Completed in 2025: Please, I Beg You. The protagonists are the human-and-ghost couple Yue Xin and Chai Sang. A campus story told in episodic arcs.
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Blurb:
Overworked sales rep and part-time ghost hunter X kind-hearted, beautiful rehabilitation doctor.
Song Xin has just graduated from college and already has two exhausting jobs: sales rep and mysterious online shop owner. On the side, she hunts ghosts.
Arc One: Before she has even met Sister Su, Song Xin suddenly gets a ghost-hunting job at a construction site. The ghost turns out to be kind, too afraid to hurt anyone even after death.
Arc Two: Song Xin gets injured by accident and meets beautiful, kind-hearted Sister Su. It is love at first sight. She has already become friends with the nurses at the hospital just so she can see Sister Su.
Sister Su feels sorry for the young overworked girl, who has no parents, and takes good care of her.
But then Song Xin discovers that Sister Su has a boyfriend. She is devastated!
No matter. If you swing your hoe well enough, you can always dig into someone else's corner.
Hey, it turns out Sister Su's boyfriend says he saw a ghost. A closer look reveals he's a jerk, so Sister Su cuts him loose and breaks up with him right away.
Song Xin: Oh yeah! Sister Su will be mine sooner or later!
Arc Three: A windfall brings an unexpected surprise, and Sister Su teams up with Song Xin to hunt ghosts.
What? Dr. Su confessed!
Ah! Dr. Su is so good at this that Song Xin suddenly feels insecure.
The story focuses on its episodic arcs, with the main plot woven in here and there. The scares are very mild!!!
P.S. Song Xin and Su's relationship unfolds smoothly, without any major twists. No major angst, just a little angst for flavor.
Gentle older top X dependable younger bottom.
They have a good relationship.
They kiss.
They catch ghosts.
They occasionally switch.
They still have to go to work.
Note: 1. The big brother from the first arc eventually becomes friends with the heroine and continues to help her. If that's not your thing, please don't read.
2. The doctor has an ex-boyfriend. When she was young and naive, she mistook gratitude for love. Nothing physical happened between them. If that bothers you, please don't read.
Theme: Explore the world through science.
It's a pity that I'm so infatuated, but I didn't meet the right person. It's a pity.
Shi Yue is so pitiful, give him a hug
The plot is okay, and I really like the characters. As far as my personal opinion is concerned, I think the writing is too light. The subject matter is a ghost exorcist, and the writing technique is like writing about daily life. Could this chapter be better written? For example, the conversation between Su's mother and Song Xin was moved forward in the sequence. During the conversation, it was mentioned that Su Ye had not come back yet, and Su Ye's experience of going to the next door to meet a ghost was placed at the end of the chapter, hanging on the readers. The technique is not clever, but there is conflict. Look at X's dedication, the criminal methods cannot be written directly, it just makes you guess and finally realize it. The author is lying to the reader and hanging the reader. The form of the novel here is originally chapter by chapter, very short. Even if it is updated daily, once the plot becomes dull, it will be difficult to follow. I think the ghost exorcist can be labeled as suspenseful. I don't know if you want to write it in this aspect. Now that a new character appears, the reader has been told without hesitation that "this person is the next one to encounter ghosts." Then what you can do is to describe the thrill of exorcising ghosts with a deeper and more meticulous style. Doesn't this make it more difficult for yourself? The characters in the group portraits are not described enough, making it difficult for people to empathize. I can't empathize with Mother Su... Nor do I feel sorry for the grandma next door... The narrative method is too calm. Aren't they all talking about fake people recently? Your narration is so calm and fake... Sister, use your five senses: sight, smell, touch, hearing, and mental activities. Write down the details and sink in. The outline and characters are so well thought out. This novel deserves more attention.
The problem is solved ~ everyone has a good night
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