When the past we shared in love lies shattered, can the beauty of those memories still bring someone to mind? Flowers wither, strings snap, and a lone wild goose flies away. For one person alone, my heart breaks into pieces. Drunk on life, I look back: the summit is cold and high, and tears fall into the emptiness.
I ask nothing of the next life. I only hope that in this life, you'll remember your promise to me: forever, never to leave, never to forsake me.
A gentle breeze brushes my cheek, carrying away the shimmer of tears and leaving only dried traces behind.
The melodious notes of the zither still play their mournful tune. The violets still bloom quietly by the window. Is the old friend who once listened still the one playing?
Perhaps no one remembers this music at all, and no one cares about anything that happened before. What has vanished is gone, and the dead are dead; they, too, have vanished.
Is Shi dead?
No one can tell me, but I believe he isn't. He'll surely appear when I need him most. Shi, where are you?
Prove it~~~Extra points Just. . You are lazy enough. Contented
Thank you for your opinion In fact, I didn't think too much about it at the beginning, I just wanted to follow the line of Shi and Yi. Hehe, I didn't expect that the writing was wrong... I don't know if all the adults who have read the beginning can insist on reading the next chapter. I'm really worried… (Sigh~~~)
I liked the atmosphere at the beginning very much. I don't like watching messy comedies. I always feel that they are not as profound as tragedies. I think you explained too much at the beginning and also set up too many foreshadowings. The explanation of these things is certainly important and necessary, but it must be done in a certain way. Once there are too many, it will easily confuse some readers and make them unable to understand. Try unfolding it layer by layer like peeling off candy wrapper. Talking too much at once makes me feel tired when writing, and readers feel tired when reading. You might as well repeat important foreshadowings and clues a few more times to make your ideas seem clearer. The above is my humble opinion after reading the first chapter, don't be angry! The water glasses and vases beside the table were shattered in the strong impact. What I saw was garbled code...
I really like Abel Xiao's update is a bit slow, please work hard!!
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Xiao~ I really like Abel, I have a crush on the handsome villain, haha
It's been a long time since I've updated. The first update contains so few words, haha
I saw this first, I'm going to class~~
This man is a bit perverted, I like it more than 8, haha
I'll just do it one by one, Lu Fei. This chapter is very interesting. Most of the names of the people in it have one character. Is there really only one character?