I Became the Villainous Older Brother of a Shonen Manga Protagonist

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Ah, I thought it was a brand new world, but I didn't expect it to be a branch line from the previous book. Even though I had read the previous book, I was still confused, and I thought the ending was too sudden! I thought it was only the middle period, but I didn't expect it to be the later period. The Dark Moon organization felt completely redundant... I was disappointed. Compared with the previous book, it was so inferior. There was no distance fighting between the elder brother and the younger brother, and no memories of the process of getting close to each other. In the copywriting I had been looking forward to for a long time, the elder brother finally appeared as the big villain, and the spectacular scene where the younger brother and his friends knew about it shocked the audience. It was written by It didn't live up to expectations either... I thought the follow-up would be that after the younger brother knew his elder brother's identity, he would get along with him for a while and have a series of flashbacks. But in the end, he found out that his elder brother was the villain. He was so shocked that he temporarily turned against his brother on the spot. His friends ate to their heart's content, the world view was in chaos, and the onlookers felt that the world had finally turned into something they didn't recognize! Hahahahaha, this is interesting. . .

It feels like the rest of the story is too fast. I was originally looking forward to my brother's fall from grace and my brother's direct emotional shaping. Now I feel like it has been a running story ever since I went to Juntian Continent. Obviously, the Public Opinion Academy I wrote about before was so fun. I also look forward to my brother's reaction when he reaches the upper level, follows the path that his brother has walked, and finds out that Ouyang is the brother and Zisha is the brother! ! ! I feel like a lot of comics and forum writing are bad, and the ending is impossible to take back.

So disappointed, I regret booking all of them

Don't just open advance collection, the copywriting is so good, it's better to write it

I feel that the author is obsessed with connecting this book with the previous one, and has not considered that this is a new book, and not everyone has read the previous book [I have read it, but I don't agree that the final climax is actually the protagonist of the previous book]. Why don't you read the introduction?

What I look forward to most when reading comics and forums is the highlight of the protagonist, the conflict between the light and dark protagonists, and the dismantling of the relationship between the two in the forum. The audience can deduce a lot of things from some comic details. This book feels like it is biased as it is written.

I'm convinced, I basically don't comment, but I really can't stand it. This book is simply unfinished. It's obvious that my introduction talks about cyber powers, but in the next 20 chapters, I go to Juntian Continent, and Yo does some ancient martial arts. I'm really speechless, and the writing is also very deceptive. It's obvious that my brother has become a villain, but I only wrote a symbolic chapter or two in the last one or two chapters. I didn't even bother to read it. And has the author read the comics? How can a cartoonist do it? Maybe the supporting character drawn in the end basically solved all the problems (after all, for the manga, the brother is a supporting character). Oh my god, the cartoonist really doesn't want to live anymore when he draws it like this. Moreover, in the eyes of the comic readers, the brother does not appear very much. The whole text is seriously distorted, mainly due to confusing logic and poor ending. The introduction copy and title are deceptive. For those who want to see the climax of brothers recognizing each other, don't look forward to it, because there is no climax here, it is very flat, and it is very perfunctory. I advise people to run away.

Is this the end? So quickly [melted]

[666][666][666] Kill the final BOSS and the brothers are reunited. Looking forward to the follow-up episode~~[Chigua][Chigua]