Shirakawa Thinks the Foxes Who Play Volleyball Are Not to Be Messed With

Ah? ! Finished? ? ? ! ! ! No need to ahhhhhhhh tonic, I think the extra short story is so short.

Curiosity and interest are precursors to liking, Tsukishima

Hahahahaha, Haruka ran away in fear that his character's name would be revealed, but he quietly followed him without telling her his character's name. Only Yu and Ji really stupidly thought that Haruka was going to the toilet [Caidog]

Anxious [crying] Teacher, can this have an ending?

Since I am fully booked, I am speaking a little more seriously. This is a slightly thin protagonist. It can be seen that he has a strong mind, loves to be clean, has a fanatical single push for grinding the solitary claws, and has a heart-throb physique. First, I didn't write very carefully about the emotional journey of the game where I was passionate about grinding, so it seems that my fanatical love for grinding is a little flat? (Just so you can understand, I can't describe it) Second, the physique of a heartthrob is just a physique. His charm, such as what he said, what he did, and his attitude towards some things and people, were not carefully written, so what he showed was a very thin heartthrob, which did not reflect the charm of the character itself. The third is that the protagonist's heartthrob physique and interaction with other characters will affect the competition and practice. This is what I dislike the most in the whole article. I have a filter for the characters in the sports series. I think they should be undistracted during training and competition., I don't insist on it even once, but too much interaction between the protagonist and the character affects training and competition, and after many reminders from the senior in the team (Kita Shinsuke), there is still not much improvement. I think this point also makes me dissatisfied. Fourth, the description of the protagonist's game is a bit sparse and thin. The protagonist is obviously very powerful, and he can see the details and habits of his opponent in a short time (I think this is really amazing, especially when looking at Xiao Zao, I can't actually tell what his expression is), but the author did not write down the protagonist's power in detail. In official competitions and practice There are always various reasons and reasons for the protagonist to hide his foundation in the game (I will say this, I think the protagonist is well written, and it is better not to be affected by others. For example, there is a chapter where I saw the grinding, and then felt the phantom pain in the hand leading to a mistake. I don't like this very much). It feels that the entire book is almost an emotional description, and it is all a Shura field. The fifth is the OOC of the original characters. Of course, my requirements for OOC are very broad. After all, fans must be OOC, so I will just briefly talk about it, such as his deception (I think it is deception, the idol relies on the fans' love and love to trick and threaten the young fans to stay with him). I don't think grinding will do this (if I am wrong about the character of grinding, please leave a comment) Testify against me below), as well as Miya Yu, Miyaji and Kakuna Rintaro. I don't know much about Inarizaki's characters, but I still think that they will not touch the protagonist when they like him without the protagonist knowing it, and then refuse to let him go when the protagonist almost expressly refuses. (Same as above, if I am wrong about Inarizaki's character, please prove me in the comments). To sum up, I think this book is relatively average and the author still has a lot of room for improvement. Finally, if there is anything wrong with what I said, please correct me, but don't scold me. This is my first time writing a long review, and I typed it up while thinking about it. It is inevitable that there will be mistakes or omissions or wrong thinking. Please forgive me and the author. Please don't criticize the original character. The protagonist and the author are both innocent. The original character is not guilty. The protagonist is a very cute baby. I am also very grateful to the author for his willingness to produce food. After all, the author worked very hard to finish the story and brought us a cute child like Shirakawa Haruka. I think it is worthy of gratitude. I have finished writing my review. Thank you all for watching. If you feel that my review has too many subjective elements, or the criticism of the protagonist is unfair, you can delete the review directly. I would like to apologize for this first. In fact, I usually read one chapter and buy one. This book was on a plane yesterday and I couldn't buy it in airplane mode. I liked it so much that I bought the whole book in advance. I read it for another day today and was a little disappointed with the whole book, so I wrote a long review. Thanks to the author for bringing us Haruka! See you next time I read the book. I hope to see a cuter, better, and fuller protagonist then!

I never thought that [dog head] Xiaohei would also have stocks?

The author's writing is very good, but I personally feel that the protagonist's creation is a bit weak. There are a lot of interactions throughout the whole process but the key point is a bit lost [poor] and the overall plot rhythm of the full text is a bit flat. I hope the next book written by the teacher can be written better [make me healthy] (rational suggestions, all are my personal opinions, if there are any bad things, you can delete them, and if there are any wrong things, please feel free to comment)

[Chigua] I think the North team should have been supervised a long time ago. It would be bad if it affects the game.

The greatest sentence in the world... Wait for another chapter...!

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