Fang Xingcheng died an unfortunate death and transmigrated as a pretty little white snake with delicate features.
Fang Xingcheng consoled himself: At least I'm not a cockroach, and I look good.
Turning around, he saw a white python being disemboweled.
The person responsible, standing with his back to Fang Xingcheng, wiped the blood splashed on his face. Holding a still-beating heart, he turned around and smiled at him.
Fang Xingcheng: Holy crap, help!
He wriggled desperately to escape, but his body wouldn't obey. In his panic, he even tied himself into a knot.
The psychopath who had chased after him picked him up and stared coldly, ready to kill him.
Fang Xingcheng trembled and bent his body into a heart, trying to curry favor.
Psychopath: "..."
Pitiful snake shou x handsome village boy from Miaojiang gong
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My new novel is here: Human, I've Been Putting Up with You for Ages, a fantasy setting.
As the insect race runs rampant, humanity and the beastfolk form an alliance. The Lin family, one of humanity's four great houses, is suspected of colluding with the insects. Nan Yusheng, a rabbit beastfolk, is ordered to gather evidence.
To get into the Lin family, Nan Yusheng sets his sights on Lin Ziye, the illegitimate son recently brought back into the family. He bribes a school bully, then hides and waits for the signal to rescue the beauty, only to get a school bully with a bruised and swollen face.
The bully sobs uncontrollably. "This kind of situation costs extra!"
Nan Yusheng pouts and writes an IOU.
When one plan fails, Nan Yusheng comes up with another. He takes out a high-interest loan to buy a ticket to Lin Ziye's birthday party, intending to pose as an admirer and strike up a conversation. But the guest of honor never shows up all evening.
Furious, Nan Yusheng turns into a rabbit and flops down in Lin Ziye's path to school, pretending to have been hit by a car.
Lin Ziye stops, crouches down, watches him for a long while, then pulls out a carrot. "Here. Compensation."
Nan Yusheng: What? Is he nuts?
Rabbit shou x military academy student gong
Theme: Even when you're down, keep fighting to turn things around.
Come on, update, I can't see enough.
I just want to know if the buried baby bird has come out? Don't come back. My soul has returned. I suffocated to death in the soil.
It can be seen that my wife has great ideas. Dolls, soul extraction, reincarnation, village defense system, white python battle, multiple characters and settings appear intensively in the same chapter. The narrative itself is clear, the cause and effect relationships are also completed from the margins, and the skeleton and foreshadowing of the world view are basically constructed [Spread Flowers] In terms of rhythm, the information density is relatively high when reading, and the whole chapter is tight. If a little space can be left at a few key nodes to allow readers to stay, reminisce, and establish emotional connections with the characters, the reading experience may be better 🧋 In addition, the copywriting has a light tone, but the background of the first half of the first chapter is dark and depressing. There is a certain deviation between the copywriting and the first half of the main text. If a signal can be given in advance, it may be easier to accept 😳