When the Gods Fall in Love

I have been reading the article for many years and have been collecting it since it was pre-received. I just want to leave a comment. The setting of this article is very good, and it really poked me. However, there was a bit of copywriting fraud in the later period. The author focused on the development of the world view. The framework was too big, but too little was written. The length should be extended to more than a hundred chapters, which is more suitable. Ideals are wonderful, but reality may not necessarily achieve the actual results. This is also a common problem among many small authors. The world view is set too grandly, making it difficult to finish in the end. I read it intermittently in the past, and on the last day I finished reading fifty chapters, which made me a little confused and difficult to read, and I didn't quite understand the ending. The early stage is very good. The interaction between the Godly Attendant and Carrie is very sweet and pokes fun at me. The character portrayal is also very good. It can be seen that the author's level is still very high and admirable. There are a lot of things I want to comment on, but I am too lazy to type due to tendonitis. Overall, the flaws do not hide the flaws, and it is very good-looking. The author is very suitable for the inhumanity of the outside world and the structure of the world view of the small town of Ximan. This kind of thing is very unpopular, and the author can be regarded as generating power for love. Looking forward to my wife's new article.

Ahhhhhhh, congratulations to the wife for reaching the ending! ! ! My wife is amazing! ! ! Do you want to continue writing the next chapter? I want to watch Spiders and Dungeons or Circus of the Absurd. If my wife plans to continue writing but doesn't know which one to write about, can she consider these two first? [Please][Please][Please]

Then Mia must be so angry? The heart I wanted to give to Lily was taken away by my love rival!

I'd rather see the life of Lily and the male protagonist, but there's too little of it. It feels a bit group-like, and I'm tired of following the plot.

Why do you feel like the Moth God has become a villain?

Nice looking, very novel world view [Calico cat head]

It's also from the beginning to the end. It's good to have a beginning and an end. I'm very happy to have spent this time together [rose] [rose] [rose]

Next article I want to see the clown circus, looking forward to it (✧◡✧)

Doesn't that mean that Lily is in a very dangerous situation in the movie theater now?

It can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into this worldview. It takes a lot of space just to lay out the worldview. However, the space for Carrie and the male protagonists seems a bit insufficient, which is still a bit regretful. Obviously, the emotional lines in the previous books are very good, so can I wish to have a few more extra chapters? [Hold my thighs]