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Two powerful leads | Love grows over time | Frail health | Injured in action | Sweet and angsty
[Powerful, flirtatious newcomer x stern, self-deluding boss]
Yue Fu, a former intelligence analyst, arrives at the Fangling City Bureau planning to be a well-behaved rookie.
Before she can even report for duty, her direct superior, Lu Yun, has already labeled her a "pretty face."
Everyone at the bureau knows Lu Yun is stern and decisive, a famously iron-faced team leader who can't stand people joining her team just to pad their resumes.
That is, until a mission, when the "pretty-face rookie" kicks a suspect three meters away, then turns around and clearly pinpoints the blind spots in the case.
Lu Yun: Maybe I misjudged her.
Yue Fu goes along with it, playing the sweet, well-behaved rookie. She brings milk tea, helps out, and takes care of everything, all to keep a low profile.
Lu Yun puts on a cold face and scolds her, "Stop with these workplace tricks," then turns around and convinces herself: Could she be into me?
After Lu Yun has worked out eight hundred schemes to coax Yue Fu under the same roof and confess her feelings,
Yue Fu looks baffled. "An office romance? My boss is pretty, but is she a little dim?"
Bodies dumped on rainy nights, two corpses in a luxury mansion, women living alone who go missing... One major case after another unfolds. The edges of every case file bear the marks of Yue Fu's fingers tracing over them, a testament to her relentless pursuit of the truth.
Everyone wonders why this seemingly unremarkable rookie can always cut through the fog at a glance.
No one knows Yue Fu came to Fangling in the first place to uncover another answer buried in the case files.
Lu Yun knows she's no ordinary woman. This precious gem, deliberately dropped into her path, is one she will catch herself and never let go.
-New story, complete-
[Frail, rational, and adorably stern x Arrogant, doting, and falsely kind older woman]
Mu Guang has hated many people, including Ji Zhican.
With her privileged background, Ji Zhican's family, status, and wealth were all beyond Mu Guang's reach.
Mu Guang approached her with an ulterior motive: to drag her into the mud, make her suffer, and bring her to ruin.
But this dazzling woman worried that Mu Guang would faint from low blood sugar, and stayed up all night to watch over her.
In the cramped little room, Ji Zhican murmured tenderly, "Could you ever love me?"
Even through the haze, Mu Guang remembered that Ji Zhican was a Ji. She said, "No."
When Ji Zhican first saw Mu Guang, all she caught was a fleeting glimpse of her profile.
The next time, Mu Guang was her new employee: cold, distant, and restrained.
She even poured out the coffee Ji Zhican had brought, right in front of her.
Ji Zhican: That's a bit much. And kind of charming...
During a typhoon, Mu Guang kissed her in the wind and rain. "Ji Zhican, you'll regret it if you fall for me!"
Ji Zhican doesn't think she'd regret loving Mu Guang, but getting Mu Guang to love her is a challenge.
She offers her money, power, everything she can give.
Mu Guang refuses it all, but leaves a light on for Ji Zhican when she comes home late.
Ji Zhican is confident Mu Guang is just being stubborn, and far too adorable...
Until Mu Guang, who never wanted anything, takes a bank card and leaves her behind without a single word.
In this relationship, Ji Zhican, once so proud she thought herself untouchable, becomes a joke.
Ji Zhican searches for Mu Guang like a madwoman. "Weren't you so above it all? Didn't you say you didn't want money?"
She leaves her mark on Mu Guang in her own way. "Say you love me."
Mu Guang only says, "Don't come back."
Ji Zhican can't accept it. She leaves, then comes back, personally driving Mu Guang into the abyss.
That night, beneath the bright moon, Mu Guang lies blood-soaked in her arms, barely breathing, and speaks one word at a time:
"Please."
"Don't save me."
Theme: There is genuine love in this world.
(Both the eldest baby and the second baby have updated extras!) [Glasses] The lovers of the second baby apply to play [Glasses] The appetite for the fourth baby has been whetted [Glasses] Zaohouzaohou [Glasses] I started drooling after looking at the pre-acceptance copy of the fourth baby [Glasses]
Why did Yue Fu bear all the suffering? He only tortured one side, but couldn't he torture both halves?
