
Lock Away Your Joy
锁君欢
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 10k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
3Chapters
11Favorites
109Clicks per chapter
3Comments
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Reader comments 3
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Hey, it's over now
When the county magistrate asked the heroine to pass, there was no need for her to react so much, right? (After all, the protagonist is still a good citizen to me, and I didn't portray the county magistrate as an unkind official before) Looking at the first chapter as a whole, I feel like some parts could be deleted or rearranged. For example, the cost of women's clothing; the reason why the pension is more than others; the degree of causality that the cousin is not smart are not very convincing to me; of course, I understand that the cousin may not be an official match, so now it is directly stated that they have no relationship between men and women, but it is not necessary to write it out. After all, if there is a relationship, the heroine will be more convincing if she goes out to investigate. And the part about the heroine's mother passing away in childbirth can be left for later. The last 4 taels of silver... The heroine is not in the system, so it is impossible for her to be so clear about the pension hierarchy. She can arrange for the county magistrate or the county lieutenant, who is less able to control his mouth, to reveal that this money is different. Finally, cheers to the author!
"Wen Zou Zou" gave the author a big bug~ Literary