The First Family of Qunyu Mountain

It is a very comfortable and comfortable article. The plot in the second half may be a bit dull, but the author writes about a long and promising day. There is a difference between the emotional line and the copywriting. The article itself is very complete and integrated. The regrets are resolved very well and it is very happyendin. G, the writing style is also very delicate and the family lines are full. The emotional description is particularly good and the priority is also good. The ending of the text is also just right. In short, it is highly recommended. Of course, if you want to see intense conflicts, don't come. If you like it, don't read it. If you don't like it, don't read it. Isn't it the best of both worlds?

I have always felt that the relationship line with Brother Qizi was too simplistic. Gui Qian's one-and-done choice of Los Angeles was also very different from the multiple relationships he pursued in the first place. In the original version of the copy, I had actually been buying the stock starter brother. I wanted to see if the two people had different trajectories and would end up in the same direction as in the previous life. There is a genetic metaphysics in people's choice of partners no matter how long they last. Guiqian and his previous life reconciled and made peace, and Brother Qizi was entrusted by Guiqian under the butterfly effect, so he could no longer have a fruitless time with Guiqian like he had in his previous life. Guiqian is a person who is too independent and raised too mature. Her family has given her absolute love and nourishment, allowing her to grow into a tough and strong soul. Therefore, the progress of her relationship with Luo Cheng is too dull, which also makes the reader feel too tame later in the story. But life is like this. Most of the time it is repetitive and boring. Whether Luo Cheng is the last husband or not, Guiqian's world will always be centered on her, and she is the only protagonist.

I feel that there is no need to delete the original story direction because of readers' opinions. The final perfection is very false, and I feel that the author himself may not be able to convince himself when writing. This last chapter is too dreamy

Oh my god, it's really good to watch it. What are the people in the comment section of the first few chapters crazy trying to persuade them to quit?

The family line is very well written, I kept crying while reading it, but the emotional line is really average, and the first version of the copy was changed. In fact, I think the first version of the copy is more attractive. If it is written according to it, it may be better and has a lot of x tension. Now it is a very ordinary urban fairy tale. The author's writing style is really good. I believe that the author can write a very attractive emotional line. It is a pity that I did not see it in this book. But anyway, thank the author for bringing this story. I hope you can have better works in the future.

The emotional line is really stretched a bit. Fortunately, it doesn't take up much, but it's really stretched.

Very good, the emotional line is also very good, hahaha, after reading the comments, I finally understand that there are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people

I bought the whole book, it feels a bit paradoxical, what I want to express is different from what is presented, the family and friends are well portrayed, the heroine is a bit embarrassed, and the various changes are inexplicable.

The end of "Spreading Flowers" 💪 Guiqian's family will always be happy

Super healing! Finished spreading flowers! !