I barely found it in the extra episode. . Humph, I was tortured by the previous two hundred chapters. . [Crying]
There is no way, the case is the bitter fruit of suffering, and those outside the case are also experiencing their own suffering.
This is stuck, what's next [crying]. Anyway, congratulations on finishing it, and I will follow the article all the way to the end. The author's writing is very good. Although it is quite cruel, I have to say that it is very realistic. Some of the phenomena written in the article do reflect the cruelty of the current society and are caused by various reasons. Not very good at expressing myself in words, I said everything I could think of at the moment. I can only say that it can only be understood but cannot be expressed in words. Everyone has different feelings after reading the article. I think those who understand will naturally understand without explaining too much. I hope you can keep writing. Although this type of subject matter is niche, I really like reading it. I would like to make a small suggestion and write an article later. Is it possible to arrange more emotional scenes and make the interactive sessions sweeter? This book really tortured me, but luckily the ending was good. This is the first time I have written such a long story, and I gained a lot of insights after reading it. Keep up the good work and look forward to new works [Come on]
OK, you're right.
Suffering has always existed and cannot be ignored as invisible. [Covering face, laughing and crying]
It was very charming in the early stage, but lost in the later stage.
Hmm, pretty good. Stay away from those with a bad aura. To fend for itself and perish. It's a pity that a genius has fallen to this level.
"In the end, Lu Yunzhen carried it by himself..." This is a big bug for the author~
After reading it for a whole week, I finally finished it. As a bookworm who has been reading for more than 20 years, this is the first time I have the desire to comment. I think this is also the unique charm of the author. However, after all, it has been more than a year since this article was updated. I am not sure if the author still pays attention to the comments here, but some words are uncomfortable in my heart, so after thinking about it, it is better not to spit it out! Next, I will comment from three points: plot, emotion and personal feelings. Friends who don't like it will automatically skip it. I don't want to argue with others. I have actually thought about using this old account to comment for a long time. The atmosphere in the circle is so bad now that it makes people feel uneasy to say anything. It is a very bad phenomenon. I only hope it can be improved in the future.
Let's get back to the books! First of all, from the plot point of view, the overall writing is smooth and the logic is quite strict. Especially the process of investigating the case is so riveting that it makes people want to stop. It is a breath of fresh air in the Lily Book List, which generally prefers sweet and mindless stories, and it was also the motivation that ultimately supported me to watch the finale. Therefore, no matter what, the most important cornerstone that supports the author is still his writing style and storytelling ability. On this point, I will not be stingy with praise. The author does write very well. In time, he may not be able to become a popular writer. However, I just read the last chapter and saw that the author wrote that the first two cases had outlines, but not the later cases, so I understood. No wonder the later cases were all "off track". In my personal opinion, writing novels is different from writing documentary literature or criminal investigation notes, especially today when younger readers are reading. In addition to conveying those sad emotions and painful pictures, you also need to use your characters to make readers believe that everything will be good. But as I commented in the middle, I can't see any signs of good. Admittedly, if this is a piece of documentary literature, I think the plot is spicy and flavorful. But as a novel, I think the author is too focused on conveying his own thoughts and opinions and ignores the readers' own feelings. This is a very terrible mistake. Moreover, many cases are too long, there are too many characters, the writing is a little lacking, and the emotional lines interspersed in the middle are not so delicious, making it difficult to attract many readers. Although the author always says that he does not rely on writing to make a living, of course, I understand this, but now that I have signed the contract, I think many people have reminded the author of this along the way, and I hope it will still attract attention.
