He was drawn to her gentleness and her cool indifference. She remembered him, yet always avoided him. Was she deliberately playing hard to get, or was she truly unmoved? His roguish ways, and the coldness that surfaced now and then: which one was the real him?
Why is it that only the male protagonist describes the appearance of the heroine from the perspective of the heroine, but there is no description of the male protagonist's appearance? (I only talked about red and phoenix eyes)
I think one of the good things about you is that you write the male and female protagonists side by side, unlike many female romance authors who only write from the perspective of one heroine. You have made a breakthrough and are more grand. But it still shows the emphasis on the heroine~
There is a typo in the last sentence~~! His face should not be red,
. . . . . Sit back and wait for Chapter 5. . . Hey-hey. . .
. . . . . I will be the first to accompany you down the road. . . . Hey-hey. . .
. . . . Come on, little Jane. . .
Why is it that only the male protagonist describes the appearance of the heroine from the perspective of the heroine, but there is no description of the male protagonist's appearance? (I only talked about red and phoenix eyes) I think one of the good things about you is that you write the male and female protagonists side by side, unlike many female romance authors who only write from the perspective of one heroine. You have made a breakthrough and are more grand. But it still shows the emphasis on the heroine~
There is a typo in the last sentence~~! His face should not be red,
. . . . . Sit back and wait for Chapter 5. . . Hey-hey. . .
. . . . . I will be the first to accompany you down the road. . . . Hey-hey. . . . . . . Come on, little Jane. . .