
The Immortal Lord in This Donghua Is Such a Show-Off
国漫仙君他好装
by Salt Ginger Orange (盐姜橙)
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 115k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
My next book will be I'm the Dorm Supervisor at a Men's Sports College. The blurb is below. Please add it to your favorites!
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Blurb:
[Two powerful, career-driven leads: a resilient comic artist x a cool, rising star in medicine]
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Qin Yanshu has a legendary background.
Even though he's graceful, charming, and as warm as jade, no one dares to act out in front of him.
Lu Xinning is the exception.
Qin Yanshu has never met anyone so shameless.
She dared to pull at his clothes the first time they met, and clung to him for his phone number, pretending to be crazy.
He has also never met anyone so persistent.
She waits for him on cold, rainy nights and rushes to his side without hesitation when he's isolated and helpless.
He thought she must be madly in love with him.
Even after seeing through his disguise, she would never leave him.
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The first time Lu Xinning met Qin Yanshu, he wore a custom-made, light-colored jacket and ascended the steps of a towering bookcase that stretched across the wall. He was cool and aristocratic, like an otherworldly immortal.
He looked exactly like the Immortal Lord Yun Ze from her comic.
Only later did she learn that this was just the mask he was used to wearing.
The real him was sharp-tongued, narcissistic, and ridiculously pretentious...
If it weren't for Yuan Qiu, she wouldn't bother with him.
3.
Lu Xinning would never forget that day, when her best friend Yuan Qiu "accidentally" fell from a building.
She crouched downstairs, staring at the glaring pool of blood, feeling as if she had fallen into an icy river.
She swore she would get justice for her friend.
The only thing Yuan Qiu left her was a book.
The Immortal Lord Yun Ze was an original character in it.
And Qin Yanshu happened to look a lot like him.
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Note: OC means Original Character.
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The male lead's name has been changed by one character to Yanshu. The name comes from the Book of Songs, from Cai Shu: "They came in throngs, yet were not at ease; the Son of Heaven bestowed them." Here, it means "ease" or "comfort," complementing the female lead's name, Ning.
The outline is unchanged, but the narrative pacing has been adjusted. Please let me know if you spot anything that could be improved.
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Upcoming book, I'm the Dorm Supervisor at a Men's Sports College:
Bin Youwei grew up wealthy and had never known hardship, so she was rather spoiled.
Her family had high hopes for her and always wanted to teach her to work hard and endure hardship. They even sent her to an outdoor training camp.
Bin Youwei suffered terribly, but luckily she downloaded a novel called How to Become a Champion before setting out.
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In the novel, the protagonist, Yuan Ye, was a national swimmer who narrowly missed out on becoming an Olympic champion. He later became a coach at a men's sports college. His student, Yi Jiangling, came from a poor family and stumbled into the swimming team by accident while trying to make a living.
The sports college was full of hidden talent. Every coach had once been a world champion, and every athlete was an exceptional prospect chosen from their province or city.
Only Yi Jiangling and Yuan Ye seemed out of place: one came from a poor, isolated village and knew little about the world, while the other's life had hit rock bottom after his disappointing performance on the field.
They suffered endless bullying. From having nothing to do with each other to becoming kindred spirits, they saved and inspired each other. In the end, one became a legendary swimmer, and the other a world-famous coach.
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The original story was an inspirational novel with no romance, but Bin Youwei managed to ship every possible couple:
Yuan Ye x Yi Jiangling, the badminton doubles pair Qiu Sulin x Qi Ming, and men's volleyball starters Xie Shendong x Wei Chuyang...
She shipped them so hard she got nosebleeds, and that night she had a dream.
In the dream, she became the dorm supervisor at the men's sports college in the novel, using her position to set up all the couples she shipped.
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Yue Linzhu was about to lose his mind!
Just because he was born afraid of water and couldn't swim, the old man had dumped him in this godforsaken place for outdoor training.
There was no signal in the deep mountains, and his secretly written novel, How to Become a Champion, was about to go on hiatus. He had no choice but to do everything he could to escape.
After finally sneaking out to the only internet cafe around, he discovered that his novel hadn't gone on hiatus at all. It had even gotten a huge update!
But what was this plot...
[Yi Jiangling has just finished swimming 1,500 meters and climbed out of the pool. Yuan Ye takes a towel and dries him off, slowly moving it down from his bulging chest muscles to his firm abdomen...]
[Yi Jiangling stands obediently and lets Yuan Ye do as he pleases, his ears turning red all the way to the nape of his neck.]
Damn it!
Yue Linzhu couldn't help cursing aloud.
What the hell, some account thief stole my login and is writing trash under my name?
What kind of nonsense is this?
Yuan Ye and Yi Jiangling are hooking up, and Qiu Sulin and Qi Ming, Xie Shendong and Wei Chuyang are hooking up too? They might as well rename the men's sports college the men's gay college!
He cursed under his breath as he edited those grating scenes:
[Yi Jiangling has just finished swimming 1,500 meters and is about to climb out of the pool. Yuan Ye throws the towel in his hand at his face and shouts, "Why are you getting out? Keep swimming!"]
[Yi Jiangling can only obey, swimming lap after lap until he's completely exhausted.]
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These past few nights, whenever Bin Youwei dreams that one of her ships is about to make real progress, she suddenly wakes up. When she falls asleep again, all the couples in her dreams have reverted to their original straight-man selves.
She finds it strange, as if someone is deliberately manipulating her dreams.
She tries to resist, and her sleep gets longer and longer, but she can't break free.
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Yue Linzhu is furious!
That account thief keeps messing with him. He finishes fixing the story, only to find it changed back again the next day!
He stays up late every night and trains during the day, until one day he finally collapses.
He dreams that he has become the owner of the convenience store beneath the sports college dormitory in his novel, and meets the dorm supervisor who always seems to be present whenever the plot takes a wild turn.
But why does this dorm supervisor seem so suspicious?
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