As I took out my keys and opened my front door, he suddenly appeared and stopped me.
He said I would die today, and that he was the one who would kill me.
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This is a murder that never happened, and I have to find the person who wants to kill me.
[Reading Guide]
1. Many plot points are there to serve the story, so please don't overanalyze them.
2. The main story is in third person. It's about an ordinary person piecing clues together to find the culprit, with no special advantages.
3. Updated daily. I'll take a day off if something comes up.
Coming soon: My Dragon-Prince Underlings Are All at My Feet. Please add it to your collection!
Also known as: I Transmigrated into a Male-Oriented Novel and Won Over All the Hero's Underlings
Li Zhen transmigrated into a book, becoming a notorious princess with a tragic ending in a male-oriented novel about a Dragon-Prince.
The good news: Her golden finger is a dating sim System.
The bad news: She has to ascend the throne and become empress in this male-oriented novel.
The dating sim System can make men go crazy for her, lose their minds over her, and bang their heads against walls for her. But how is she supposed to become empress with a dating sim System?
Li Zhen turned her attention to the male lead's underlings.
Each of them was an exceptional man. If she won them over, wouldn't becoming empress be just around the corner?
And so Li Zhen began her quest to steal the hero's men right out from under him.
Male Contestant No. 1: A cool and aloof young gentleman from an influential clan
Before she wins him over: "Princess, please don't stand so close to me. Men and women should keep their distance."
After she wins him over: "My entire clan will have your back, so when we eat later, could you sit on my lap, Princess?"
Male Contestant No. 2: An arrogant heir with power and influence
Before she wins him over: "A powerless princess like you thinks you can stand as my equal?"
After she wins him over: "I'll give you all my power. When you go to bed tonight, can I sleep on the floor in your room?"
Male Contestant No. 3: A proud general commanding a mighty army
Before she wins him over: "Get out of here! Women aren't allowed in the military camp!"
After she wins him over: "All a hundred thousand of my troops are yours, and you make the rules in the camp. So, could you come visit me?"
Male Contestant No. 4: A ruthless assassin with extraordinary martial arts skills
Before she wins him over: "A princess? Ha. You're just another soul for my blade."
After she wins him over: "All my martial arts skills are at your disposal. Princess, will you let me be your dog?"
The day Li Zhen defeated the hero and ascended the throne as empress, the men asked her with red-rimmed eyes which of them she truly loved. Li Zhen replied, "You're all my wings!"
Theme: Fight crime and punish lawbreakers.
Not bad, time loop, the story is clearly explained, the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is a bit thin, the villain is a bit flimsy, but the story is clearly told, the characters are a bit thin, it is recommended to strengthen it
The first half of the book is good to read. After the identity of the murderer is discovered in the 2/3rd, the mission goal becomes to find evidence. However, the male and female protagonists are just ordinary people and can do very little. In addition, people who often watch suspense can guess at a glance that the female anchor was also killed by the murderer. The fish that often appears must be the way the body was disposed of. The several foreshadowings are too clear. The sense of suspense is basically reduced to 0, and the last few loops are basically slowing down the pace, creating a sense of tension that the murderer is caught at the last moment of the last loop. But the pace was too obviously slow, which made me feel a little impatient. In addition, the emotional scenes are too redundant, and the male protagonist has no highlight, his IQ is average, and his combat ability is average. There are awkward descriptions (for example, the heroine's face turned red when she was strangled, and the hero screamed when he woke up) In addition, there are some holes in the details. The ghost of the deceased arranged this time loop to catch the murderer. Couldn't you have guessed it from the heroine's dream and entering the perspective of the corpse between the loops? The heroine also guessed it at the end (). And since they are the ghosts of the dead, why are there only male protagonists in the cycle for the first three times, and the female protagonist is added to the cycle in the fourth time after the male and female protagonists come into contact? Shouldn't he start the cycle with his next victim? Also, in the first cycle, the male protagonist was held down as the murderer. Who called the police? Wasn't the murderer planning to take the female protagonist's body home to feed the fish? Why did he leave early so that the male protagonist could find the body? 🤔
Seeing this, I feel there is a slight bug. Qin Yu has fought with the murderer, so he is not the murderer, unless he finds someone to act, but they all killed him, so it can't be acted. Moreover, the heroine met the murderer's gaze through the peephole at that time. Both of them should know the murderer's figure.
Ah, the heroine saw Qin Yu being killed by a murderer with her own eyes. How could she suspect that the murderer was Qin Yu? If she wanted to doubt it, she would just suspect that Qin Yu and the murderer were together...
There seems to be a problem with the logic here. Before the first cycle started, the heroine saw Qin Yu fighting the murderer and died. At the same time, Qin Yu did not know that the heroine would enter the cycle after this death, so there was no deliberate deception. And even if Qin Yu knew that the heroine would enter the loop, who could he find to act in this drama with him? Ordinary people without circulating memory would not risk becoming criminals by acting with others, unless there are two criminals, one Qin Yu and the other. If Qin Yu is a criminal, then why does he need to talk to the heroine? Why don't he just stay at home and wait for the heroine's cycle to end and die completely?
It doesn't make sense. . . The murderer has withdrawn the message, but he can also send other messages to make up for it. . . Just withdraw it without replying to anything. It's not self-inflicted at all.
Finished by pressing the claw We will never understand the psychology of evil people. If we understand, we will become perverts. The author writes very well [Spread Flowers]
Overall it's okay. The writing is good and the narration is good. But the plot design is relatively poor. The IQs of the male and female protagonists are too low, or too ordinary. Many actions are based on taking one step at a time and trying to figure out the answer. The characters are also averagely created, and I can't see where love is born. On the contrary, the best character creation is that of Officer Fang. He is very three-dimensional and the image is vivid on the paper. The villain design is also reasonable. The character design of the delivery boy, peeping tom, locksmith, and security guard in the community also complements each other. Comparing the male and female protagonists, the characters are even worse. Also, the time and space cycle is too similar to popular works. Although this thing is not original, it can be used, but it still needs to be reprocessed with some thought to stimulate readers. Otherwise, it will be like a composition written by copying from excellent examples.
You don't need to have a love line, that's just saying
Ah ah ah ah, the heroine's reply is so funny