"Dear passengers, welcome aboard Train M99. We will now go over some important instructions..."
A mysterious train. A group of passionate young people. The moment they board, whether they stay or leave is no longer up to them.
The ticket is the riddle: an ice sculpture, a shipwreck in the deep sea, or a lovely silhouette beneath the peony pavilion... How many stops must they make before they reach the end?
Dramatic rising star x cunning young man
A bickering couple who join forces
Fantasy and reality intertwine, while ideals and desires clash
They grow through trials of ghosts, gods, and the human heart, without abandoning their original aspirations
Theme: Having seen life's many hardships, never lose the fire of youth. There will always be people and ideals worth being sincere, brave, and trusting for.
The writing is quite good, but maybe it would be better to leave a blank line between each paragraph, so that it looks more comfortable.
The opening is full of people's names, which I really can't remember, and the sections are too densely packed, so it's quite difficult to read, to be honest.
The highlights are all for the male protagonist.
"Both ends" are a big thorn in the side of the author~ day
"Myself" is a huge thorn in the side of the author~
"Where" is a big bug for the author~ there
Congratulations on the completion, it's time to start killing!