◎ Slowly revising the novel
Heir | Young Lady | Poor Boy
Male lead's perspective: The clingy ex-boyfriend of his crush has come back.
Male supporting character's perspective: She's getting married, and I'm not the groom.
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The marriage alliance between the Zhou and Xie families should have been a happy occasion, but the young lady had fallen in love with a penniless nobody.
Upstairs, Xie Xingyi leaned against the railing, standing at an angle, his expression impossible to read in the dim light.
Downstairs, Zhou Songyi shone like a princess, while the white-cuffed young man beside her looked completely out of place.
His childhood friend followed Xie Xingyi's gaze and teased him. "Is that the guy the young lady's been crying and throwing a fit to break off her engagement with you for?"
Surrounded by everyone, Xie Xingyi lazily raised his eyes. His gaze swept over the pair, and he gave a disdainful scoff. "Songyi's New Year's gift this year was a Graff pink diamond."
This was just an unremarkable day in the young lady's life. What did the man downstairs have to offer her?
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Ye Baiyan knew he came from a poor family, and that falling for Zhou Songyi was utterly presumptuous.
She was surrounded by admirers, a princess in an ivory tower. He, on the other hand, had no money at all. Everything he owned wasn't worth as much as one of her handbags.
When his pride overcame his reason, he chose to ignore her tear-filled eyes and cruelly break up with her.
They met again after a long separation at Zhou Songyi's engagement party.
He had become a poor-born success everyone liked to talk about, while she was about to become someone else's wife.
Ye Baiyan sat below the stage, holding a wineglass so tightly that his knuckles turned faintly white.
He recognized her fiancé: the heir to the Xie family, who had grown up with her as a childhood sweetheart.
[Key points]
1. Beloved Mary Sue melodrama, two men fighting over one woman.
2. Consider buying one chapter at a time so you can cut your losses in time.
3. Amateur writing, no logic. Please go easy on me.
Theme: Always be true to yourself
What does it mean that this line has nothing to do with the text? It refers to the fact that Song Yi likes Xie in the text, but forgets Ye in the end. In the welfare episode, Songyi not only likes Xie's figure and kindness to herself, but also likes Ye?
Dear author, why is there no story about Zhou Qiwen? I really want to read Zhou Qiwen's story line. 💪 💪 💪 💪
Congratulations on the completion. Thank you for bringing us such a beautiful story. I forgot which day I found this article in the serialization and the copywriter liked it, so I read on. Then come on, come on!!! See you next time!! Love you! It will get better and better!!!!! 😚 😚 😚 😚
Is it coming to an end? 😭 I feel so reluctant to let go. I want to cry when I see this.
The last bit made me feel sour.
Woo woo woo, I suddenly feel like it's better to be young. I thought forever is really forever.
Boss, cats and dogs are two years apart, haha, not three [Let me be healthy]
Why did the teacher change the copy 😭 I liked the previous version [Caidog]
"Ye Baiyan understood the meaning hidden in Xie Xingyi's body language. He shortened the dog leash and looked at Zhou Songyi, who was observing the dog with all his eyes: "Long time no see. ""Catch a big bug for the author~ Look towards "right" and your eyes will shine. The progress is about 31%.
What!!! I actually waited for the welfare episode