In addition, there are still problems with character creation. Just like another sister in the comment area said, author, you are too 'biased'. For Yuebushi, you spend 120% of your efforts on shaping it. She has a miserable childhood, a beautiful youth, friends, family, thoughts, past, entanglements, and sufferings. This is nothing for character creation, and is even too full. But Lu Yun, in my understanding, she is very important to Yue Fu, but we know nothing about her either from Yue Fu's perspective or from the reader's perspective. Lu Yun also grew up in Fengling City, but there is not a single friend of hers in the whole story (Zhong Miao is not counted, they have not been close to each other), and the existence of her family is only to highlight Yue Fu's tolerance and kindness... From this point of view, it seems that Lu Yun is just a projection of Yue Fu, just like Yue Zhao said to Yue Fu when she first met Lu Yun, "This looks like your type." Yes, Lu Yun is like a person who fell from the sky and was carved out according to Yue Fu's preferences. After reading the whole book, I can't even feel Lu Yun's emotions. Does she have friends? Does she have any hobbies? Why does she like Yue Fu? Will she be angry? None of these, I only know that Yue Fu is painful, sad, and needs to be accommodated, but love itself is not constituted in this way, especially for Lily novels, readers come to see two gentle girls supporting each other and loving each other, rather than traditional male and female romance novels In that way, the male protagonist is always portrayed as the one who is infinitely tolerant of the female protagonist. In this article, Lu Yun is the existence of the traditional male protagonist. She is tolerant and can say "okay", "ok" and "do you want to", but I just feel sad when I look at it. If two people love each other like this, it is better to separate. From this point, it can be extended to the author's shaping of emotional lines.
I saw the author's comments to other readers, saying that he wanted to portray Yue Fu as not needing love to be nourished, and that she was independent and self-aware. This is true in itself, but after reading the whole article, I didn't feel Yue Fu's so-called "unnecessary", but "too much need". For example, the author portrayed Yue Fu to hide and cry secretly, and Lu Yun took the initiative to discover him every time. But - Yue Fu and I have similar personalities. What does hiding and crying really mean? If it were me, when I was really sad, I would hide in a place where I thought no one could find me, and digest it alone. I would not spread my emotions to anyone, nor would I let my emotions affect my life, including eating, dressing, etc. This is the real "no need". But Yue Fu obviously needs it. She is extremely entangled inside, and her inner emotions will affect her life outside. It is emphasized many times throughout the article that Yue Fu doesn't like to eat and can't eat. She obviously has serious emotional problems and is not an 'independent' person. She needs someone to take care of her, someone to accompany her, someone to tolerate her. How can this be considered 'unnecessary'?
Let's talk about the shaping of Lu Yun from here. Lu Yun graduated from the military academy and worked as a police officer for many years. Her character has changed a lot. She had a relatively stable childhood and a stable youth. Before she met Yue Fu, her life was ordinary and very stable. The conflict with her mother was just a faint thorn in the side, and she could always remove it if she wanted to. So Lu Yun is the one who really doesn't need love to raise her. On the contrary, she can even raise Yue Fu through love. But this was too much of a sacrifice for her. She loved Yue Fu deeply and was willing to sacrifice everything for Yue Fu. However, I felt sorry for her, as if I was watching a friend who didn't live up to her expectations become a love brain. This relationship made her lose her subjectivity and herself. Since they got together, Lu Yun's life has only been Yue Fu. They work together and live together. I can't see Lu Yun's shining point (so is this the reason why the saying goes don't have office romance, hahaha). Even at the end, I didn't agree with them being together. Yue Fu's soul has been broken, and part of it followed He Zhen (this part is even more speechless. I understand what the author wants to write and express, but the characters all appear for the needs of the plot. Her death is completely unnecessary, or in other words, it can be replaced in other timelines and other expressions. Way...), Part of it follows her grandma, and part of it follows her father. She has no ability - at least not at this stage. She cannot repair herself. An unhealthy soul is not worthy of love. She has no ability to love and can only bring down two people, so I said it is better to separate.
Overall, I think it's quite remarkable. A real work can have plot lines and emotional lines in parallel. Even if it is a traditional emotional article, it does not mean that it is easy to write only about romance. On the contrary, articles that are only supported by emotions are the most difficult to write. If you write too much, you will feel tired, and if you write too little, it will be empty. I haven't read the author's subsequent articles, so I don't know what the style is now, but just for this article, there is still a lot of room for improvement. But in the current market, there are really very few authors who are willing to think, and even fewer who can make readers think. If the author also writes criminal investigation articles, I will be willing to continue reading, and look forward to further progress!
