The Age After Body Snatching

Although the article was written many years ago, it was the first unfinished article I saw. It was really uncomfortable to read it late at night. When I went to fight the Vulture dungeon, I thought it was pretty good, but when Yuan came out at the end, it was obviously for the sake of a hasty ending. . Someone has arranged the unexplained foreshadowing, which is quite correct. Let me complain about a few points. First, there are loopholes in the setting. The book says that 2000 years ago, the demons discovered the teleportation array and started a war between humans and demons for hundreds of years. At the end, Fairy Qiong was only in the late stage of Nascent Soul, and she ascended after the great achievement of returning to the virtual world and combining the path. The book mentions that he ascended, but the hundreds of years of war between humans and demons, plus the line between the 500 years when the hero went to modern times and the roughly 100 years after his return, there is only about a thousand years left in between. Is this time really long enough for Fairy Qiong to ascend to the immortal world and transform into the Nascent Soul stage for a long time at most? Since someone ascended before, it proves that there are not just one or two people in the three realms before and after. Why is it suddenly gone now? The time in between was too short. . Not enough to sustain this change. The second reason is why it is called the post-seizure era. At least I don't see the content of the title. It also didn't explain why modern people can cultivate immortality, and the general situation. Another point is that it is too natural to assume that the transformed god just wants to travel freely through the planes. There are the last three realms behind this. The transformed god can at most have a preliminary grasp of the laws of space and wants to freely travel between the planes. . . In fact, it is much better to set this plane to the highest level. It's a pity that there are settings for the last three realms. There are many other foreshadowings that I haven't filled in yet and someone else has listed them, so I won't go into them. Anyway, being the first person I saw to read an unfinished story, I felt very sad. I thought the first 180 chapters were very good, especially the early stages, which were quite attractive. I was too eager to end it later. Don't care anymore.

It was actually fully booked, but after watching it I still didn't like the heroine.

. . . I saw this article from the Tuishu official account this month. Lao Wen drives a lot, and there are quite a few people who are locked up. This article is really good at the beginning, but there is no conflict and a lot of foreshadowing in the back. It ended really suddenly. . . .

After reading it in one sitting, I didn't feel good. In fairy tales, there are fairies but not knights; the world view setting is actually similar to that of fairy tales. It can be seen that Putao refers to the settings of other fairy tales of Dian and JJ, and also plays some online games. However, directly putting the game settings such as "mission system" and "level of mythical beasts" into the novel is not only blunt, but also has a strong sense of cutting corners and appropriation. This is telling a story, not playing a game; the story starts with the male protagonist regaining his body and settling in with the female protagonist. From the beginning of the story, there is no main line; from the 150th chapter onwards, there is a strong suspicion of delaying the plot and making up the word count, not to mention the plot. In order to make the story "seem" to have a so-called ending climax, an old plot of the demon clan was forced into the story, and the conflicting effect caused by the past plot was solved in a few words. Not to mention the plot of the three perverted apprentices coming to take revenge. The thunder is rolling. I don't know what it is called. I can only think of it as a word count; Xianxia's The charm lies in the different values and outlook on life brought about by this different world view, as well as the wonderful creatures, magical weapons, and secrets of cultivation that test the imagination. In the first half of the story, Putao put a lot of effort into explaining and constructing the world. In the last few dozen chapters, because the story has no real big scenes and big battles, it is a huge waste of the magnificent and colorful martial arts settings in such a vast world, not to mention the 300-word appearance of the different time and space demon world. It would be better to have a war between humans and demons than to have it done in such a hasty manner. Finally, I have to say that Putao's writing style has never been gorgeous, but in the past, his writing style was often philosophical and could bring out many truths about human nature. This article In this aspect, it is much inferior. In the second half, let alone life insights, because the story is compiled casually, and even the writing style is not up to the level of a novel. It is boring and boring to read. It is basically written casually and never uses words to form sentences. The characters of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are relatively successful in the first part, but basically lost in the second half; the story does not have a wonderful villain, which is why the story does not have a real climax at the end; the biggest problem is that the body is taken away - sharing a body - retrieving the body - together, after completing this main line, the story is actually over. Putao did not pay attention to construct other clues that promote the continuation of the story. Demons and other things, I really want to start shooting the crime from the first sight, and say "I'll kill it!" The moment I finished reading, the thing that popped into my head was, is it too easy for the author to make money from milk powder? I either signed a contract or made an appointment with the publisher about the number of words. In the middle of writing, I realized that the number of words at the end was completely insufficient, so I just scraped together at least 30 chapters. The levels are really going straight downhill.

Six months of bubbling><~~~~~~~~~~~~School is about to start. . . Hey, I'm already a sophomore. I received my first school girl today, and I feel like I have gone through many changes. . .

It's good to read, the first article about cultivating immortality that I read. I hope I can continue to write a sequel.

It ended so suddenly (?í _ ì?), Just like Wei Sheng

This is the most common mentality change I have ever seen in a mortal after cultivating immortality. It feels like the author has brought himself into the writing.

Please tell me if the extra chapter is good. Several QAQ books ended abruptly like this.

It's amazing how much imagination you have. You can write such an unconventional and beautiful story, and it's so long. I admire it very much. Give flowers! Although I don't like the heroine, she is stingy and crooked, and her only advantage is that she loves animals (big praise!), But this may be DaDa's setting for the heroine. No matter what, the story makes people want to read more. It is a good story.