Raising the Shrine of the Untouchable Beauty

A very good baby. If Ji Silu is a humanoid creature condensed from extreme hatred, then Baby Xiuyue is a Madonna who has been instilled with love. A combination of being unable to hate and not understanding love. Xiuyue's motherhood has reached the level of divinity, just like the statue of the Virgin holding a child on the stage. The eyes are carved into drooping arcs. Carrying that full of love, she can only look at the world and the "infant" in her arms with such eyes.

I feel that the author has created a very good Xiu Yue, but his portrayal of revenge is not very up to standard, and his behavior is also quite inconsistent... Which leads to several major plot twists that are uncomfortable to watch, and the emotional line is also broken.

... I didn't collapse when Ji Silu went crazy earlier. I didn't collapse when Xiu Yue was in pain. But in the first few chapters, I suddenly realized that I collapsed when they were talking. I don't like it very much. How should I put it? The current little crow gives me a more obviously tied feeling. I like to use the image of the Virgin Mary and motherhood to describe Xiu Yue. In my opinion, both are bound. One is made of plaster and the other is an invisible collar formed over thousands of years. It's just a sign. What's worse, it's like a little crow being caught and forcibly carved with a bloody word. But the word engraved is "love". In addition, it took a full year and a half of psychological counseling, a year and a half of returning to normal life, and now Ji Silu suddenly appears again and disrupts Xiu Yue's life? Xiu Yue is too mentally healthy. Picking up garbage is what people who lack love do.

I can only say that the second cultivation is better than the first cultivation. I actually don't care whether I change my attack or not, because currently there is nothing better than holding a grudge... The original intention of holding a grudge is to protect the moon. It is normal for readers to have emotional outbursts at some points of misunderstanding and conflict. When you read a novel, you rarely control your emotions. However, I hope the author has a good idea of ​​whether the novel is good or not, and whether it has dramatic tension. Don't weaken the character of the recipient in order to save the reader just because everyone says he wants to change the attack. This is not balancing, and balancing does not mean cutting off a tall person. What I look at is the plot and the flow of the entire article.

It's pretty cool. It would be better if there were more extras.

I feel like it ended quickly after the last revision, which still affected the author's state. After that, I suddenly fell in love, suddenly got together, suddenly ended, suddenly went back, suddenly fell in love, suddenly lost my memory, everything was so sudden. I hope the author will work hard for his next article.

It looks good, why isn't it a big hit?

I felt so happy when I saw the description of roses in the last paragraph!!!

May I ask, how about deleting the highlights and completing the pure love attack? Do you have to be scumbag at one moment and write pure love and soulful attack without any brains at the same time? What are you doing? I originally suggested that if you don't know how to practice, then don't practice it. After practicing it, I am speechless. Let's take a look at the master's handwriting. It has always been emphasized that Lin is the guide in the tower and has the mission of protecting human beings. But let him show it. I am really speechless.

When I saw that sentence, I admit that I felt really good. The author wrote it very well. I hope that Shou won't really like the attack too quickly. I'll give him a little punishment.