved a hand. "Sorry."
"I'm not into men."
World One: The Orphanage Teacher
Wen Zhixu became a young teacher at an orphanage.
System: [You must change the female lead for the better and prevent every tragedy from happening to her.]
Wen Zhixu: "Sounds great!"
So she turned her gaze to the girl in the corner, whose eyes were dark and gloomy.
She walked over and pressed her warm fingers against the girl's wrist. Hidden beneath her sleeve, where no one could see, was a sharp dagger.
Wen Zhixu smiled sweetly. "I read a book when I got here, and it said, "
"Tonight is Christmas Eve."
World Two: The Heiress Who Was Cannon Fodder
Wen Zhixu became a haughty, overbearing heiress.
Unfortunately, her conquest target was the ex she had just dumped.
Looking at the gloomy girl before her, the heiress gave her an especially sweet smile. "Ex-girlfriend."
Her slender fingers slowly traced circles in the other girl's palm, an awkward, innocent sort of seduction:
"Want to go on a date with me?"
World Three: A New Actress Drops into the Entertainment Industry (A Bit of a Mess, Best Not to Read)
Wen Zhixu was a newcomer who had just started making a splash in show business. The antagonist was an award-winning actress who had already won every major prize imaginable.
At first, among millions of people, Wen Zhixu was weighed down by scandals, looking up at her, who stood above them all.
Later, she reached out to the antagonist, who had fallen into the mud.
"Big Sister, the Best Actress," Wen Zhixu asked earnestly, blinking her clear eyes. "Can I keep you now?"
A one-on-one romance, full of sweet everyday moments snuggling up to all kinds of gorgeous older sisters!
Next book: My Accidental Captive Love from the Female Lead
Meng Wanruo ended up with a character she had created herself.
She accidentally transmigrated into the novel she had written. As time passed, youthful hormones made them fall for each other, changing the story's original plot.
Gu Lan, the haughty heiress Meng Wanruo had originally written, was actually very gentle. She paid attention to Meng Wanruo's feelings and expressed her love without holding anything back.
But sensing the irresistible force of the plot, Meng Wanruo broke up with her, then vanished without a trace.
A year later, while rehearsing backstage as the freshman representative for the finance department, she received a bouquet of flowers. A white card tucked among them bore the words:
Long time no see.
She paid no attention to the unfamiliar handwriting until she went onstage.
Seeing the familiar photographer before her, her heart began to race.
The girl she had kept hidden in her heart for a year was right in front of her.
That possessive yet gentle heiress had returned to her life.
The plot that could not be changed had gone off the rails once more.
Afterward, Gu Lan came backstage and said with a smile, "Long time no see."
Meng Wanruo turned to run, but the heiress grabbed her hand and said with a bright smile, "Still trying to hide from me?"
"Stop hiding. I've caught you."
PS: The whole story is full of beautiful young women.
High school takes up part of the early story, but the university years make up the main plot.
They're each other's first love, and they both love each other.
No groveling-after-the-breakup arc, because Gu Lan has always loved Meng Wanruo.
Theme: Study hard and keep improving.
