
Sultry Afternoon
午后燥热
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 4k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
1Chapters
5Favorites
2.2kClicks per chapter
9Comments
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Reader comments 9
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I've read it several times, and I've been thinking that it would be better if it was a long story~ But that's fine too.
I never read modern literature, so I finished reading it hehe
The real story is somewhat ordinary, like the glass of water of life that you drink every morning, and like the unchanging meals in the 2 canteen. Even though you can think about it with your eyes closed, even though you feel that this development is natural, you feel sad and helpless, unable to argue, and unable to let go. .
The environment is handled wonderfully!
It's actually a good article, but it's too hurtful...
The writing is beautiful, so beautiful, so beautiful. Sometimes I don't mean to let it down, I just miss it. Don't go to Jin/Jiang to write somewhere else. If you want to continue writing long stories, your writing should be able to mix it up on the small website. It is gorgeous but not empty.
The article has ended here. But the imagination left to me is still not over. I believe that the story continues, and articles can have an ending, but life does not. You, the author, write your ending, and I have already seen the way they hugged each other again, and then I raised the corner of my mouth, grateful to see such a story that happened around me on such a night. Collected.
Well, return visit. Watched half of it. That's all
This opening seems familiar. Although I didn't see the protagonist's name from beginning to end, I already understood the complexity and background of the entire story in just over 3,000 words. Because it's just the beginning, I don't know if Xiaowei is planning a flashback or has other plans. The brushwork is very delicate, I like it very much. There is not too much plot to neutralize it, and it is full of emotional rendering. This may be too much. It may also be that I made a judgment too early. I look forward to Xiaowei's follow-up!