The Unrequited Love Diary of Pathetic Little An

In fact, magnificent waves, twists and turns, and gorgeous rhetoric are just a way of writing. But that doesn't mean a good book has to be that way. There are so many ancient and modern classics that are written in a straightforward manner, which sometimes penetrates the readers' hearts better. The plain narrative style makes readers feel that the story is as real as if it is happening around them, and the first-person narrative gives readers a sense of involvement, making them happy and sad with the protagonist. This book makes good use of the first person and narrates a very ordinary love story in a simple and unpretentious way. It is not a pile of words, but it is enough to impress people. Many first-person books ignore or fail to describe the personalities and personalities of supporting characters. However, this article also hides the transformation of Xiaoye's feelings from understanding to passive acceptance. In the end, he didn't even like Xiao An's makeup. He fell out with his family because of Xiao An and tried his best to please Xiao An's family. Love without knowing it is enough to show that Xiaoye cannot define love and cannot say that he loves Xiaoan, but in fact, his love has already been deeply rooted. Xiaoye's love for Xiaoan is definitely no less than that of Xiaoan. Her love is reflected in every action, not in her mouth or heart. And Xiao An's love is more hidden in his heart. The article uses Xiao An as the first perspective, which is a clever move. This allows readers to know Xiao An's emotions through the first person. If the extra chapter is completed, we will be able to understand Xiaoye's inner journey more directly. Whether it is when Xiao An chooses to break off the relationship after her grades decline but secretly inquires about it, when Xiao An asks for a kiss for the first time, or when she is injured in a rental house after being broken up, during various quarrels, or when Xiao An is beaten by her father, these can all be presented through Xiao Ye's perspective. I'm really looking forward to the extra chapter, and I hope the author can finish it. I also think the author's writing is very, very good, even though not many people in Jinbai are willing to read it. A good book does not lie in the writing style, the vocabulary or the plot ideas are amazing. Sometimes the author writes an ordinary love story with ordinary writing style. In Jinbai, a place where the type of works is becoming more and more clichéd and more and more catering to some groups with incorrect views, it has a feeling of returning to nature, and people can't help but bless and move their love story. Lily's works should also depict such a love story with twists and turns, opposition, incomprehension, and touching moments. (At the same time, as the author said, it is too "kind". The conflicts between Xiaoan and Xiaoye are just minor conflicts. There is no unforgettable resentment and misunderstanding, no bloodshed, and no third party intervention. The parents' opposition and abuse are only lightly touched on. , Most of them are conflicts between the protagonists, which will be resolved within one chapter. And with the author's level, it can be written more sharply, making the readers cry more and emotionally affected by the first-person perspective. However, this is a good thing for me who is an insulator in writing.) Finally, I hope that the author can continue to create. I will be the most loyal reader [Xingxingyan]. I wish you good health and smooth work.

... Can I say that they are very suitable for SM?

Are you still writing extras? I always feel that Xiaoye's perspective is more interesting, especially during the breakup period, I really want to see Xiaoye

Wow, the writing is super good. I'm surprised it's not popular. She's become a niche girl [Xingxingyan]. The writing is really surprisingly good. I really like this kind of Japanese light novel writing style [Xingxingyan].

Is there anything else? Teacher (reaching out his hand), I'm curious about Xiaoye's psychological journey during the breakup.

I particularly like the third-person side story that complements the first-person perspective of the main text!!!

Let's do more extras, I really want to know Xiaoye's mental journey

In fact, magnificent waves, twists and turns, and gorgeous rhetoric are just a way of writing. But that doesn't mean a good book has to be that way. There are so many ancient and modern classics that are written in a straightforward manner, which sometimes penetrates the readers' hearts better. The plain narrative style makes readers feel that the story is as real as if it is happening around them, and the first-person narrative gives readers a sense of involvement, making them happy and sad with the protagonist. This book makes good use of the first person and narrates a very ordinary love story in a simple and unpretentious way. It is not a pile of words, but it is enough to impress people. Many first-person books ignore or fail to describe the personalities and personalities of supporting characters. However, this article also hides the transformation of Xiaoye's feelings from understanding to passive acceptance. In the end, he didn't even like Xiao An's makeup. He fell out with his family because of Xiao An and tried his best to please Xiao An's family. Love without knowing it is enough to show that Xiaoye cannot define love and cannot say that he loves Xiaoan, but in fact, his love has already been deeply rooted. Xiaoye's love for Xiaoan is definitely no less than that of Xiaoan. Her love is reflected in every action, not in her mouth or heart. And Xiao An's love is more hidden in his heart. The article uses Xiao An as the first perspective, which is a clever move. This allows readers to know Xiao An's emotions through the first person. If the extra chapter is completed, we will be able to understand Xiaoye's inner journey more directly. Whether it is when Xiao An chooses to break off the relationship after her grades decline but secretly inquires about it, when Xiao An asks for a kiss for the first time, or when she is injured in a rental house after being broken up, during various quarrels, or when Xiao An is beaten by her father, these can all be presented through Xiao Ye's perspective. I'm really looking forward to the extra chapter, and I hope the author can finish it. I also think the author's writing is very, very good, even though not many people in Jinbai are willing to read it. A good book does not lie in the writing style, the vocabulary or the plot ideas are amazing. Sometimes the author writes an ordinary love story with ordinary writing style. In Jinbai, a place where the type of works is becoming more and more clichéd and more and more catering to some groups with incorrect views, it has a feeling of returning to nature, and people can't help but bless and move their love story. Lily's works should also depict such a love story with twists and turns, opposition, incomprehension, and touching moments. (At the same time, as the author said, it is too "kind". The conflicts between Xiaoan and Xiaoye are just minor conflicts. There is no unforgettable resentment and misunderstanding, no bloodshed, and no third party intervention. The parents' opposition and abuse are only lightly touched on. , Most of them are conflicts between the protagonists, which will be resolved within one chapter. And with the author's level, it can be written more sharply, making the readers cry more and emotionally affected by the first-person perspective. However, this is a good thing for me who is an insulator in writing.) Finally, I hope that the author can continue to create. I will be the most loyal reader [Xingxingyan]. I wish you good health and smooth work.

There is a delicious detail in this paragraph 😍. In the text, Ye finished the phone call and checked around the house after entering the house, from the living room to the kitchen, probably to confirm whether An Lan spent New Year's Eve alone, and she would just happen to find An Lan's leftovers on New Year's Eve. 🐶

Possessiveness is a symptom of love 🤷