This was originally a short story meant for a magazine, but it looks like the magazine is about to fold, and it won't make it into the issue that was supposed to feature my story. I feel so awkward, but at least I can post it in my column, so it wasn't written for nothing.
[Note] I originally wrote a bad ending for this story. It's called a bad ending, but it's not tragic at all. The editor asked me to write a happy ending, so I wrote one too. I'll post both endings at the end, and you can choose whichever one you prefer.
Premise:
I think it's pretty good~! ~Really·
Both endings are awkward and really all kinds of bad endings.
Personally, I think HE is more reasonable. If you go by BE, Wang Yu was transferred from the sales department with development potential to the R&D department just to chase Wang Qisi. Moreover, he persisted in going home together every day and found the photos of himself that Wang Qisi had collected. Logically, he should confess his love in one go at this time, but he withered. , Then why take the photo away? What's the use of forcing Wang Qisi like this. I just feel like some of these points don't make sense.
I really think this HE is better than BE. The author thinks that the unnaturalness may be because you have determined in your heart that it should be BE, so you are not sure when you write it. You do feel that the text is a little hasty. However, as far as the ending is concerned, considering all the foreshadowing, it is a more natural development for He Yu to fall in love with Wang Qisi. Otherwise, why would he care about him so much, why would he go to his house, and why would he take away the photo? If he didn't want to develop that kind of relationship with Wang Qisi, he should avoid him.
Well, BE is more natural. Since Junior Brother He is thousands of miles away and only a few feet away, let's find someone who is really close.
BE's look better!
It seems that BE's are always so intriguing But for the sake of my own mood, I'd better accept HE.
Cute things are always confusing╮(╯3╰)╭╮(╯3╰)╭
The imprint of the forceful discharge of sand! This HE is really tough Another confession: I have always liked Xiao 11's articles, although I don't really reply...
This is still a happy ending.