A revised version.
Posted separately because I can't keep everything organized, the chapters need sorting, and I need a place to archive this version.
I changed some of the setting, added background and content, smoothed out some of the twists, and brought certain emotions and ideas into sharper focus.
But please note that this is still a first-person story, and it has all the characteristics that first-person stories tend to have.
I'll upload it in batches, and progress will be very slow. Don't wait for it.
Theme: Never give up hope
Let me tell you my thoughts after reading 2.0. In this step, I have filled in some holes that were not filled in the first step. For example, in the sound wave perspective of the first part, when it comes to static electricity, I will recite the "Apostle Covenant" to myself at certain moments. However, this part was not written in the first part, but it was written in the second part, and then I felt that it changed a lot. , One connection is the communication process between him and Shockwave. In the first part, the communication process with him gave me a kind of formality. It was very tough. I felt that I must become a student of Shockwave. This feeling was that he wanted to put his status a little too low, so I deleted it here. Some unnecessary dialogues with Shockwave make it appear that Static is more decisive and self-interested (not a compliment, I really like Static's egoism). And in the same movie, we can feel that Static is very tired. It's obvious that he is a hard-working worker, and he can die if he wants. It feels like it's okay to be alive (but that's not the case, she wants to live too) and the emotional line between him and Sound Wave feels okay. Speaking of the first part written from Sonic's perspective, I think it's so funny. When combined with the previous ones, it turns out that the inner drama of Sound Wave when he looks very cold is so full? There is also Little Moon, this nickname. When I finished writing the appearance of Overlord in the first part, I didn't even mention this thing, but I finally wrote the second part. It feels so cute. Generally speaking, the second part has a better twist than the first part, and it also adds some foreshadowing, as well as this static old friend who never appeared in the first part. It was not mentioned (it might have been mentioned, but I didn't see it) that he and Soundwave were together, which gave me the feeling that, well, how should I put it, all the work of the Decepticons was left to them. I felt that these two people were almost exhausted. Anyway, I really like the plot of Static, the conflicting psychology when facing gratitude, and how to say the kind of Skyfire? I'm a little grateful to him, but I feel very threatened, and static electricity is really smart, don't always belittle yourself, haven't you noticed? You can learn knowledge, and you will be able to do it all as long as you learn it, and you will be able to do a little bit of everything, and his modification of the wing. Anyway, I like it very much. The anti-prevention section is really good, and there are 50 little things about Static in the first part. One of them is that Static easily believed others in the past. This can be seen from the conversation between him and the Overlord in the last picture (so the author, haven't you updated it yet?). Also, I remember that the person who appeared after the first part thought it was an illusion because he was the only one who could see it. And the condition of his body, who can survive without the fire? I hope the author can explain this to me. Author, I'm waiting for you to update. Hurry up and follow the plot. I'm looking forward to it [Okay, I'll give you my personal understanding. If there's anything wrong, please point it out and make sure it's right. Thank you for your help. But don't scold me, don't scold me, I'm very fragile] Then the author will give me an update quickly [crawling around, crawling in darkness, then standing up and going crazy, shouting for the author's update]
Soundwave, you don't have a wife like this (pointing)
"My body is as strong and unyielding as my soul" Hahahahaha this is so funny
From now on, I am a static pusher!!!
No doubt you are an angel
…Does the author still write?
"Ji" is a big thorn in the side of the author - "borrow"
Refreshing it for the Nth time, I found that [Star Eye][Star Eye][Star Eye][Star Eye] has been updated.
I'm stupid! Can anyone tell me who this person is -
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