
The Sun and Moon Chronicles of Dongfang Bubai
东方不败之日月叙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 207k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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68Chapters
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Alas, even though I knew it wasn't finished, I still bought the entire text. It should be said that I am very satisfied now. After all, the general plot is almost over, and the rest of it can be regarded as a side story. I comfort myself like this.
It's so well written~ I love it so much... Although it's a bit of a pity at the end~~ I really like it~~
It sucks. . . No, tj is not good now. . .
That's it, it's so messed up I'll go My heart, Balabala's
555~The exam is tomorrow... I planned to read a good article to relax before the exam, but I didn't expect that I read a mistake... 5555~Bottle... You are going too far!
555~The exam is tomorrow... I planned to read a good article to relax before the exam, but I didn't expect that I read a mistake... 5555~Bottle... You are going too far!
555~The exam is tomorrow... I planned to read a good article to relax before the exam, but I didn't expect that I read a mistake... 5555~Bottle... You are going too far!
555~The exam is tomorrow... I planned to read a good article to relax before the exam, but I didn't expect that I read a mistake... 5555~Bottle... You are going too far!
555~The exam is tomorrow... I planned to read a good article to relax before the exam, but I didn't expect that I read a mistake... 5555~Bottle... You are going too far!
I've read a lot of Touhou fanfics over the past month, but there are very few that I really like. The reason why I watch Dongfang fans is that from my point of view, I just want to see Dongfang get happiness and get the love he dreams of! However, what I really wonder about the current Dongfang fanfic is whether it was written for Dongfang Bubai, or if he just wanted to create his own male protagonist. To be honest, if Dongfang didn't have insufficient hardware facilities, I'm afraid he would be the most offensive among the fans. I think many people like Lin JJ's Dongfang Bubai. Admittedly, I am not the one. What I like is the Dongfang Bubai who humbly loved in Jin Yong's works. Even until death, maybe he has regrets, but he should have no regrets about loving Yang Lianting (although I have not read the original work). This kind of Dongfang Invincible makes me full of love. So I hope there can be that kind of person, who may not be a martial arts master or ordinary person, but who is strong enough on the inside to hold up the sky for the East. Coming back to this article, I have to say that the beginning really stood out to me. I think a person's maturity, composure and ability to do things come from the encounters in life and the experience of time. The Qingcheng here needs a background and experience. The key point is that throughout the entire article, his character is neither too white nor a virgin. Although it is a bit NC in some places, overall it is still very satisfying. However, I still couldn't complain. I think the author wanted to create a perfect male protagonist, but when I faced the alluring Toda and his heartthrob aura, I was disgusted. When Feng Qingyang and Qingcheng met for the first time, my eyebrows jumped, and I had a premonition that another disaster was born. Sure enough, this premonition was correct. Excluding those female characters who played soy sauce, it was Feng Qingyang first, then the emperor, Shuangsheng, Yaochun, and finally Lin Song. Who wouldn't have met Qingcheng? Fascinated by his charm, Yaochun's feelings are easy to understand. What's more outrageous is the twins. As a baby, they like to be close to Qingcheng, their father, instead of Dongfang, the mother who takes care of him day and night. Not to mention that the twins and Qingcheng have the same origin. This reason is hard for me to accept. And I'm really curious, is the pure masculine beauty of Qingcheng more attractive to men than the androgynous androgynous beauty of the East? Or did Feng Qingyang and the others automatically transform into girlish feelings when they saw Qingcheng? In addition, in terms of appearance description, although the author always writes about two equally stunning women, it gives me the feeling that Dongfang is always a green leaf in the city. To be honest, as a person who loves Dongfang, I am quite opposed to such a description setting. I don't want everyone in the article to fall in love with Dongfang, but I don't want Dongfang to only serve as a foil for the male protagonist in the article. When it comes to relationships, I believe this is the weak point in this article. The passionate love between the two of them is inexplicable, just like something getting results directly from the beginning without going through the process. Originally, I was very troubled by the slow start at the beginning, but the fast forward at the end made me feel very abrupt. Although the previous two people got along very warmly, they were not emotionally sublime to love, especially Qingcheng. From the beginning to the end, I could not tell when he fell in love with Dongfang. The author's explanation was also very reluctant, so even though Qingcheng kept saying how much he loved Dongfang, I was always worried that with such a pursuer, he would suddenly turn around and leave Dongfang behind. What's even more ridiculous is that the misunderstanding and betrayal that lasted for three years was resolved just by one word from Tong Baixiong. Although I always wanted them to put an end to their past feud as soon as possible, but when they actually achieved it, it felt unreal and made people laugh or cry. Moreover, the little villain Hong Rui was solved before he could actually do any evil. Then there is the love like paint and glue in Qingcheng Dongfang. It may be because there is no previous paving. The author's explanation of this result is also very blunt. Speaking of Dongfang, I saw a discussion thread earlier saying that Dongfang is selfish and overbearing here (the key point). Although I feel uncomfortable, the Dongfang in the story is also true. Another point I want to mention is that Dongfang's exclusivity in the story made me stay away from him. After falling in love, Dongfang Qingcheng is not a lover, he is basically a conjoined twin. If I had such a coquettish girlfriend, I would definitely not be able to bear it as a man. In my opinion, lovers should be close to each other, but also distant. A seemingly perfect love like Qingcheng Dongfang is full of flaws, and some parts of Dongfang are too coquettish and unreasonable, which makes me maladaptive. But I don't think it's a mistake for Dongfang to follow Qingcheng to Shangxian. From my point of view, if you really love this person and stick to this person, you have to live and die together. Instead of being separated and worried about another person, it's better to face it together. Dongfang's only mistake is that he is not strong enough. Overall, I still like Riyue Xu very much. Although I am dissatisfied with the male protagonist, I still love it very much. The leader is also very cute. Although the plot is bloody, it is also very attractive, so I still hope that the author can continue writing it. It is so unfinished that it makes people feel weak! PS: There is still a lot I want to express but I can't. I typed these things after just one and a half minutes of typing. I feel helpless with my ability to control words.