She transmigrated through the front lines, through a hail of bullets and the enemy's smoke, and past her father's military law. When he reached her, he simply looked at her, gripping her shoulders so tightly it seemed he would crush them, and told Su Moqing, word by word, "I want to see you!"
Three thousand miles of mountains and rivers, half a realm, could not compare to one Su Moqing. Stubborn as she was, at that moment she decided that for the rest of her life, she would follow him through heaven and earth, in life and in death.
But the days of their youth passed, their passion faded, and the past became smoke. And yet, with the realm so vast and beautiful, how had Su Moqing, the woman who meant more to him than all this splendid land, become so insignificant in his heart?
Golden sunflower. You haven't updated for a long time.
Recently, I have added a new hobby, alas, unconsciously. . . . . [Looking intently at the sleeping man next to him] He should be focusing on "ground"! [Wandering around in my maze-like mind] It seems like it should be "that"
If you like this kind of sentimental essay, I'll close it now!
Ten years, another ten years, as time goes by, nothing will remain as it was before.
Collect it first. The writing style is very good and touching, and it's rare that it doesn't feel stagnant, right~
It is relatively rare to see articles written about the Republic of China. The artistic conception of the article is very good~ [Actually, I don't read novels on JJ or other websites very often, so maybe I haven't noticed it. [The writing is good~ The narration is also very mature, but the dialogue needs to be a little bit tight~ Please do your best~O(∩_∩)O~]
The description of the battlefield is nothing more than a description of the people on the battlefield... Except that it is filled with smoke, which is inevitably too cliché!
The writing feels very comfortable. To be honest, when I first read the copywriting, I thought Su Moqing was Su Moqing. . .
How to write a war scene? It's so difficult.
The world is safe and secure, and I will live up to the Tathagata and live up to you...