One-line pitch: The story of a little white mouse who makes Yang Jian's sleeve its home.
Little White Mouse: If I hadn't figured out that we were fated to meet, I wouldn't have come looking for you! (Making itself at home on the head and shoulder of a certain adorable boy.)
Little Jian: Little White, we'll always be together, okay? (Picking up the adorable, proud little white mouse and nuzzling it.)
Pitch
One year, one month, one day, a little white mouse met a certain three-eyed child (ahem!).
Would the little white mouse, pretending to be proud but actually just tsundere, win over the innocent Yang Jian?
Or would Yang Jian, pretending to be pure but actually shrewd, get his claws into the simple little mouse?
That is the question...
But through the years of study, the Investiture of the Gods, and his days as a God of War...
The only one who stayed close to his heart all that time was that little, lively figure...
Hehe~ I've waited so long, and it's finally here! Thanks to Nalan for drawing the chibi Yang Jian and Little White (this picture is from the Scrap Doodles Workshop).
It's not a tragedy - - really, it isn't...
Folks, the writing might not be very good at first, so I hope you'll bear with it for a few chapters. Dongzi is always trying to improve. If you really don't like it (T T), could you offer some suggestions so Dongzi knows what needs work? Thank you (T T). Really, read a few more chapters... maybe it won't be so bad later on.
And also...
A Dong's author page. Thanks, A Yuan. If you like it, folks, please click over~
On 10/28, I corrected typos and wording in Chapters 1, 2, and 3.
This isn't a tragic story...
PS: Just so you know, there may be typos or other mistakes, so I'll revise the story, but I'll make those changes all at once after an update.
Also, the ages here are given by the traditional Chinese method of counting age.
In Volume One, Yang Jian is still just a five- or six-year-old kid. Dongzi finally couldn't resist... and changed all the references to him to Little Jian... I hope nobody thinks it's being overly precious. Honestly,
= = whenever I write Yang Jian, I remember he's the Erlang Shen, so I'll use his babyish nickname instead~~
Theme:
I was deceived into a trap and only jumped when I saw it was finished. How could this be considered finished?
I don't want to say anything! I really don't want to say anything! !
But! Zeyan! Zeyan!
My rat cat! Rat cat!
As soon as I see Xiaobai here, I think of another white mouse who is cold but only gentle to the little black cat!
Damn it! ! What to do! What to do! I can't change the scene!
It's over! I've fallen into Yaya's nest and can't get out!
Come and give me a hand! ! ! ! !
... It's obviously a pretty bleak chapter~
Would you feel very warm without my straw?
Is this the power of...&*?
So here I am again. . . . . . .
The most important friend, the most affectionate friend, wait for me...
Damn... It would be so wonderful if my friends turned into something like that
It doesn't seem that Yang Xiaosan is selfish in this place, but the squeamishness is there. Mistress, you still know not to let your second brother die...
Second brother! Go save your "husband-in-law"
You are so lazy…
The update speed is as fast as a tortoise = =
Touch Dongzi~~Come on...
Ah... Let Yang Lian die like this... It looks really hot...
White Tiger is so pitiful... He has been helping people but has been forgotten...
Do Baihu and Xiaobai know each other? Or is there anything else... It would be great if the mistress was eaten
I was deceived into a trap and only jumped when I saw it was finished. How could this be considered finished?
I don't want to say anything! I really don't want to say anything! ! But! Zeyan! Zeyan! My rat cat! Rat cat! As soon as I see Xiaobai here, I think of another white mouse who is cold but only gentle to the little black cat! Damn it! ! What to do! What to do! I can't change the scene! It's over! I've fallen into Yaya's nest and can't get out! Come and give me a hand! ! ! ! !
... It's obviously a pretty bleak chapter~ Would you feel very warm without my straw? Is this the power of...&*?
So here I am again. . . . . . .
The most important friend, the most affectionate friend, wait for me... Damn... It would be so wonderful if my friends turned into something like that It doesn't seem that Yang Xiaosan is selfish in this place, but the squeamishness is there. Mistress, you still know not to let your second brother die... Second brother! Go save your "husband-in-law"
You are so lazy… The update speed is as fast as a tortoise = =
Touch Dongzi~~Come on...
Ah... Let Yang Lian die like this... It looks really hot...
White Tiger is so pitiful... He has been helping people but has been forgotten...
Do Baihu and Xiaobai know each other? Or is there anything else... It would be great if the mistress was eaten