The Second Son of the Richest Man in Time Travel, the Whole Family Is a Crazy Villain

Oh my god, I kind of don't understand. Who is the male protagonist? Didn't he come here a long time ago? It's too miserable. What a wonderful story I promised. Big [crying] [crying] [crying]

This chapter is so uncomfortable. The author is trying to write a short story, but it actually has 500,000 words. Many descriptions are too full, and it feels like there is not much information in it at a glance. The personalities of the several male characters are too similar. I personally thought that group portraits only look good when people with different personalities are together [poor]. The plot progress is a bit slow and the plot is a bit watery. Some of the descriptions are quite graphic, perhaps because the dramatic conflicts are not dramatic enough, and the group portraits lack chemistry. [Holding fists]

My teacher, why are your writing skills so good? ! ! I want to follow you forever

Well, everyone looks like a fake now

Okay, I finally saw the attributes of the group pet, but here's the truth [crying]

So what is the Demon Emperor? How did Ah Qi and Hope meet? What level is ninth level? Is there anyone who can help answer this question?

I feel that the overall logic is a little lacking. My sister's emotional changes are a bit sudden. Many things are not explained clearly, or the logic is not so strong. The final ending is also surprising, a little nonsensical, and it feels like he is being forced. The overall framework is quite good and the world view is relatively complete.

It ended so suddenly. I thought at least my parents would know about it. Will there be any extras?

Damn, there are too many mysteries here, right?

But this theme is really beautiful. Yeah yeah yeah [spread flowers][spread flowers][spread flowers]

"Spy Love" is a big bug for the author~ Deep love

Why can Suo Yu survive? I don't understand.

Life is easy hahahahahahahaha

"Yes wx..." This is a big bug for the author~ Congratulations, brilliant writing