Boiling Water and White Tea

For me personally, it's a bit high to open and move, and the writing in some places at the back is a bit messy, but overall it's okay and can be read. It's a hundred times stronger than many writings that write Shou as very strong at the beginning, but then inexplicably start to weaken Shou's force value after attacking. Then, before Gong differentiates into A (although he is suppressing his own differentiation), it is really touching to feel that I will go against my instinct to love you!

It's a sweet article that will make you feel better after reading it. I would like to thank the author's wife for her patience in writing this story. As an old feudal who is keen on AO matching, I have seen too many O players pretending to be A. For the first time when watching the attack, I deliberately played B first and then switched to A. It's quite interesting, and I really like the emotional line in the early stage: the one being attacked is defenseless, but the desire to attack is raging, but it is also entangled in all kinds of ways. It is very emotional and full of sexual tension. I also really like the juvenile feel in the novel. Especially when Gong Shou went to Beijing for the first time to take the wujing test, his youthful emotions, reckless spirit, and sparkling dreams were combined very cleverly. There is also a micro-group portrait of a group of seven people who are noisy and do not know each other without fighting. Even if some unrealistic and unreasonable chuuniness arises, my aunt will choose to accept and appreciate her with a smile because of this young man's passion and fantasy of venturing into the world. It seems that the author's wife is a newbie, so allow me to provide some feedback from a personal perspective. The whole novel mainly shapes the emotional tension between the two from three aspects: the first is the ABO world setting, the second is the conflict in the original family, and the third is the natural development of high school. The first point of the article that attracted me to read the most, especially the part about attacking B first and then A. This aspect of rendering can be strengthened in the copywriting and early stages of the article to attract attention and increase the number of views. Secondly, the third point is the New Year study tour for the Sports Games, which is carried out one link after another in a very reasonable and rhythmic manner. But the second point falls slightly into the cliché. Although it is inevitable to advance the plot (even the popular campus original novel must use tension), but perhaps the length of the interaction between the supporting characters can be reduced, so that the text can focus on the emotions of attack and suffering. At the same time, the pretentious family background is a bit exaggerated, especially in the later part of the novel when the story is about being attacked in a different place, which makes people a little embarrassed, and also weakens (in my opinion) the advantage of this article being refreshing and clean. In addition, from the perspective of depicting micro-group portraits, the two or three little boys in the group of seven have somewhat homogeneous personalities and lack character arcs. Just some feedback, no offense intended, hope not to be taken as condescending writing guidance qaq In short, I really like the theme of boiled water and white tea in the novel. Among the numerous rose, cedar, and icefield pheromones, white water seems bland but elegant and refined. I also like to accompany the young people in the text to grow up among the flowers blooming and falling, from magnolia to osmanthus. The ending of "Spreading Flowers" is a very beautiful story. Thank you to the author for your hard work www

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