I've picked this story back up and will keep updating until it's complete!
If it's on the weekly feature list, I'll update with it; otherwise, I'll update every other day.
[Brooding, stern young master of the capital's elite x Cool, moonlike Kunqu beauty]
The one time she let herself go,
was on a rainy night in Vienna, with the man inside a black Maybach.
When they met again, their status was worlds apart.
He said he would pave a smooth road for her.
Later, everything in the world came down to love.
Shang Yan cupped her face, his voice tender and affectionate.
"Stay. Be the last snowfall of my life."
Reading notes:
1. He has a secret crush on her and has been plotting this for a long time.
2. The heroine's career is the main storyline.
3. There may be some discontinuity in the development of their relationship. The main storyline has undergone major revisions.
Theme: Give me a beautiful dream that lasts a lifetime.
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Isn't it updated? It's very beautiful.
It feels like there is no obvious contradiction or conflict in the plot so far (? There is a kind of plot where the characters are forcibly pushed to change the scene, and then the male and female protagonists start to have feelings for each other, which is a bit abrupt, but there is actually no "story" behind it. For example, in the first chapter, when the male and female protagonists meet for the first time, there is only one female protagonist who panics when she sees the male protagonist, and the two have no other interaction or rivalry. To give a more bloody example, if the plot is that the female protagonist joins the fiancée Hosting an engagement banquet, he sang in person, and then the male protagonist deliberately used the token of love between the two of them as an engagement gift or took the initiative to touch the female at the banquet, and even asked the female protagonist what to do if her fiancé knew about their relationship. This plot is even more conflicting. The plot in the first chapter needs to be the main plot and foreshadowing of various conflicts. In the first chapter, the female protagonist is drunk again as soon as she arrives, which is obviously a good opportunity to bury the plot. The male protagonist came to the rescue, but the heroine's crisis was not mentioned. He was forced to drink as soon as he came, and the male protagonist appeared and disappeared; in the second chapter, why did the heroine and his friends stop the car like that? Is there any purpose that must be achieved, and it's not like there is no other means of transportation; then the female protagonist got into the male protagonist's car. How could the female protagonist, a person who had only been in love once, be willing to have sex with the male protagonist? I don't know if I can get it, but I can tell that I want to promote the relationship between the male and female protagonists, but it's a bit deliberate, and it's a bit "feeling for the sake of having feelings." The two people have no "story" and can't see the "motivation" of doing things. They just keep changing the scene, and then the feelings will arise. DaDa's writing is very good! If there is a more complete "conflict" and "contradiction" in the first three chapters, it will be more exciting. Come on~ 🧋 [Spread Flowers] 💪
I have been collecting it for a long time and finally published it. Congratulations.