A transmigrated unlucky girl cheerfully moves into a shabby home in ancient times, only to face the miserable, chaotic country life of an oversized family with one child too many. Author's page: New works by Nuanxin →→: Spaceship Evolution · Interstellar Adventure · A Savage Loli from a Garbage Planet vs. a Noble Grand Duke of a Higher Civilization. Recommended completed work →→→: A reborn girl supports her family and builds a happy life with her portable manor
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This article has become a tragedy. It's so uncomfortable. It's heart-wrenching and painful.
Wow wow, isn't this article a comedy? Why has it become so sad? I can't help it.
To be honest, this article made me very painful. The pain was not because it was ugly. The story and plot were both good and attractive. It was just the writing that made me so uncomfortable. I wanted to give up several times, but I wanted to know the plot below, so I gritted my teeth and continued reading. Summarize it in two words - cumbersome. Especially the first few chapters, they were so messy and protracted that it made me want to burst into tears. I don't know why the author made such simple things so messy. The author's style... I don't know how to describe it. It seems like he writes down everything he thinks in his mind, regardless of whether it contributes to the plot. This article would be much smoother if we cut off the redundant psychology, descriptions, and cutscenes.
I think this article looks a bit weird. And here we find out that Dongyun is Xibao's friend in modern times, right? ! But something doesn't feel right! ! Dongyun seems to have come from the countryside in modern times and lived a hard life, but after arriving in the ancient countryside, he didn't know anything about improving rural life (farming and so on) - in contrast, Xibao was a rich kid who didn't worry about food and clothing, and was a bit silly. But in ancient times, he seemed to know a lot about farming and other things. This is very unreasonable! Could it be that the omnipotent heroine is causing trouble! ?
I don't understand, who is that little girl's father?
To be honest, I'm really not used to the big changes in plot style. It feels like a comedy suddenly turns into a tragedy halfway through.
So what~ I have a question? Can you tell me which one is the male protagonist? I find it very awkward.
It's pretty good, um, just a bit verbose.
This article has become a tragedy. It's so uncomfortable. It's heart-wrenching and painful.
Wow wow, isn't this article a comedy? Why has it become so sad? I can't help it.
To be honest, this article made me very painful. The pain was not because it was ugly. The story and plot were both good and attractive. It was just the writing that made me so uncomfortable. I wanted to give up several times, but I wanted to know the plot below, so I gritted my teeth and continued reading. Summarize it in two words - cumbersome. Especially the first few chapters, they were so messy and protracted that it made me want to burst into tears. I don't know why the author made such simple things so messy. The author's style... I don't know how to describe it. It seems like he writes down everything he thinks in his mind, regardless of whether it contributes to the plot. This article would be much smoother if we cut off the redundant psychology, descriptions, and cutscenes.
I think this article looks a bit weird. And here we find out that Dongyun is Xibao's friend in modern times, right? ! But something doesn't feel right! ! Dongyun seems to have come from the countryside in modern times and lived a hard life, but after arriving in the ancient countryside, he didn't know anything about improving rural life (farming and so on) - in contrast, Xibao was a rich kid who didn't worry about food and clothing, and was a bit silly. But in ancient times, he seemed to know a lot about farming and other things. This is very unreasonable! Could it be that the omnipotent heroine is causing trouble! ?
I don't understand, who is that little girl's father?
To be honest, I'm really not used to the big changes in plot style. It feels like a comedy suddenly turns into a tragedy halfway through.
So what~ I have a question? Can you tell me which one is the male protagonist? I find it very awkward.
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