
HP: Inferior Emotions
HP 下等情感
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 29k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
9Chapters
144Favorites
145Nutrient gifts
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Oh my god, I really can't help but want to write something when I see this paragraph, it really pokes me!!! Author, you are really good at writing. The character James and his emotional descriptions are simply amazing. It is not a deliberately sensationalist routine, but a delicate and real power that brought me deeply into it. From the beginning when James went to find Lupin, I felt it was very real. He couldn't figure out his own emotions at all, so he could only pour out a bunch of messy thoughts and let Lupine help him analyze them. I think this point is particularly poignant, because sometimes we are confused by our own feelings, and we can't tell whether it is pity, love, or something else, but you just know that this person is different in your heart. James' complicated emotions towards Penny really resonated with me! He saw very clearly and knew the "embarrassing" aspects of Penny - not being beautiful, jealous of others, fear and anger - but he still pityed her, loved her, and was not even willing to hurt her. This complex emotion is so delicate that I was completely immersed in it. Then the phrase "I saw me in her eyes" was really amazing and broke the defense directly. This sentence is really so powerful. The background is obviously an extremely ordinary scene - a drunk girl leaning on a boy, the light is dim and blurry - but because of this detail, it instantly shines. I think this sentence is so true. Isn't the most touching thing in a relationship just this kind of subtle moment? James was not seen through by her, but saw himself through her and found a sense of belonging, which was really poignant. I even think that this may be the core of James's feelings for Penny - not because she is perfect, but because she allows him to "see herself". I also particularly liked the scene where James refused to hit Penny. He himself said that he was a bad-tempered person and could even hurt people with a wand, but he just couldn't hurt her with his fists or slaps. I think this is particularly delicate, because this is not a simple "good guy setting", but a reflection of a psychological bottom line. He can vent in an indirect way like magic, but he can't hurt someone directly with his hands. This contrast makes me feel very real and touching. The character of James is really complex and vivid! Talking about the character of Penny, I really like it! She is not the kind of "flawless" Mary Sue heroine, but a person with many small flaws and vulnerabilities, and even does some things that people don't like out of fear. But it is such a real character that makes me feel particularly cute, and I can especially understand why James loves her. Love is not because of how good she is, but because of who she is. I think this kind of emotional description is very good and makes people resonate with it. Finally, I really want to say, author, you wrote so well! The emotions you created were both delicate and gripping, and I was completely hooked. Please update as soon as possible!!! I am extremely curious about their relationship and development now. I want to see if James will slowly sort out his emotions, and I want to see if Penny will grow up! Really excited! I will keep chasing it!!!
Having said all that, Old Deng still hasn't paid alimony.
Is this a sin caused by Sirius? He cast the Forgetting Curse.
On the Soul Resonance of Atypical Characters Between the gap between magic and secularity, Mrs. Opened the heart wrapped in prejudice with sharp strokes. When the fates of James, Sirius and Penny are entangled, what is being constructed is no longer a fairy tale-like magical adventure, but a cruel anatomy of self-awareness. The image of Penny written by Mrs. Subverts the flat treatment of "savior relatives" in fan fiction. She is not the irritable sister in the shadow of Lily Evans, nor is she Cinderella waiting to be saved by magic - her jealousy and meanness are precisely the marks imposed on her soul by the Muggle world. When James stares at such clumsy resistance, what he feels is not condescending pity, but a mirror that reflects his own confusion. James's incoherence as he confides to Lupin betrays an adventure more dangerous than a night trip to Hogwarts - he has lost the Marauder's proud sense of direction in the emotional wilderness. The subtle narrative foreshadowing is buried in the daily interplay of light and shadow. Without the love potion or prophecy, two "not good enough" souls found common ground in each other's eyes. In addition, I always thought that this kind of non-official love match was difficult to write, but my wife wrote the collision of souls in the original novel. I can only say that it is awesome!!! I will always follow you!!!
Penny is a pussy and wants Blake to beat her. She feels that life has already beaten her hard enough. It felt normal for James to choose Petunia. Something was destined to happen when he peeked. He was not a bad person. He thought he was dating Lily and having sex with Petunia at the same time.
It was all over, Sirius cast an oblivion spell, the oblivion was really terrible, everything was like a dream. . . Lily originally had a new boyfriend, but ended up marrying James. James was too mobile.
Nice! Nice! Your wife writes so well! I came after you from popo. Madam, please don't give up!
I'm chasing you, I can only see the clear water version, but please give it a try
I'm starting a new story, and I'm reading Lu Xiaofeng, so I'm going to write a mixed martial arts, ordinary heroine with a rich physique. [Variety Martial Arts] Thousands of people, but ordinary people The heroine is an ordinary person, a native of the martial arts world, has no fighting ability, and is a comprehensive martial arts world. Heartthrob means that everyone (good characters and villains) will fall in love with the heroine and will inevitably become evil. Xiaorong was a flower slave bought by the Shangguan family when she was young. After living a stable life for more than ten years, she found that her master, Princess Danfeng, was buried in the soil. Then she died and she lived again. She was hidden in a bamboo house by a scary man. A few days later, the man stabbed his own heart with an iron hook in front of her. Before he died, he stared at her, as if he wanted to take her with him. Alas, what a terrible man, and a charlatan.
So fragrant, so delicious