Quick wear related: Structure length: Con: 100717, 86165, 67072. It is not some kind of structural literature. It should not have an uneven number of words. Structural literature should not be short at the beginning and at the end. It is recommended to control the number of words. Pro: In a quick travel game with more content, around 8w words is appropriate. Hidden content: Pros: It sets up the overall hidden line and suspense point, which is very important for the pursuit of the story and the differentiation of the content. Cons: To sum up, it's a mess: The book is a foreshadowing, but it has little effect. It can only be seen that someone is traveling through time and space like them to save, but this has been explained by the system; or it is a plot point of reading a book together, but the article focuses more on decryption. This focus is not clear and seems to be piling up foreshadowing. The perspective of the other side also looks very confusing, she will forget, but from her perspective, she either really forgets, or forgets that she has forgotten. The processing of forgetting may be for the purpose of explaining later, but in the early stage, it seems inexplicable, because there is a logic bug (she does not have doubts or distress about it!) These foreshadowings do not necessarily have to be preceded in the text, but the way they are organized now is no different from a collection. Small world: Pro: I'm very happy to have a small world with all women. It's more focused on a world where the subject matter is non-hot and non-routine. I like it very much. Con: There are several questions: 1. Eat books, the description of this orphanage is good at the beginning; the people described in the book do not look like crazy people at all, but later they are said to be crazy. 2. The only task of the third protagonist is to conquer the second female lead, but this is because the other party already likes her, so there is no need to attack her at all. There is no contradiction in her body, and the conflicts are concentrated on the second female protagonist. However, from this perspective, the female protagonist looks like a recorder rather than a witness. (The female villain also disappeared in seconds) Emotion: pro: 1v1 two-way Except for the first world, the biggest source of emotion is belief, which seems relatively frivolous. Psychological description: The protagonist's thoughts jump too much The protagonist's guess is also unrealistic and inconclusive, and it seems that there is a problem of forgetting. Sometimes he is anxious and sometimes he forgets. Although this is a situation we will encounter in real life, it is inappropriate for two reasons: 1. The reader's perspective does not experience this kind of time delay. Fading brings different attitudes, and people often have the same emotions in the same chapter; 2. In real life, when people forget quickly and then pick it up again, they will have thoughts about the different attitudes in the past, such as being upset about why they forgot, or wondering about their own differences, and so on. Character setting and tension: pros: The mother in the second world kisses all the friends in the world cons: The motivations of the female villain are insufficiently described, and she seems to be bad for the senses, and she is a bit vain (I don't care about the male villain) It can be seen that the author has a lot of clever ideas, but the organization is a bit hurried. However, the progress is very good. The protagonist is a lovely ordinary person. The first and second worlds are really warm and beautiful. Maybe the author is good at youthful emotions and ambiguous periods. This is exactly what I like. Yunhu doesn't like it. The words may be confusing or inappropriate, and may be due to a rush of time or poor mental state. However, the biggest problem may be that my writing is poor and it is difficult for me to write a more comprehensive and accurate review. My language skills are very poor and I cannot give suggestions from a theoretical perspective. This is not a writing guide, I just hope to provide some help in possible aspects, and it also expresses companionship and feedback on the writing results.
Finished spreading flowers, I like the first world the most. Let's just treat this story as an open ending [Cat's Claw]
I like soft and sweet plums, they are delicious, but I have forgotten what plums taste like 🍉 This summer vacation is a bit busy. I plan to do a lot of things, which are a bit whimsical. I want to take the driving license and IELTS exams, and then I plan to sign up for a competition and take the computer level 2 exam. Then prepare for the topic selection... It sounds like a lot. In order to make up for the previous grade points, I have to preview. It should not be online much in the future. The day passed and I was so groggy that I just wanted to take a shower and get into bed under the quilt, looking at the bed curtain and quietly standing still. If you need me and want to talk to me, just talk about anything, just add [cat's claw]
I still feel it's a bit confusing. In terms of the whole world's perception, the rhythm is a bit confusing 😂
"But the village chief abducts, but does not abduct" is a big bug for the author ~ Although?
Yunnan is beautiful and fun, and the Erhai Lake is super beautiful, but maybe I am weak and acclimatized, and I fell ill after watching the sunrise 😂 OMG this is a reversal haha, no wonder some of the logic I saw earlier is a bit weird 😂
Oops, it feels a bit confusing, emmm, the word order of some sentences, and the arrangement of the content.
I thought you didn't want us anymore 😭
Condemn It's very hot in the south A young elementary school couple, the arrogant and quirky Nian Shang and the little tail admit that they are wrong
Ouch [cat's claw] I'm reading and learning something that I want to learn but usually prevent myself from learning. I just hope that I will have less regrets.