(Both the eldest baby and the second baby have updated extras!) [Glasses] The lovers of the second baby apply to play [Glasses] The appetite for the fourth baby has been whetted [Glasses] Zaohouzaohou [Glasses] I started drooling after looking at the pre-acceptance copy of the fourth baby [Glasses]
Why did Yue Fu bear all the suffering? He only tortured one side, but couldn't he torture both halves?
I barely found it in the extra episode. . Humph, I was tortured by the previous two hundred chapters. . [Crying]
There is no way, the case is the bitter fruit of suffering, and those outside the case are also experiencing their own suffering.
This is stuck, what's next [crying]. Anyway, congratulations on finishing it, and I will follow the article all the way to the end. The author's writing is very good. Although it is quite cruel, I have to say that it is very realistic. Some of the phenomena written in the article do reflect the cruelty of the current society and are caused by various reasons. Not very good at expressing myself in words, I said everything I could think of at the moment. I can only say that it can only be understood but cannot be expressed in words. Everyone has different feelings after reading the article. I think those who understand will naturally understand without explaining too much. I hope you can keep writing. Although this type of subject matter is niche, I really like reading it. I would like to make a small suggestion and write an article later. Is it possible to arrange more emotional scenes and make the interactive sessions sweeter? This book really tortured me, but luckily the ending was good. This is the first time I have written such a long story, and I gained a lot of insights after reading it. Keep up the good work and look forward to new works [Come on]
OK, you're right. Suffering has always existed and cannot be ignored as invisible. [Covering face, laughing and crying]
It was very charming in the early stage, but lost in the later stage.
Hmm, pretty good. Stay away from those with a bad aura. To fend for itself and perish. It's a pity that a genius has fallen to this level.
"In the end, Lu Yunzhen carried it by himself..." This is a big bug for the author~
After reading it for a whole week, I finally finished it. As a bookworm who has been reading for more than 20 years, this is the first time I have the desire to comment. I think this is also the unique charm of the author. However, after all, it has been more than a year since this article was updated. I am not sure if the author still pays attention to the comments here, but some words are uncomfortable in my heart, so after thinking about it, it is better not to spit it out! Next, I will comment from three points: plot, emotion and personal feelings. Friends who don't like it will automatically skip it. I don't want to argue with others. I have actually thought about using this old account to comment for a long time. The atmosphere in the circle is so bad now that it makes people feel uneasy to say anything. It is a very bad phenomenon. I only hope it can be improved in the future. Let's get back to the books! First of all, from the plot point of view, the overall writing is smooth and the logic is quite strict. Especially the process of investigating the case is so riveting that it makes people want to stop. It is a breath of fresh air in the Lily Book List, which generally prefers sweet and mindless stories, and it was also the motivation that ultimately supported me to watch the finale. Therefore, no matter what, the most important cornerstone that supports the author is still his writing style and storytelling ability. On this point, I will not be stingy with praise. The author does write very well. In time, he may not be able to become a popular writer. However, I just read the last chapter and saw that the author wrote that the first two cases had outlines, but not the later cases, so I understood. No wonder the later cases were all "off track". In my personal opinion, writing novels is different from writing documentary literature or criminal investigation notes, especially today when younger readers are reading. In addition to conveying those sad emotions and painful pictures, you also need to use your characters to make readers believe that everything will be good. But as I commented in the middle, I can't see any signs of good. Admittedly, if this is a piece of documentary literature, I think the plot is spicy and flavorful. But as a novel, I think the author is too focused on conveying his own thoughts and opinions and ignores the readers' own feelings. This is a very terrible mistake. Moreover, many cases are too long, there are too many characters, the writing is a little lacking, and the emotional lines interspersed in the middle are not so delicious, making it difficult to attract many readers. Although the author always says that he does not rely on writing to make a living, of course, I understand this, but now that I have signed the contract, I think many people have reminded the author of this along the way, and I hope it will still attract attention. In addition, there are still problems with character creation. Just like another sister in the comment area said, author, you are too 'biased'. For Yuebushi, you spend 120% of your efforts on shaping it. She has a miserable childhood, a beautiful youth, friends, family, thoughts, past, entanglements, and