When she was three, she watched the adults crowd around the newborn boy, kissing him. “His face is all wrinkly, like a monkey's bottom,” she remarked.
When she was four and he was one, she spirited him away to her “boudoir.” Taking out the weapon she'd prepared especially to lure him in, ahem, to coax him with, she waved a lollipop and asked, “Which of us is prettier?” The little one stared at the lollipop and wisely replied, “Xun... Xun... is the prettiest!” With a satisfied smile, she handed the lollipop to the drooling little fellow across from her, then made sure to instruct him: “If anyone ever says you're pretty, you have to tell them that Yi Xun is prettier than you!”
When she was six and he was three, she was in the senior kindergarten class. During nap time, she sneaked into the junior class next door. Spotting a suspicious smear of cream on his cheek, she pulled him up. Still half asleep, he told her that he'd let the chubby girl sleeping beside him kiss him in exchange for a lollipop. She declared her ownership: “You belong to Yi Xun. Don't ever let anyone else kiss you again, understand?” He had been about to ask whether Mom and Dad could kiss him too, but her threatening gaze stopped the words in his throat. From then on, he saved himself for her.
When she was eleven and he was eight, she was in class when someone kicked open the classroom door. There he stood, even though he was supposed to be in class himself, looking on the verge of tears. The moment his eyes found her, tears streamed down his face. She rushed over to him. “What is it? What happened?” When she learned that a girl in his class had sneaked a kiss on him when he wasn't looking, she held his face in front of everyone and planted a kiss on his lips. “There, there, don't cry. I've kissed you now, so you're not dirty anymore.”
Phew, I changed the names. The old names just didn't feel right. If anyone has any opinions, let me know and I'll try changing them again.
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Forehead. . . The plot is pretty good, but it's too confusing. . . The author's first time writing? The writing style is a bit immature~~~~~ However, overall it's pretty good. But so does the ending. . . That's too much. . .
This book is very good, I like it very much, and I recommend it very much.
It's so confusing
I thought it was a heartwarming article…
Does the author want to torture us? Although the plot has been completely tortured, I personally still don't feel that it is tortured at all. The writing style is too slow. The emotional line is not delicate. Although the characters are more obvious, the dialogue is still in the feeling, and the story happens too smoothly. Many plots are developed for the sake of development. There is no sense of being natural. It is very stiff. Big: You have to work harder.
Wow, deceive my tears. I cried N times. . . Is this a serious drama? Then I still won't watch your tragedy. I cried like this during the main drama, but I shouldn't cry down the Great Wall even after the tragedy.
The author must be quite young, if not it would be a bit... It's very slow in many places, and the writing is very immature, giving the impression that it was written just for the sake of plot. Only realistic articles with appropriate wording will move you, but it would be great if you can keep writing.
You deserve it... You deserve it... Cry... Xun... Who told you, a stupid woman, to treat Yanyan like this... Sympathy does not equal love... That Yun looks like a fake bitch at first glance. Why bother with him... Of course he saved Homura... You can ask someone to take care of him... But you have to sacrifice yourself? In what age... And you still pledge your body...
Well, why is it locked?
Come on~ Add... Oil. Oil...