An Ancient Maidservant’s Rise to Power

He Guilin spent his whole life watching Zhu Qing go away.

Is it gone? It ended so suddenly, without even a closing speech.

Overall, it's pretty cool, except for the magical time jumps in the middle. A lot of things were not explained clearly. I wonder if they were deleted? For example, the story of the boy who was saved by the heroine and the story of Zhenzhu who caused a concubine to fall were not even finished, and they started skipping time immediately.

I thought he got married and they separated, but it turns out they were shrouded in horse leather.

To be honest, the more I read, the less interesting it becomes. In the first few chapters, some descriptions are not clear, and some write the time too slowly, especially in the palace. When the princess was pregnant, the time was too slow, at least not consistent with the actual time. Later, when writing about Xiao Fufeng, it was also confusing. At first, it was said that Xiao Fufeng was pregnant, but in the end the child disappeared inexplicably. In short, it was chaotic.

Sure enough, flaws are what people will never forget. . .

He Guilin can be regarded as running through Zhuqing's life. Although he only appeared very rarely, he finally gave an ending. It is an honor for a military commander to die in battle. Zhuqing lived a happy life and was free in his later years [Applause]

2025.9.26 Congratulations on the completion I finally got to the end of it. It's rare to see an article that continues until the heroine gets old. The author of this book handled the group portraits very well, with warmth and plot. He didn't let the heroine get married for the so-called consummation, nor did he let the heroine become unrecognizable in the officialdom. The details were handled very well [Rainbow Fart]

I cried at the end. The plot in the middle is very real, and the plot skipped by time can also be understood (you can also guess that it is a struggle). Generally speaking, the heroine is awake to the end, and there is no forced intelligence plot. Not everyone has to be perfect, and the writing is more realistic. However, because in ancient times, monogamy was not a monogamous relationship after all, so it is a pity for some people. Ps: Mingjun's ideas are quite advanced, and the development of the world is based on beauty.

Finished spreading flowers [Come on], I want to see the sequel in the future