sufferings. This is nothing for character creation, and is even too full. But Lu Yun, in my understanding, she is very important to Yue Fu, but we know nothing about her either from Yue Fu's perspective or from the reader's perspective. Lu Yun also grew up in Fengling City, but there is not a single friend of hers in the whole story (Zhong Miao is not counted, they have not been close to each other), and the existence of her family is only to highlight Yue Fu's tolerance and kindness... From this point of view, it seems that Lu Yun is just a projection of Yue Fu, just like Yue Zhao said to Yue Fu when she first met Lu Yun, "This looks like your type." Yes, Lu Yun is like a person who fell from the sky and was carved out according to Yue Fu's preferences. After reading the whole book, I can't even feel Lu Yun's emotions. Does she have friends? Does she have any hobbies? Why does she like Yue Fu? Will she be angry? None of these, I only know that Yue Fu is painful, sad, and needs to be accommodated, but love itself is not constituted in this way, especially for Lily novels, readers come to see two gentle girls supporting each other and loving each other, rather than traditional male and female romance novels In that way, the male protagonist is always portrayed as the one who is infinitely tolerant of the female protagonist. In this article, Lu Yun is the existence of the traditional male protagonist. She is tolerant and can say "okay", "ok" and "do you want to", but I just feel sad when I look at it. If two people love each other like this, it is better to separate. From this point, it can be extended to the author's shaping of emotional lines. I saw the author's comments to other readers, saying that he wanted to portray Yue Fu as not needing love to be nourished, and that she was independent and self-aware. This is true in itself, but after reading the whole article, I didn't feel Yue Fu's so-called "unnecessary", but "too much need". For example, the author portrayed Yue Fu to hide and cry secretly, and Lu Yun took the initiative to discover him every time. But - Yue Fu and I have similar personalities. What does hiding and crying really mean? If it were me, when I was really sad, I would hide in a place where I thought no one could find me, and digest it alone. I would not spread my emotions to anyone, nor would I let my emotions affect my life, including eating, dressing, etc. This is the real "no need". But Yue Fu obviously needs it. She is extremely entangled inside, and her inner emotions will affect her life outside. It is emphasized many times throughout the article that Yue Fu doesn't like to eat and can't eat. She obviously has serious emotional problems and is not an 'independent' person. She needs someone to take care of her, someone to accompany her, someone to tolerate her. How can this be considered 'unnecessary'? Let's talk about the shaping of Lu Yun from here. Lu Yun graduated from the military academy and worked as a police officer for many years. Her character has changed a lot. She had a relatively stable childhood and a stable youth. Before she met Yue Fu, her life was ordinary and very stable. The conflict with her mother was just a faint thorn in the side, and she could always remove it if she wanted to. So Lu Yun is the one who really doesn't need love to raise her. On the contrary, she can even raise Yue Fu through love. But this was too much of a sacrifice for her. She loved Yue Fu deeply and was willing to sacrifice everything for Yue Fu. However, I felt sorry for her, as if I was watching a friend who didn't live up to her expectations become a love brain. This relationship made her lose her subjectivity and herself. Since they got together, Lu Yun's life has only been Yue Fu. They work together and live together. I can't see Lu Yun's shining point (so is this the reason why the saying goes don't have office romance, hahaha). Even at the end, I didn't agree with them being together. Yue Fu's soul has been broken, and part of it followed He Zhen (this part is even more speechless. I understand what the author wants to write and express, but the characters all appear for the needs of the plot. Her death is completely unnecessary, or in other words, it can be replaced in other timelines and other expressions. Way...), Part of it follows her grandma, and part of it follows her father. She has no ability - at least not at this stage. She cannot repair herself. An unhealthy soul is not worthy of love. She has no ability to love and can only bring down two people, so I said it is better to separate. Overall, I think it's quite remarkable. A real work can have plot lines and emotional lines in parallel. Even if it is a traditional emotional article, it does not mean that it is easy to write only about romance. On the contrary, articles that are only supported by emotions are the most difficult to write. If you write too much, you will feel tired, and if you write too little, it will be empty. I haven't read the author's subsequent articles, so I don't know what the style is now, but just for this article, there is still a lot of room for improvement. But in the current market, there are really very few authors who are willing to think, and even fewer who can make readers think. If the author also writes criminal investigation articles, I will be willing to continue reading, and look forward to further progress!